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A Nightmare or Vision?
Commander Hawk is dreaming this...
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Hawk-Night on the war front.Me,Wraith,Longdhot and Evo,are on a specialized mission on the planet of Vanqor. Nothing,nothing but darkness.Dark streams of filthy water running through the rocks,a vast variety of dangerous and wild animals like Gundarks around the ranks,catastrophic events have happened here before,and our mission could soon join the list.


Hawk-We've just finished our mission,and are on our way back to our ship.

-Something stopped us,we were ambushed!


Few moments later,we made it,and we beat the droid battalion without the effort.


Unexpectedly came one of our arch enemies,Ventress!


We were no match,and Evo was the first one of us to become a member of her victims.


Next went Longshot,force pushed into a Rock,breaking his spinal column,and killing him.


Only two left,Me and Wraith,expecting ourselves on what could happen next.We tried to prepare ourselves for her next move...


...but we failed,and Wraith became the next one to fall.




Only I was left,but instead of killing me,she told me to leave.

I left,knowing I was no match alone.

SEVERAL YEARS LATER....


Hawk-Night on the war front,I have returned to the burial place of my beloved brothers,to finally give them the true honor of a true soldier,and an honorable man.


Evo.You were a great warrior,your gift of evation shall always be honored,as you were the only one who truly had it.


Wraith,such a great man,the one who specialized in profesional weaponry in the team.You will always be on the honored list.



Longshot,my best sniper...


Let us remember all the great victories you helped us all gain.



You guys deserved better than this.You guys deserved to be true soldiers,I could never be more proud of all of you than I am right now.I will miss you dearly,all three of you.

(He gave his blaster as a gift to his brothers).
Sorry you had to go this way men.

Thanks for all your companies,may you rest in peace.

(A tear drops from Hawk's eye inside his helmet).

THANKS FOR WATCHING,PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT.



Comments

 I like it 
  November 13, 2011
Clones are awesome! 8/10 for everyone but Hawk gets a 9/10 +1 Extra point for vig/dio/comic 8.5 for the whole sqaud + comic
Gerald F.
 I like it 
Commander Nexu
  November 5, 2011
Nice! 4/5 Glad it's a nightmare!
 I like it 
  November 5, 2011
Wow. That was depressing. I like your phase 2 armor, though.
 I made it 
  November 5, 2011
Quoting CC-3636 "Wolffe" *sniff* Glad it's a nightmare.
Lol.
 I like it 
  November 5, 2011
*sniff* Glad it's a nightmare.
 I made it 
  November 5, 2011
Quoting Harry 863 I feel like i shouldnt like this because its sad
Lol.
 I like it 
  November 5, 2011
I feel like i shouldnt like this because its sad
 I made it 
  November 5, 2011
It was a nightmare,in the intro I said it.I like how sad it feels even though he was just dreaming it.
  November 5, 2011
So... Was it a dream or a vision? PLEASE say it was just a dream!!!
 
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