Yeah! v2 of Raudr. Basically I upgraded everything :)
About this creation
So, here's a little bio:
Name: Raudr Gender: Male Species: Matoran Race: Ne-Matoran Occupation: Mercenary Toa. Killing remaning Makutas, sometimes. Title(s): Toa, Brother, The Wierd One, Survivor, that metal guy. Element: Magnetism, and a little bit of Iron powers because of his mother. Mask: Kanohi Pakari, the Mask of Strength. Bio: Raudr is the son of the only survivors of the "genocide" the Makuta did with Ne-Matorans and Fe-Matorans. (btw, Ne- comes from magNEtism)
No-one knows how that matoran managed to escape, but somehow he did.
However, he encountered a female Fe-Matoran. (Yes, female: in MY bionicle universe there are no gender-element limits, so male toas of water and female toas of fire are common.)
After years, they had a son: Raudr.(Yes it work differently from the canon way. No kaitagenesis, also :P) Then they had to escape to Bara Magna, and Teridax was killed, but Raudr parents were also. So he was left alone... well, not totally, he still had a friend.
His life as a "kid" is a little bit unknown, as well as how he became a toa.
Still considered a teenager by human measures, Raudr's life has made him a skilled fighter and assassin, as well as a technician. All the tribes on Bara Magna ask for him, despite his age. He now lives with his friend Chandra, wandering in Spherus Magna, doing various jobs or missions.
On to the pictures!
I have to say that I really like how he came out this time, especially the body. It's a lot less "strange" than his first version. And yes, the hands are the same of Therion, because I don't have black exo-force arms, but as soon as I have some, I'll upgrade them.
His back. As you can see, you can strap on his weapons.
His torso. Really like how it came out :) And there's even an heartlight!
His legs. I think the design belongs to Shadowgear6335.
Anyway, I always loved that shin piece :3
Showing his new weapon... A revolving grenade launcher! It even has a removable and spinning mag. It'll have it's own page.
Just the grenade launcher...
Well, hope you enjoyed! I will soon post this kinda misterious "Chandra", as well as a few technic I have built sometimes ago.
See you later!
Raudr looks great. I love the armor, weapons, color scheme, and the custom limbs (a mark of creativity in my book). How do you do it man? I got a lot to learn from you.
I also heard that this won a Self-MOC contest here on MOCPages. I'm not surprised, this is one of the best Toa I've seen on the pages.
Well i'll be....This is one of those mocs that is just nearly perfect!! First, the gun. Very complex-looking and astounding. Then....basically the legs. Bulky and perfect! And, of course, evcerything else is nice! Overall, Raudr the Weird One? More like Raudr the cool one!! Your Score: 9.75/10
Your score: 9.5/10. This is the best entry I've seen so far. I love the bulky and compact shape of the MOC and you did an excellent job designing his body, legs, and arms. The custom hands could not be better. I will not complain about the non-custom head: That piece was exactly what you were looking for. My one problem is the slight disproportionate look of the lower body on him. If I could name my favorite part of this creation, it would be the gun. Excellent work, keep it up!
Both the build and the overall design are great,but the proportions are sort of weird(thigs are too smal) and I must say I do prefer his first version for some reason.Still,this is very good!Keep it up mate!
Allora, allora...da cosa comincio? Prima di tutto, ciao! É da mesi che non ti vedo su mocpages! Poi, questa é la tua ultima creazione, molto bello, anche se devo dire che io personalmente preferivo la prima versione del tuo selfmoc, perché io adoro il nero. Comunque, il design dell'arma é fantastico, davvero bello, come tutta la creazione! Bravo!
When I opened this page, scrolled down, and saw the first full-body pic, my face almost melted off... You got the proportions dead-on! Not only that, but he looks great and he flows really well. Good job!
As soon as I saw the picture with his grenade launcher the word "KA-BOOOM!" appeared in my head in a scottish accent. >.< He looks absolutely brilliant, very good use of parts for the armour. It flows very well, makes him look tough, and the build doesn't have any gaps either, which is always nice.
EPIC! I love the torso design, and the legs look excellent! The grenade luancher is amazing, one of the best weapons I've seen! And I think the hands look great the way they are, Exo-Force fingers would be a little too thin.
Very fantastic new design! The body looks fantastic now, the Inika shoulder armor and the Metru foot work well together. He now looks very bulky and strong, the hand design is very amazing, too! The color sheme is the same good-looking as it was before. I kinda miss his old mercenary-look, but this heroish one is very nice. Excellent work on him!