You may see these two people as The IRM and Witch Doctor. This is not the IRM. There is a powerful unknown creature hiding inside the Dead Shell of the IRM. Witch Doctor is Being employed by the strange being. Employed to kill the Toa Racta!
About this creation

IRM: WITCH DOCTOR, YOU WILL TAKE THREE INFANTS AND HOLD THEM PRISONER. THE TOA RACTA SHOULD INVESTIGATE SO SEND OUT A FAKE DISTRESS CALL TO THEM AND NO BODY ELSE. AS THEY INVESTIGATE PICK THEM OFF ONE BY ONE. ONCE THE MISSION IS TERMINATED, YOU SHALL COLLECT YOUR PAY.

Witch Doctor: 10 Tons of Quaza. Don't worry, Mr "IRM", They are as good as dead...!
MEANWHILE

Leka: Thanks for comming Raxonax. How are they?
Raxonax: It's bad. I can't find anyway to wake them up. The Good news is that It's not Fatal. They'll both get through. It will take a while for them to wake up.

Benu: Guys! We just got a distress signal from three matoran. They were cut off, so i think someone took them. Galika and Korapa Are down at the entrance waiting for us.

Leka: you comin'?
Onika: Well I can't! Corroder smashed my claw yesterday, I haven't got any weapons! I'll catch up with you if i can find something.
Leka: Ok.
LATER

Galika: It's so Dark I can barely see anything! I think That we Should take one look around, see if we find anything, If not, We Will come back and rest the night.
Korapa: Sounds ok.



Galika: MMMMFFF?!!

Benu: No sign of Galika?

Leka: I'm Going out to find her!
Korapa: It's ok. You stay here. Your worried, you mind will to busy to notice anything.

Korapa: see you guys.
Benu: You better come back!

Korapa: Galika? Hello?

???: I'm Not Galika, but My company will be fine!
Korapa: Who are you?! Show yourself!!

???: Right here!
MORNING

Leka: Korapa Bloody dissapears too! What happened to them?!

Benu: maybe He's still looking. It's a big place, Racta Magna, You know!

Leka: ...Or it's something to do with him!!


Benu: Come on!

Leka: There is no sign of the Big guy. but look!

Leka: Korapa, Galika and the three matoran!

Galika: MMMMMNNNNNFFFF!!!!
Leka: What is it, my love?

Galika: RUN! IT'S A TRAP!
Leka: What?!

Witch Doctor: AHAHAHAHA! She's right, you Know!!!

Witch Doctor: Didn't you realise the Message was FAKE?!

...and you walked right into it!!! MUAHAHAHA!

Witch Doctor: now! Give yourself up now! Or every single one of these prisoners Dies! Right in front of your Eyes!

...Your choice! Choose Wisely MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!
To Be Continued Next Issue: Hopeless struggle?
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January 7, 2012 |
Such an epic cliffhanger! Great work so far man :D Can't wait to see more :) |
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December 31, 2011 |
Quoting The One Who Needs Pieces
O_O oh man! Don't forget about my new story maybe today or tomorrow.
I won't! I can't wait! |
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December 31, 2011 |
Quoting Daniel Janči
WOW!!! This is good!!!
Glad you like :P |
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December 31, 2011 |
Quoting sniperray213 Ultimate Sniper
awesome :D
thanks :D |
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December 31, 2011 |
Quoting S.T.S The Forgotten
Awesome! I hope the next chapter gets even BETTER! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Oh, wait,I wasn't supposed to laugh..... rrriiighhht. :P
Its Something that catches on from hearing Witch Doctor laugh too many times MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!! |
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December 30, 2011 |
O_O oh man! Don't forget about my new story maybe today or tomorrow. |
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December 30, 2011 |
WOW!!! This is good!!! |
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December 30, 2011 |
awesome :D |
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December 30, 2011 |
Awesome! I hope the next chapter gets even BETTER! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Oh, wait,I wasn't supposed to laugh..... rrriiighhht. :P |
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