An entry to JPfan65 Studios's Dinosaur Contest!Also,11/11/11!
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JPfan65 Studios November 11, 2011 |
Dang Man! Nice Guanlong! His Tail Is Way To Short Though...But Now Let Me See Here...Hmm....Accuracy Is A Three, Descripton Is A Five, He's Is Shown Eating Prey So A Ten & Five Points Extra Credit For Telling Me Why You Build Him....All In All A Total Of 23/25 ! Nice Work =D ! |
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| JPfan65 Studios November 11, 2011 |
Oh Yeah...Forgot The Missing Toe....Your Score Is Unchanged Thoguht... |
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Looking good! Nice head! |
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Accuracy: 2,the tail's a little off and you're missing a toe on the foot. And the eyes look a little weird. Description: 5. 15 bonus points which brings it to 22/25. :D Nice work! |
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Quoting JPfan65 Studios
Dang Man! Nice Guanlong! His Tail Is Way To Short Though...But Now Let Me See Here...Hmm....Accuracy Is A Three, Descripton Is A Five, He's Is Shown Eating Prey So A Ten & Five Points Extra Credit For Telling Me Why You Build Him....All In All A Total Of 23/25 ! Nice Work =D !
Thanks!Although,Boone beat me though,by one point.:P |
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What Johann said, the legs are kinda weird. :P Nice job anyhoot. |
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Thanks everyone! |
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Nice. Solid colors, and I'm digging that tube ribcage on the back (?). Now, the legs are strange, not only bulk, but they have an extra segment(there should be only 3)... Also, you could work abit on the neck and tail and their connections to the main body, wich are kinda blocky.. But overall good one, have luck on the contest! |
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Very nice Raviel! For being so new to the pages, you have quite a collection of mocs! As a dinosaur, awesome! The legs look cool (Kinda remind me of avtoran limbs but with posablility and they look better), the limbs look cool, the head is very nice (the fish is pretty cool too), and so is the torso (I'm using a torso like that for a toa moc I made. Just haven't posted it yet). My only problems are the tail (too stumpy and bulky. The Guanlong's tail looks long and skinny) and he doesn't look too much like the guanlong, although the feel and effort are there. Overall, 5/5! It looks ok for being made out of bionicles and I like the skirmix parts! :) |
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Neat MOC Raviel. Although my one and only piece of criticism for you is the tail and lags are a bit bulky. To my knowledge of the dinosaur it is that it was a slim predator and an ancestor of the T-Rex. The bulkyness just doesn't take it for me. Still I rate it 5/5! |
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:D |
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November 11, 2011 |
Very nice piece usages! |
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Thanks you two!:D |
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November 11, 2011 |
Looks just like the picture!!! I think you captured it exactly! |
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November 11, 2011 |
Dude, that looks awesome! Great work! |
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