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Talonmagic, Master of Air
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My Self MOC!! As well as my first creation!!
About this creation
Name: Talonmagic
Gender: Male
Species: Le-matoran
Element: Air
Title(s): Talonmagic, Talon, brother, airhead, leader
Mask: Kanohi Ulahi, mask of mind manipulation: allows user to control, read, or place thoughts in another mind
Weapon(s): Laser shooting battle axe, twin daggers, wrist saw/blade, explosives
Story: As a matoran, Talonmagic adored two things: knowledge and Toa!! Every day he was either reading a book or watching Toa spare. He dreamed of one day becoming a Toa, and ridding aqua magna of the makuta!! Because of this, Talon was often thought of as a silly bookworm daydreamer, and was often made fun of.

One day while Talon was reading a book on an irrelevant topic, he heard screams of terror outside his hut. When he went outside to see what the problem was, he saw many buildings ablaze and, in the middle of it all, a makuta of fire. His village was under attack!! Most of the matoran sentries were already on the ground dead, and since Talon didnít see a toa in site, he decided to try and defeat this immense monster with what knowledge he had. He frantically looked around for weapons, and then he saw a matoran- sized battle axe, and a lazer gun. He strapped the two together with vines, and made his first weapon ever. He thought back to a book he had once read on battle. He reviewed the strategies and terms in his mind, and then fired a lazer bolt at the makuta. The makuta barely flinched on impact, and then looked in Talonís direction. He began whooping with laughter, but then started screaming in agony when he found a matoran axe blade in his face. He then looked at Talonmagic with an evil glare, for half of his face was taken off by the axe. Then, he swung his giant club at Talon, who in turn jumped away nimbly. The two brawled for awhile, until Talon rose victorious over the mutilated makuta, who now lay on the ground in several pieces. Talon was quite beat up, and since most of his village was pillaged, he started to limp to the next village.

When he arrived at the next village, he collapsed on the medicís door unconscious, not able to go on. When the medic found him lying nearly dead in his doorway, he immediately started patching him up, and took him to the elders of the village. When Talon finally regained consciousness, he found himself surrounded by old turaga, who were conversing with each. When they saw that he was awake, they asked him where he had come from, and how he had gotten so beat up. He told them about the battle with the makuta, and how he had beaten the gigantic beast. They were appalled that a little scrawny bookworm matoran had taken down a giant makuta. Clearly he was gifted with some unnatural power, so they gave him the one toa stone that they had, which then turned the little matoran into a giant and powerful toa!!

Talonmagic was then enlisted to the toa order. After news of his battle reached the counsel, he was immediately accepted into the order. As weapons, he was given a laser shooting battle axe (upon request), twin daggers, and explosives. With these weapons and his newly found air powers, he quickly flew through the ranks of the toa, so much to where the point he became the leader of many toa teams.

After the formation of spherus magna, Talonmagic began ridding the planet of the remnants of the makuta, until the crisis of Valki nui. He was then enlisted to become the leader of the Toa valki, and elite team of toa. He now leads them with wisdom and courage against the newly formed brotherhood of makuta.


lower legs, credit goes to Legofreak for this, and the explosives


upper legs with mounts for daggers


torso


waist


head and upper torso


upper arm


lower arm, credit goes to chaos master for this


Battle Axe!! Credit to connor hoffman for this


Epic


Closer look at axe


Twin daggers!!


epicsauce


pondering epicness...



Thanks for veiwing!! Somtime in the near future, I will be post the toa Valki, and all my other mocs! there is deffinetely more to come!! thanks again! Plz rate and comment!



