Welcome to the PokeMOC League Round Three! The pictures are fixed!
About this creation
My enemy for this round is Dark Ray http://mocpages.com/home.php/64556. Here is his entry http://mocpages.com/moc.php/299851. We are on the city street terrain.
"Ah, the city. This is the place I call home."
Dark Ray approaches, with Pokeballs in hand.
"This shall be over quickly," I say.
"Go..."
"Castform!"
Castform is a rare Pokemon that I have treasured for the past years. He's easily defeated, but he can also be a big help.
"Castform, use Hydro Pump!"
Castform badly damages Dark's first attacker. Dark's Pokemon defeats Castform with a brutal tackle.
"How dare you...Come out..."
"Spinda!"
This Spinda is very special to me, because he was given to me by one of my most trusted friends. Like me, Spinda is off balance, but reliant.
Spinda KOs Dark's first Pokemon with a dizzy punch, and wounds the second with the same. I bring Spinda back to his ball.
I send out Vigoroth...
...who defeats the second with fury swipes, and the third with slash!
"Now go, Electivire!"
Electivire thundershocks, and then thunder punches his last Pokemon, winning the battle!
Fourth Wall: Good luck to Dark Ray!
Here's the field. There's no door on the one building, because in Pokemon you can walk into anybody's house! How creepy!
Pokemon!
It was really hard to build Electivire, because of my limited amount of yellow.
Here's his back.
Vigoroth.
His underside.
Spinda.
Castform.
Once again, good luck!
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December 27, 2011 |
Since the other judges, judged there's no need for me to say all that stuff, anyway nice vig man! Your Pokemon look great but I do feel they could be a lot better. Anyway nice work :) |
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December 21, 2011 |
Good job! Though your Pokemon were nice, your Electivire was VERY big, your Castform was a bit simple, your Spinda was a little oddly proportioned, while your Vigoroth was probably the best! Your picture quality had much to be desired, though, but your scenery was pretty good! In the end, however, Dark Ray received my vote for his better story and a little better Pokemon. Thanks for playing, you did very well! |
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December 18, 2011 |
Nice work, but my vote goes to your opponent for the overall better presentation and more elaborate builds. |
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December 17, 2011 |
Nice man! |
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December 17, 2011 |
Nice job! |
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December 17, 2011 |
Nice job! |
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December 16, 2011 |
epic!! |
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December 16, 2011 |
Excellent job due:D |
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I can't tell what's going on here, sorry. Did you take these pics earlier today? If so, how hard was it raining? Anyway, from what I can see, this is pretty good. Do you really not own a lamp? - Kyle |
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December 16, 2011 |
Great work Yapdap!!! |
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Do you not even own a lamp? |
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I agree that the pictures should be retaken.
Try making them less blurry. If the pictures are too dark, you can edit the pictures in picnik and use the exposure effect and boost the highlights. |
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December 16, 2011 |
Cool! I made a castform too! Also you better retake those pics |
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Retake pictures or face defeat. |
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December 16, 2011 |
That electivire is awesome and that castform looks cute. I say good luck against your oponent. |
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