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The Journeys of Savage Opress part 2: Greed of the Zabrak
The 2nd TJOSO comic is out.This story is non-canon so don't ask after reading it.Enjoy.
About this creation
It's been a long time of war,battle rage on,and still the young former Sith apprentice is in search for revenge,to all of who have betrayed him.Yet,his brother,who now bestowes the title of been Opress's Sith master, is among a different course,to regain his rightful place at the side of the Dark Lord,but first,the only obstacle in the way must be terminated....

Serenno,fives weeks before the rise of Order 66...



Maul-You think he's here?
Savage-Yes brother.The training I received from him was taken here,inside his castle.


Maul-Well then,come brother.Our destiny to rise is at hand.
Savage-Indeed.

Few hours of walking,the two Zabraks have made it to their destination.
Maul-Prepare your saber, Savage,for we'll be using them shortly.
Savage-Finally.

Inside Darth Tyrannus's lair....


Maul-Greetings, Tyrannus.
Tyrannus-Darth Maul, I was wondering when the time would come.Might I say,weren't you killed by a lone Jedi years ago?
Maul-Well, lets just say,that I've been reborn once again.
Tyrannus-Your arrogance blinds you,Maul.I shall no longer include the title of "Darth" upon your name,as you are no longer my master's apprentice,nor will you be if you defeat me.
The droids attack once Dooku finished his last words,so the two Zabraks quickly ignite one blade on each lightsaber,as they knew these droids wouldn't be much of a challenge.


They clash,each Zabrak with one Magnaguard.
Savage-You think these droids would do any good for you, Dooku?
I will make you regret ever crossing me!

Savage,out of anger, quickly overwhelmed the helpless droid...

...and Maul is soon to do the same.

He leaped...

...and threw his saber into the droids extra photoreceptor,crossing all the way through his back.
Droid-Aaaack!!!

Tyrannus-Grrr,you two think you are able to defeat me?I am the true sith!

Maul-A fromer Jedi doesn't deserve the place next to Sidious.I was born SITH!Your a disgrace to the title of the sith!


He shot a full shed of force lightning from his finger tips,imediately overwhelming the ones considered to be his enemies.
Tyrannus-I've had enough of this!You two together,no matter how much the effort and the power,will not be able to surpass me.


Savage tries to resist,he knows he can withstand the powers of Dooku.He holds out until...

...BOOM he blasted off RED LIGHTNING from his own hands,a move he had never done before!The two bolts clash together,enhancing a powerful force in between!
Tyrannus-Impossible! I never taught you that during the training.
Savage-You didn't,nor did Maul,I figured it out!!!

The powerful energy force,combined by the two different lightnings,has errupted,thus sending the doomed Sith Lord through the wall,upon a cliff!
Tyrannus-Oooof!

Dooku began falling to the landing platform of his castle...

...though that he knew wouldn't defeat him.Imediately,he held
with the force and slowed down his fall,thus landing without a broken leg.


Tyrannus-This is not over.


Maul-Come brother,I doubt his fall was enough to kill him.
Savage-Definitely,he's tougher than you think.


They both jumped.


After the period of falling,Savage lands...


...then so does Maul.


Tyrannus-You two would've made yourselves excellent allies,but your stupidity made you decide with the wrong choice.



Maul-Don't think yourself of being supperior than either one of us Tyrannus.
Savage-I bet even your former apprentice,Ventress,would've known that.

They clash again,4 blades against one.
Savage-DIE,JEDI!!!

Dooku then jumps...

...and lands upon the other side.
Maul-You've caused me enough time of waiting!Time to pay the pirce.
Voice-NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Suddenly,from under the platform leaped a dark figure,who intends to join the duel.
Tyrannus-What?

The figure lands.
Savage-You!!!
Tyrannus-Impossible!
Maul-Who are you!
Ventress-Sorry my darlings,but if anyone's to kill the Count,it be me.

They all stand in their fight stance,waiting who would strike next!

Ventress makes the blow!
Ventress-DIE, OLD MAN!!!

She blocked sabers with Savage and Tyrannus.
I will make you suffer for what you've caused me,old man!!!

Then she leaped.

Immediately after landing,the two sith brothers gave their blows!!!
Ventress-HA,HA,HA!!!FOOLS!You think you'll beat me?Ha,never!
Savage-I will destroy you!

After their saber lock!Assajj demonstrated her true inner power!And she force pushed the two Zabraks out of her way!
Ventress-RRRRRAAAAAAGH!!!

She was bound to attack Tyrannus...

...But was then stopped by Savage with a kick...

...thus slamming onto the hold outs,barely able to move.
Maul-It's over for you.
Ventress-Go ahead,kill me!You think it'll matter,I'm bound to become more powerful than you could ever imagine,just like you did,after your humiliational death!


Maul-...

Maul,without a hesitation,striked down the former acolyte of Count Dooku.
Ventress-UNNNGH!!!

They both took one of her sabers,and thus becoming 6 sabers versus 1.
Maul-It's over,Tyrannus.


Tyrannus-It isn't worth it,but believe me,Sidious would never take you back as his apprentice.You were defeated before,you disgraced your position.You won't redeem yourself by killing each one of his apprentices with the help of your brute brother.
Maul-He will accept me,and I will rule this galaxy alongside him!
Tyrannus-You can't redeem yourself with the aid of another,you have to do it alone!
Savage-Maul would never betray me,we're brothers!
Tyrannus-Poor brute,can't you see,the sith always betray one another,and I'm sure you'll both learn that soon enough.

SLASH!!!

Tyrannus-URRRGH!!!

...

...

*Thud*

The duel ended,and the two went back to their ship.

Savage-What with me now.Your journey is to gain your rightful place by Sidious,but what with me.I got what I wanted.,what other purpose do I have,brother?
Maul-Your destiny is to rule with me and the Dark Lord,Savage.You'll understand it better in the near future.Come, brother.We still have much to do.
Savage-Yes,my Lord.

To Be Continued...
Thanks for watching!
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Comments

 I made it 
  May 24, 2012
Quoting Gray williams Actually savage and maul are dathomarians, a cross between human and zabrak.
Ik,but they're still zabrak.The only difference is their origin and looks
  May 23, 2012
Actually savage and maul are dathomarians, a cross between human and zabrak.
 I like it 
  December 20, 2011
Awesome job man! Great work as usual. You have a knack for these kinds of things. Keep it up!
 I made it 
  December 16, 2011
Quoting Kyle Peckham Awesome Hawk! The action sequences are great! Only next time try and get some clear pictures, some of these aren't the best I have seen from you. Keep it up! - KP
Thanks,but I'm afraid I can't do that much better with the pics cause that's how my iPod takes them.
 I like it 
  December 16, 2011
Awesome Hawk! The action sequences are great! Only next time try and get some clear pictures, some of these aren't the best I have seen from you. Keep it up! - KP
 I made it 
  December 16, 2011
Quoting Harry 863 Awesome story Hawk. Great job
Thanks!!!
 I like it 
  December 16, 2011
Awesome story Hawk. Great job
 I made it 
  December 14, 2011
Quoting Commander Gree Awesome! Love it! Thanks for commenting on my creation too. Could you add me to your favorite builders? Thanks, I'll do the same for you!
Thanks!Sure I will!
 I like it 
  December 14, 2011
Awesome! Love it! Thanks for commenting on my creation too. Could you add me to your favorite builders? Thanks, I'll do the same for you!
 I made it 
  December 14, 2011
Quoting Jonathan Nguyen Wow. They work together well.
Thank you.
 I like it 
  December 14, 2011
Wow. They work together well.
 
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