PREVIOUSLY ON HUNT FOR "GOD": Onika and Korapa run into a group of heroes: Nathan Goldust, Mary Windbird, Jack Lunus, Garry Blizzard and Julia swipe. Their mission: Capture Nebulus and his gang. But things get messy. XPlode releases the IRM onto the group! It kills Swipe and Blizzard and rounds up the rest of the gang. It advances for the kill...
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IRM: DO NOT RESIST AND YOUR DEATH SHALL BE PAINLESS. THANK YOU.
Goldust: I do resist, for the sake of My team mates, my friends...
Goldust: Listen, We are of robotic origin just like you. We can help you! Why don't you join us? we can defeat your master. You will be free!
IRM: WE MUST FOLLOW THE NORM, THE LAW. ALL WHO DO NOT ARE INADIQUATE!
Goldust: Then i'm sorry. I have to fight you. The rest of you, RUN!
Goldust: AAAAGGGHHH...!!!
IRM: YOU ARE INADIQUATE!
(The IRM's Chest opens up and a cable comes out...)
Windbird: My foot! NO!
IRM: YOU ARE INADIQUATE!
Lunus: I'm damned if i let any more of my friends die!
IRM: YOU!
Lunus: Julia... she did nothing to deserve to die!!!
Onika: Do you think the IRM cares? come on, we need to go!
Korapa: XPlode!
XPlode: Hello there! I see the IRM trimmed your ranks a bit... tee hee hee!
Lunus: YOU SWINE! Shut that abomination!
XPlode: Let me think about it.... Ok, I thought about it! No. HAHAHA!
XPlode: Oh well, must be off! Tootles!
Korapa: Any ideas?
Onika: Well We could call the Rest of the team, and they could help us. Does anyone have a radio?
Windbird: Uh, Well, We did, you see...
Lunus: ...Nathan had it.
Onika: oh.
Korapa: Wait! Two of us could distract the IRM, and the other two could go and get the Radio from Goldust, and call the Toa Racta.
Onika and Lunus: We'll do it!
SO THEN:
???: HELLO THERE!
IRM: EH?
Onika: CATCH US IF YOU CAN, TIN HEAD!
IRM: YOU ARE INADIQUATE!
Windbird: Mayday! Mayday! We need help! We are being attacked by a robotic creature! Toa Korapa and Toa Onika are with us!
IRM: YOU SHALL DIE FIRST!
IRM: MY DEFEAT WAS BECAUSE OF FOUR TOA. FILE NAMES: FORTRUX, COSSY, GALIA AND RAXONAX. THEREFORE...
...ALL TOA ARE INADIQUATE!
Onika: aah!
Onika: ...you w-will wake up, Onika, and this will all be a dream...!
Lunus: Oi you!
IRM: DON'T WORRY. YOU'RE NEXT!
Lunus: You killed three of my closest friends ever, and you almost killed another one, all out of cold blood...
...AND I SWEAR TODAY IT STOPS!
IRM: WERE GOING OFF THE EDGE!
IRM: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!
???: Man, you look like you had fun...
Parah:...Want a hand?
LATER
Onika: so while Korapa and Mary called for help, Me and Lunus battled The IRM on a thin bridge. IRM almost knocked me off the bridge. Lunus... gave his life... to send it off the edge...
Leka: I'm sorry Windbird...
Windbird: There is nothing we can do. They all gave their lives for good causes, and all the survivers can do, is respect their sacrifice, and move on....
NEXT ISSUE: Revenge.
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December 23, 2012 |
Well first, I want to say I like how you mentioned Cossy in here, is this like some sequel to Cossy's story? Just wondering, nice work! |
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December 9, 2011 |
Quoting Ben Cossy
Another awesome chapter :D I like that you're not afraid to kill off characters in your comic's, limits the story if you don't kill them and inturn ruins it. Glad your's isn't ruined :D Awesome stuff man :D But will IRM return?
Thanks. The problem that too many characters I make are really important but i do try, as you said, sometimes, the number of deaths or vital inguries can decide weather A story is mature or not (Like the main reasons why people think HF is so childish is that not even any villians die, they just go to jail) And the thing about the IRM, I will say that he will return, and he will be returning in Hunt for "God", and when i say that, i mean like two or three episodes time...! |
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December 9, 2011 |
Another awesome chapter :D I like that you're not afraid to kill off characters in your comic's, limits the story if you don't kill them and inturn ruins it. Glad your's isn't ruined :D Awesome stuff man :D But will IRM return? |
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Eathuis 305 December 7, 2011 |
Wow Dude impressed! Great two parter! |
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Eathuis 305 December 7, 2011 |
Very! |
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December 7, 2011 |
Quoting Eathuis 305
Wow Dude impressed! Great two parter!
Woa your impressed! |
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December 7, 2011 |
Quoting The One Who Needs Pieces
:O
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December 7, 2011 |
Quoting RICtendo (Hungry)
Since when do robots bleed? :S
Since i came to MOCpages XD |
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December 7, 2011 |
Quoting sniperray213 ???
nice
glad u likes :D |
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December 7, 2011 |
Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ?
nice chapter.too bad alot died(even though they are HF).i shall pay my respects to them
Yes... lets pay our respects :( |
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December 6, 2011 |
:O |
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December 6, 2011 |
Since when do robots bleed? :S |
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December 6, 2011 |
nice |
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December 6, 2011 |
nice chapter.too bad alot died(even though they are HF).i shall pay my respects to them |
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December 6, 2011 |
Quoting Chains, Toa of Prisioners
another awesome comic it was soo exciting cant wait till the next 5/5 :)
glad you like :D |
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December 6, 2011 |
another awesome comic it was soo exciting cant wait till the next 5/5 :) |
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