It's finally here! The prologue to my story, A Story Retold, a continuation of the bionicle storyline with a slight twist...
About this creation
Somewhere in the desert adjoining sa-ere:
Vanu: How long have we been walking?
Vex: My internal clock says 30 hours. Ugh.
Vanu: Your circuits must be fried from the heat! We've slept through at least three nights, I can't even remember. This towel messes with your mind, man.
Vex: You mean desert.
That's what I said. You might want to fix your logic processor when we get back to ere-nui.
You know I can't do that. They'd see the academy's insignia on my drives as soon as they open me up and they'd know who we are. I say we turn back, there's nothing in this stupid desert.
Look around a bit, I trust that old turaga. He was a mentor of mine, and I never knew him to tell a lie.
Well he hardly told the whole truth. All he gave us was a time and coordinates, and we don't even know what we're looking for. This is stupid.
Just five more minutes. By the angle of the sun I'd say it's about the right ti-
WHAT IS THAT?!?!
AAAAH! MY EYES!
Curse that desert sun... Whoa! Look, a staircase opened! Vex, I think we found what we're looking for! C'mon, let's go in!
I still have an afterimage on my cameras. What was the light even shining on?!
I don't know, but these stairs are huge!!!! Who even uses stairs this big?
Don't you think that's a good sign to leave? I don't think mister big-stairs-user will be happy we're here. We should go.
Stop being such a baby. Wait, do you see that blue light down there? What is that?
*they go down*
Vex: *Gasp* It's a toa...
Vanu: ...In stasis!
Elsewhere, on Bara Magma...
???: Muahaha... finally... the power is mine!!!!!
Thanks for reading! Questions, Comments and Ratings are appreciated!
Great prologue, can't wait to see the rest ! hope to see lots of action and mystery. so far I think you are the third mocist to continue the bionicle storyline (you, BenCossy, me)so hope to see your interpretation of the story !
Fantastic prologue! The photo quality is really cool. And I like how you integrated these real life things, like when Vanu calls the desert towel :D. Also, this makes me very interested in the upcoming story, you made this very exciting!