I took in some critique, and I decided to revamp him a little :D So here's Destrin :D
About this creation
Element: Fire, and Phoenix Rage (Phoenix Rage is a sacred type of fire, if Destrin is angry, you'll hate being on his bad side :P)
Occupation(s): Mercenary, Toa, Assassin
Title(s): Destrin, Toa
Bio: Destrin as a Matoran, always dreamed of being a Toa, but he wanted to be a little different than the average fire Toa, but he still he wanted to be the next fire Toa. Destrin was taught how to be a mercenary as a matoran, not far away from Ga-Metru borders. Destrin was then hired for certain job in Ga-Metru, but failed when he was nearly killed by the Makuta he needed to kill. Well after the Morbuzakh vines had been done disintegrating, Destrin was out and about to kill that one Makuta. And he did so, but was about to die, Destrin walked up to the Makuta and then all the sudden a source of raw energy hit Destrin, and he knew that this was called Phoenix Rage, and he had to control his anger carefully with this. He then told his master that, and they went to Mata Nui to seek this source of energy. After the Toa Mata had served for a long time, a new Toa Team was in need. Destrin was given a Fire Toa stone by Tahu, and then he was transformed. He then soon met his team members (Galvis, Metrex, Junta, and Denos) They later on called themselves the Toa Senorax. Two of Destrin's close friends are Junta and Galvis, Destrin has noticed that Junta has a attention toward Destrin, and Denos is carelessly flirting with Galvis, they are currently helping the Toa Nuva protect the matorans and Mata Nui
And the other side! :D
The new custom arms...
And the COMPLETELY new custom legs!
Here's the inside of his legs :D
Now he has a headset! :D
3D EFFECT-NESS OF PURE EPICNESS!
Destrin: HQ, the target's down.
And he has foreleg knives, if you didn't notice :P
Destrin: Ta ta for now!
I THINK THIS THING IS EPIC!!! Other people say it needs upgrades, but the only things that bother me are the metro foot on the crotch and the twiggy waist. However, the thin waist is not glaring whatsoever, and the crotch can be fixed by a slizer foot in place of the metru foot. BTW, could you possibly make my self moc? It's fine if you don't want to, but I think it would be cool if both of us could have a version of each other's self moc.
I'm kinda with Chopper and Cos too. :P He looks nice but I don't know what kind of a feel you're trying to give him. I think you can clean up the armor a bit, take care of all the sticking-out parts. You could also work on the color scheme, cut out a few colors. I'm still kinda glaze-eyed at his *ahem*Chest*ahem*. :P You might also try for a smaller mic. :P
I agree with Chopperskull, it's still a bit hard to tell where you're going with him. At the moment he still seems like a Samurai and not too much like a Mercenary. To get that look he needs to be slim and sleek. He has definitely improved since the last version but there are a lot of pieces that seem stuck on and all over the place. I'd also change the colour scheme, at the moment there are about four colours on him, I'd take the silver off and stick with orange, red and black, it would be more Mercenary like. Anyway other than that he has improved since last time. I like the idea of the head set, but not too sure about it's size. I like the torso too! Looking forward to future updates ;)
He looks good. he needs more bulkiness on his midsection. Also, the headset is way too oversized. I kind of agree with The person below. He needs work. Keep working on him. In addition, his neck is to lanky.
I have no idea what you are trying to make him like, but he's really awkward. sorry, but I don't know about him anymore :/ The body design is huge on top which is cool, but as you go down it's a twig, then a waist. Shoulders should be custom design, it would look way nicer ! the arms are actually good, and I like them,they are unique. And the legs are awesome, not too crazy about the silver though. Just keep working on it, this moc is getting there ! :)
Definitely better! Great job on combining our stories! Only thing I don't like are the Raw-Jaw pieces on his arms. They look a little too big. Maybe Furno 2.0 armor? But anyway, great job! Add it to our private chat group! :D Keep it up! - Kyle