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My entery for The BIONICLE Torunamocoff round one.
About this creation
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BIO.
NAME:Jeverson.
GENDER:Male.
SPECIES:Same as Axonn.
ALIGNMENT:None
OCCUPATION:Former OoMN agent
TITLES:Jeverson, Jev, Snipe.
ELEMENT:None
MASK:Kanohi Kadin Nuva: Mask of flight.
WEAPON/S:Laser rifel, Twin swords.
STORY:Jeverson was a Sniper for the OoMN. But once the Order was destroid, he wandered Spherus Magna alone. after a few years hiding in a cave and shooting any unlucky Rahi for his dinner, a stranger came...

Now on to the MOC.

The back view.


Front view.


Lower leg greebles.


Upper leg.


Torso.


Jeverson: Meet my friend Shooty


Swords!


Jeverson: Just when you thought you've seen it all...


BAM! Pop-out wings!



Throughing exploding darts.


Jeverson: Pew pew pew!


Norrak: Bro...


Jeverson: Shake?


I updated Norrak! Lower torso greeble.


And new twin blades!

I hope you liked this MOC, and I hope I get through to round two. =D



Comments

 I made it 
  November 22, 2011
Quoting TheUltimateDarkGod Death Kinda cool but you can do better on both mocs.Try using custom designs for their bodies.
I have very limited amount of pieces (24 BIONICLEs and none of them titans) and I'm not that great at building custom things. Anywho, Thanks. =)
  November 22, 2011
Kinda cool but you can do better on both mocs.Try using custom designs for their bodies.
 I like it 
  November 22, 2011
Wow! Nice wings!
 I made it 
  November 21, 2011
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ His upper arms are pretty sweet but the rest of him is kinda weak. Good luck in the contest. ;)
Thanks mate! =)
  November 20, 2011
His upper arms are pretty sweet but the rest of him is kinda weak. Good luck in the contest. ;)
 I like it 
  November 19, 2011
Nice job,mate. I love the pop-out wings. Great job!
  November 18, 2011
Agreed, some parts could use some work bit other than that you hav a wonderful moc here. 6/10- Archangel
 I like it 
  November 13, 2011
Well, this actually is a very nice toa you have here! The look on it is simple, but gets the job done for me. I like how you mixed the blue and silver, but those red pins at the top of his wings are mismatched. To me, he just looks unfinished. From a judges standpoint, I feel like you deserve something in between a 4 and a 5. I'm going to be nice and give you a 5/10. - KP
  November 13, 2011
Meh,I guess.I see where you're going with this,and I like it.But it's a bit too simple.Score:3/10
  November 12, 2011
I guess this moc isn't bad. I like the wings and the variaty of weapons you gave him. Unfortunatley, I must say his body has been made a little lazy. Your Score: 5/10
 I made it 
  November 12, 2011
Quoting 12Lego Greendude A decent moc. It could use a bit more armor on the thighs and torso. Also the shin armor is a bit awkward :P Color scheme looks good. Some more greebling would have been nice. Score: 4.5/10
Well my brick colection is limeted at the moment because I have like 14 other Mocs built at the moment and I was trying some thing out with the shin armour, as for the lack of armour He's supose to be skinny looking.
  November 12, 2011
A decent moc. It could use a bit more armor on the thighs and torso. Also the shin armor is a bit awkward :P Color scheme looks good. Some more greebling would have been nice. Score: 4.5/10
 I made it 
  November 12, 2011
Thanks
 I like it 
  November 11, 2011
Looks pretty good. Nice greebling.
  November 11, 2011
Cool! My entry may be late because I have some computer problems. I use my laptop so I'm on a desktop for now.
 
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