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New Denver Premeir
Episode 1 (text read bellow pictures)
About this creation
A small town in Colorado in the year of 2015






Caleb walked along the street, looking at the small diner.



He opened the door and walked in.



"Hello Caleb!" Mr. Johnston said.



"Good morning sir!" Caleb replied.



"When should I go get the next shipment down in Denton?" he asked, putting a shopping cart away as he did.

"Whenever you can, son," he replied.





The deputy sat at the desk in the town hall.



Suddenly the lights went out.



He headed outside to see what the problem was.



A logger who was using the phone looked at it, wondering why it was dead.



"What's the problem sheriff?"



"Well," he said, "it appears the whole town is out of power, go get the doc and bring 'em around to Sal's, we need to see if Denton is having any trouble."



The deputy went off to get Richards



"Sir, why is the pho-"

"Powers out, get back to ya soon," Garet interrupted



Inside the Clinic.

"Quickly, we've gotta get him into the light before we can finish this," the Doctor said




Outside, Richards continues the procedure.



Afterward, when the patient was back in.

"Now, what where you gonna say?" asked the Doc.



"Oh, yes of course. Sheriff needs you at Sal's."



"What for?"



"Not sure, just come!"





"Sir, when will the power be back?"

"Soon I suppose. Don't know."



"How do we know Denton has power?" asked Caleb.



"Good point, son, maybe the sheriff knows something."



"Hi Pauline, where is the sheriff, we saw his car parked out front," Caleb asked as he walked in.



"In the back room."

"Okay thanks."

The power had just come back on, but Caleb decided to go to the back room and ask about what the problem was anyways.



Just as Caleb walked in, the power went back on.



The doctor was at an old machine that Caleb thought was a telegraph, but not sure.



"What's he doing?" Caleb asked.

"Shhh," spoke the deputy,"Power's back on, but we can't make and calls from cellphones or land-lines. This is the only way we could contact Denton. Now quiet!"



There where several barrels large boxes with some old tables in them. The barrels where mostly empty.



The doctor had finished his message and waited for a reply, wondering if Denton had also thought to use the old telegraph machine.



Soon a reply came.

He memorized the code and began to mentally translate the message.





His face went pale.

"They say," he began shakily,"Denver has just been bombed.



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Comments

Caleb R.
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Ix:risor (Nate)
  November 28, 2011
Sa-weet! Awesome intro there.
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  November 27, 2011
Quoting El Barto ! Well, we all know what it means when power and communications are knocked out: Invasion! Nice episode, Chief!
Thanks!
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  November 26, 2011
Well, we all know what it means when power and communications are knocked out: Invasion! Nice episode, Chief!
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  November 24, 2011
Quoting Yapdap Randomness Caleb, can you please choose your equipment in this CYOA? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/296429 You're Caleb.
k! thanks =)
  November 23, 2011
Caleb, can you please choose your equipment in this CYOA? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/296429 You're Caleb.
  November 23, 2011
Can you Check this out? http://mocpages.com/moc.php/296449
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  November 23, 2011
Quoting Annie Corder Looks great! Nice work Caleb. :)
Thanks =)
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  November 23, 2011
Quoting Bean [Ben Mulder] Am I person #32?
Yeah you are
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  November 23, 2011
Quoting Bean [Ben Mulder] Am I person #32?
Let me check
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  November 23, 2011
Looks great! Nice work Caleb. :)
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  November 23, 2011
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  November 23, 2011
I'm shocked! XD
  November 23, 2011
Am I person #32?
Caleb R.
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Sam "The legoman" Knavel
  November 22, 2011
Great start, can't wait for the next episode!
Caleb R.
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General Asher S.
  November 22, 2011
Great premiere! The suspense is fantastic!
Caleb R.
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Soap `
  November 22, 2011
Sweet, love the action! :) Great work! :)
Caleb R.
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Dave Russ
  November 22, 2011
Nice!
Caleb R.
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Reynolds Brickfreak
  November 22, 2011
Awesome! I hope I'm in the next episode!!! :D
Caleb R.
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Reynolds Brickfreak
  November 22, 2011
Awesome! I hope I'm in the next episode!!! :D
 I made it 
  November 22, 2011
Quoting SuperSpy X Nice first episode, but one mistake. The phone lines are not connected to the electric lines so even if the power is out the phones would still work. (I'm a bit of a nitpicker) But still a great episode.
If denver where bombed, the phone lines and signal towers would be totally destroyed. Thus no Phones. But the Telegraph lines are UNDER ground so they still work
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  November 22, 2011
I really like this episode! Great cliffhangar!
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  November 22, 2011
Very nice!
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  November 22, 2011
This is so weird I just made a moc of a city being bombed... Great first episode!
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  November 22, 2011
I hate teasers! >:| The suspense is killing me!!! D: What happens next??? I must know!!! D: THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!! D: D:
  November 22, 2011
Quoting SuperSpy X
That would be the case normally... but this isn't normal. ;)
  November 22, 2011
Sweet i cant wait for the next episode! A real cliffhanger! I hope i am in the next one I cant wait to see more!
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  November 22, 2011
Brilliant work, Caleb! I love everything about it! The story is great so far and usually the first episode isn't the best so it looks like there will be more great ones to come! Great job!
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  November 22, 2011
Nice first episode, but one mistake. The phone lines are not connected to the electric lines so even if the power is out the phones would still work. (I'm a bit of a nitpicker) But still a great episode.
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  November 22, 2011
SWEEEEET.
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  November 22, 2011
Wow! Great! I like my new hat too. :P
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  November 22, 2011
Wow great job!!!!!
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  November 22, 2011
Cliff hanger! I am in a state of suspense!
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  November 22, 2011
=O cool ending!
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  November 22, 2011
A bit of a slow start, but it is intriguing!
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  November 22, 2011
WOW, great beginning!
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  November 22, 2011
Nice! Can't wait for Episode 2!
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  November 22, 2011
Very nice first episode! I like the town scenes!
 
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