I haven't made a toa in a while (as in long before I found the pages) so I decided to make one.I made her out of pieces from Gadunka(the Mahri enemy).The only pieces that aren't from Gadunka are the head,mask,heartlight and stomach greeble.Oh,and,I made a back story but needs improvement and besides,MOCpages glitched and went to the verify account page so I had to re-do it all,and I didn't really want to re-write the back-story.
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Hey, do i have to do something special to join Bionicle 2012? |
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I think it looks really cool! The torso is a little small in comparison to the thighs but the length of the legs and such is fine. I would suggest rebuilding the torso with the peices from the thighs, therefore fixing both of the flaws. But I still like it!
And don't mind Groundquake... He is a bummer about color schemes! :P If you see his comment on Lazariax I asked him what I could improve on in Bionicle 2012 and it's somewhere in the topics. But you get the point :) But I really like the scheme and have Gadunka myself! |
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I made it |
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November 16, 2011 |
Quoting DarkEnergon 99
Cool moc. your probably going to hate me for this but..... the torso is to short
*grrr*Why does everyone hate on this?! |
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Cool moc. your probably going to hate me for this but..... the torso is to short |
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I made it |
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November 10, 2011 |
Quoting Justin M
Very impressive;D
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November 10, 2011 |
Very impressive;D |
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I made it |
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November 10, 2011 |
Quoting Rennoc ~
Certainly something different.... But in a goodish bad way. My main problems are the torso, mask, legs, and the background in the pictures! Why not just tape up a few pieces of computer paper? This goes with Groundquake too..... You know my background? Took me 10 minutes to make.... And try using a white light or natural daylight for the pics. Turns on the close-up setting on your camera (a little flower usually) and turn flash off. As for the story..... What I do is write it in word, then copy and paste. that way you don't have to retype anything! = )
My background had a,er,malfunction.I mean,you've seen some of my other MOC's backgrounds!They're usually flawless!I always use macro.(the flower button)Why does everyone hate the torso?!And thanks for the tip!(word docs) |
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I like it |
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November 10, 2011 |
Certainly something different.... But in a goodish bad way. My main problems are the torso, mask, legs, and the background in the pictures! Why not just tape up a few pieces of computer paper? This goes with Groundquake too..... You know my background? Took me 10 minutes to make.... And try using a white light or natural daylight for the pics. Turns on the close-up setting on your camera (a little flower usually) and turn flash off. As for the story..... What I do is write it in word, then copy and paste. that way you don't have to retype anything! = ) |
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November 10, 2011 |
Quoting Jensen Anderson
Well,not everyone can like everything,right?*shrug*I have been wondering if I should put on some more black or light blue.*shrug again*Maybe.Anyways,Can't wait to see the H.U.L.E. thing! |
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I made it |
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November 10, 2011 |
Quoting Groundquake 9911
The hips are a bit strange,The colors are too dark and the mask should be blue.just my opinion though.Not too bad though.Leave toa to me! >:D JK.How bout aqulizate for a name?
Hmph. >:| And sure!Although I'll change it to Aqualizate.Extra A in case you couldn't tell.Thanks! |
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Um, well, I am very very very sorry but I cannot say I like it. Please don't be angry with me, I just can't lie. For starters, The legs are very close to the head, and the whole torso is puny. If you have any other sort of torso that is bigger, use it. I think that the mask should be blue, or if you don't want to change it you should add more black. I do like his weapons and the arms and legs are fine. The body is the main thing, it really needs filling out. Like I said before, don't be angry, but
I just don't like it much. BTW, I have taken pics for a HULE gun thing, it's just on my mom's camera and I can't get them off just yet. Jensen out. |
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| Groundquake 9911 November 9, 2011 |
The hips are a bit strange,The colors are too dark and the mask should be blue.just my opinion though.Not too bad though.Leave toa to me! >:D JK.How bout aqulizate for a name? |
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