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Legend of the Legacy (LOL) S1E1: Onward!
About this creation
My first MOComic! Plz tell me how to improve, fix it. To the comic:


???: "You are mine, Angel! And this time your friend isn't here to save you!"
Archangel: "You wont win, The force of Valhalla wont allow it!"


???: "I will overcome Valhalla, just like i overcame Abyss: easily. Now, enjoy your fall from grace, Angel!"


Archangel: "Noooo!!!!"


2 weeks earlier...


Archangel: "He's been missing for 8 days now... where do you think he could be?"
Kat: "I dont know... but Snowcap sure is devastated."
Archangel: "Can i ask a favor?"
Kat: "Sure."


Archangel: "Can you please get Harken and tell him i need the data to start the search."


Kat: "Sure."


*Archangel takes a knee and prays*


Harken: "You sent for me?"
Archangel: "Indeed, do you have the data?"


Harken: "Yes, it is in this red shard, you can now start the search"
Archangel: "Thank you, Harken"


*Harken Salutes Archangel*
Harken: "My pleasure."


???: "I couldn't help but overhear your conversation, what is this about a search?"
Archangel: "Dystrax! yes, its true, i am starting a search party to aid me."
Dystrax: "I'd be happy to help!"


???: "Friend? or Foe?"
Dystrax: "*cough* Friend *cough*"


???: "Fine..."


???: "I will serve you as an escort during the search, i know this island like the back of my hand."
Achangel: "Alright."


*Kat walks in, sees Abyss, and blushes*
Kat: "Hey Gary."
Abyss: "Hey..."
Archangel: "Kat, are you ready?"
Kat: "Yes!"


Kat: "Wait, where do we start?"
Archangel: "Lets try the surrounding villages, and maybe he'll turn up."


Archangel: "Onward!"


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Comments

 I like it 
  January 6, 2012
Well what do we have here...
  December 22, 2011
Self-moc redo link http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/300998 And only the picture quality can be improved here
Vinyl Scratch
 I like it 
The One Who Needs Pieces
  December 20, 2011
Good story girl! I like the story so far!
 I like it 
  December 20, 2011
The pictures need the most work, but the comic itself is nice!
 I like it 
  December 20, 2011
For a first try, not bad. But improve picture quality.
 I like it 
  December 20, 2011
Perfectish.it was good and i should totally watch this
 I like it 
  December 20, 2011
very nice dude
 I like it 
  December 20, 2011
very nice dude
  December 20, 2011
A good comic. Maybe some more action... Could you continue to chat? My internet crashed and then you left...
 
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