My self moc, Zemph.
I apologise for the pictures, they were taken in my bathroom (no where else had decent lighting).
About this creation
Name: Zemph
Species: Matoran/Toa
Alignment: Chaotic good.
Titles: Leader, Boss, The Ace of spades :3
Occupation: Blacksmith (formerly), Leader of his band of mercenaries.
Element: Chance (the ability to slightly alter environmental factors)
Mask power: Stamina/Strength
Weapons: "Lady luck", dart launcher, knife and claw.
Moc status: Assembled and awesome
Story: coming soon.
He has the pakari, This one is from Onua mata, my first bionicle.
His torso with Heartlight (more like collarbone light)
His Wolf's head pendant was originally going to be like my own wolf paw pendant, but it became a Wolf's head as a nod to Wolf, Toa of luck, who's self moc's element is very similar to my own.
The back, kinda bare.
His sword, Lady luck
His concealed dart launcher.
Him with his claw "activated"
His knife and claw
Poster shot to be edited.
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July 25, 2012 |
Quoting Potu ,the half Toa
Good self-moc
Thank you, I think your mocs are awesome too, but then again I have a thing for short mocs :P |
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July 24, 2012 |
Good self-moc |
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May 27, 2012 |
This moc is great: Gant claw, Giant sword, and cool elbow idea. Only thing I dislike is the inika torso. |
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May 27, 2012 |
Like the sword and custom bits. Cheers! |
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Your Score: 7.5/10. This is a good MOC, it's well made and good to look at. The contrasting color scheme is a little tough to look at, but I like it. The thing that makes me think its not really great is the fact that his structure is not very well covered up and it makes him look a little unfinished. I'd suggest using white hero factory armor on him to smooth out the wrinkles a bit. |
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May 13, 2012 |
Quoting Chaz Christinson
Das gefallt mir: that pleases me: i like it! He does have some wierd builing techniqeus but i actually really respect that. I think a lot of the mocs on thos site are too similar to each other, though i am guilty of that myself. Good for you for trying something new!
Thank you, I wish I could get the current Zemph up, he is now 90% custom, with more "weird building techniques" :P and I found a replacement for that gold piece.
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May 6, 2012 |
Das gefallt mir: that pleases me: i like it! He does have some wierd builing techniqeus but i actually really respect that. I think a lot of the mocs on thos site are too similar to each other, though i am guilty of that myself. Good for you for trying something new! |
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May 2, 2012 |
Good entry! I think that there are too many colors though, try to eliminate the gold on the arms and some other colors. He also has some parts that are a bit... Odd... Score: 5.75/10 |
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May 2, 2012 |
Alright, this is good. Unfortunatley not new, but good. Arms could use some work but the body is unique enough to say "this moc is pretty good". Overall, that's really all I have to say. It's just good. Not bad, not amazing, but good. Your Score: 5.5/10 |
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March 21, 2012 |
Quoting Silenthunt Productions
Just a friendly reminder, your poster needs to be up in 2 days.
I know, I'll have it done soon |
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Just a friendly reminder, your poster needs to be up in 2 days. |
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March 3, 2012 |
Cool! I like the legs. |
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January 28, 2012 |
Really Cool! : ) |
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January 11, 2012 |
cool! |
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January 11, 2012 |
Quoting Mudslide Master of metru nui
Awsome self moc
( i have no idea what to say more he is great)
Thanks, Mudslide is awesome too! |
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January 11, 2012 |
Awsome self moc
( i have no idea what to say more he is great) |
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January 8, 2012 |
Awesome self-moc. Nice and buff. |
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January 7, 2012 |
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January 7, 2012 |
Thanks so much man, it's AWESOME! |
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January 7, 2012 |
Sweet Self-MOC. :) |
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January 7, 2012 |
Quoting RazorClaw (Skrall Razor)
Cool self moc!
Thank you. |
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January 6, 2012 |
Cool self moc! |
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January 6, 2012 |
Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ?
SAY WHAT.8 YEARS.AND YOU DON'T CALL YOU SELF A LEGENDARY MOCER.YOU ROCK.I should Get People to see this Moc.if you want
It's up to you, I'm happy it's finally here. |
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January 6, 2012 |
SAY WHAT.8 YEARS.AND YOU DON'T CALL YOU SELF A LEGENDARY MOCER.YOU ROCK.I should Get People to see this Moc.if you want |
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January 6, 2012 |
Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ?
This Moc is almost Perfect.Only the random gold piece but I'm should you can buy on eBay with a stars Takanuva set.so i guess you knew about mocpages before and looked at the best of them and perfected this moc.i can never get them right.there is always a problem.since you rock at mocs(i can call you a Legendary mocer already) can you tell me what would make Demonon( here is the link http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/302830 ) better
Thank you very much, I have known of the site yes, But I have been mocing 8 years now, So I should have some experience :P I wouldn't call myself a legendary moccer though, I don't try hard enough to be. That advice'll be posted very soon, I'm just taking a look now. |
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January 6, 2012 |
as for lighting just use a lamp ,small light or any light that suits the scene. |
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January 6, 2012 |
This Moc is almost Perfect.Only the random gold piece but I'm should you can buy on eBay with a stars Takanuva set.so i guess you knew about mocpages before and looked at the best of them and perfected this moc.i can never get them right.there is always a problem.since you rock at mocs(i can call you a Legendary mocer already) can you tell me what would make Demonon( here is the link http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/302830 ) better |
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January 2, 2012 |
Quoting Steve The Squid (back from vacation!)
Well all those custom limbs are interesting to say the least! That dart launcher really is a great idea, as is the wolf head necklace! Just needs some more pictures, like the feet, etc. But it's a great start on mocpages!
Thank you, The custom arms Were made that way when I ran out of ball joints and at the time I had no HF 2.0. |
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I like the lower legs, they look good. The custom arms are nice. Nice MOC! |
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January 2, 2012 |
Well all those custom limbs are interesting to say the least! That dart launcher really is a great idea, as is the wolf head necklace! Just needs some more pictures, like the feet, etc. But it's a great start on mocpages! |
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January 1, 2012 |
Quoting Ben Cossy
Nice man! He looks great! Love his torso design :D I think maybe making his arm design a little less cluttered would be good, but other then that he looks great :) Nice work :)
Thanks, The arm clutter is actually being worked on, I'm giving him better gauntlets. |
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January 1, 2012 |
Nice man! He looks great! Love his torso design :D I think maybe making his arm design a little less cluttered would be good, but other then that he looks great :) Nice work :) |
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December 31, 2011 |
Quoting Alien Entity
wow. AWESOME Moc, especially as a first MOC on the site. Besides the random gold piece and the kind of oversized necklace, very good self-MOC overall! :)
blame the random gold piece on stars takanuva, so I'm just gonna say it's a badge of office ;P |
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December 30, 2011 |
wow. AWESOME Moc, especially as a first MOC on the site. Besides the random gold piece and the kind of oversized necklace, very good self-MOC overall! :) |
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December 28, 2011 |
Cool self-moc! That's a nice necklace thing. |
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December 28, 2011 |
excellent nice moc there |
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