Comments

 I like it 
  May 15, 2012
Awesomasticmazing! But it sorta reminds me of Breez 1.0 with the chestplate and mask.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
AWESOME! But I think he should just be called Talon.
 I like it 
  January 21, 2012
AWESOME this is better than my V.3 self moc really cool love all the limbs. Great job definatly adding you as a favorite builder 5/5 :)
 I made it 
  January 7, 2012
Quoting Chains, Toa Of Prisoners AWESOME this is better than my V.3 self moc really cool love all the limbs. Great job definatly adding you as a favorite builder 5/5 :)
Thanks!! I saw your self-moc, are u sure mine is better? :)
 I made it 
  January 7, 2012
Quoting LegoBob 123 Welcome! This is quite a nice MOC, but the mask is pretty feminine, and that torso isn't custom, just sayin' :]
Thanks, but I don't think that the mask is feminine, why do you think I used it?
 I like it 
  January 7, 2012
Welcome! This is quite a nice MOC, but the mask is pretty feminine, and that torso isn't custom, just sayin' :]
 I made it 
  January 6, 2012
Quoting Connor Hoffman Welcome to the pages! You have quite a nice self-MOC for calling yourself a newbie. I expect to see great things from you! I always find I'm pleasently suprised when I see other people incorperating my designs into their creations. :) Also, about the poster you requested, I can (and probably will) Make one for you, but at the moment I am very busy and can't really spare the time, plus a lot of other people are still on the waiting list for posters. Anywhoo, welcome. I hope you enjoy your stay! XD
Thanks so much!!! Yeah, I actually started building with bionicles a long time ago. Thanks for the poster also!! Thanks sooooo much!!
 I like it 
  January 6, 2012
Welcome to the pages! You have quite a nice self-MOC for calling yourself a newbie. I expect to see great things from you! I always find I'm pleasently suprised when I see other people incorperating my designs into their creations. :) Also, about the poster you requested, I can (and probably will) Make one for you, but at the moment I am very busy and can't really spare the time, plus a lot of other people are still on the waiting list for posters. Anywhoo, welcome. I hope you enjoy your stay! XD
 I made it 
  January 5, 2012
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Hey, very nice. Welcome to MOCpages. :D I think you'll do well here. :)
Thanks, and good to see you agian!
 I like it 
  January 5, 2012
Hey, very nice. Welcome to MOCpages. :D I think you'll do well here. :)
 I made it 
  January 4, 2012
Quoting Tor Lund awesome ,one of the best toa of air on the pages!
Thanks!!
 I made it 
  January 4, 2012
Quoting Tor Lund awesome ,one of the best toa of air on the pages!
Thanks!!
 I made it 
  January 4, 2012
Quoting Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night I love him! He has a really nice bulky look to him, which is a welcome change to a toa of air. I can't wait to see later versions, and I hope you can come up with even better designs yourself! Oh, and welcome to the 'pages!
Thanks!! Go HEARTLIGHTS FTW!!
 I made it 
  January 4, 2012
Quoting Lord Oblivion Look who I just found....
Hey old friend, fancy seeing you here
  January 4, 2012
Look who I just found....
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
awesome ,one of the best toa of air on the pages!
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
I love him! He has a really nice bulky look to him, which is a welcome change to a toa of air. I can't wait to see later versions, and I hope you can come up with even better designs yourself! Oh, and welcome to the 'pages!
Talonmagic ~
 I like it 
owen the light assasin
  January 2, 2012
this looks epic
 I made it 
  January 2, 2012
Quoting owen the light assasin this looks epic
Thanks!
 I made it 
  January 2, 2012
Quoting owen the light assasin this looks epic
Thanks!
 I made it 
  January 2, 2012
Quoting Brendan Treloar Awesome self MOC!!!
Thanks Broski!
 I like it 
  January 2, 2012
Awesome self MOC!!!
 I made it 
  January 2, 2012
Quoting Kyle Peckham I saw this on the LEGO Universe forums. My username on there is Commanderkp. Hey, nice to see he's finally on MOCpages! You've been faved! - KP
Cool! I didn't know you were on lego universe, anyway thanks! I'll befriend on lego universe if you want
 I like it 
  January 2, 2012
Good!!!
 I like it 
  January 1, 2012
I saw this on the LEGO Universe forums. My username on there is Commanderkp. Hey, nice to see he's finally on MOCpages! You've been faved! - KP
Talonmagic ~
SaÔdo Dieono
  December 31, 2011
it bad i no like it at all
  December 31, 2011
good job on making it but as crusader and jacobi said that u cant call a custom body with inka torso and name yeah but good job
  December 31, 2011
I like him, HF or not, but the name could use work. the name Talonmagic is kinda, off, for this guy.
 I made it 
  December 31, 2011
Quoting Toa Phosphorus Cool! I love the arms and the design is pretty nice everywhere else too. Good Job.
Thanks! thank you so much!! your feedback is much appreciated! I'm a big fan!
 I made it 
  December 31, 2011
Quoting SaÔdo Dieono it bad i no like it at all
Hmmm... why? it's the hero factory torso isn't it..
 I like it 
  December 31, 2011
Cool! I love the arms and the design is pretty nice everywhere else too. Good Job.
 
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