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| Andrew AKA Hump-Free November 3, 2011 |
Aright, first off, thanks for joining the group and I read over both parts. The story has a bit of craziness to it, but It Is In section called manipulating history, so that would be the point. The story Is still developing, but I can see where It could go, maybe having him go on crazy adventures to seek the ultimate technology and Inventions to aid humanity, while meeting the craziest Inventors, while fighting ruthless tyrants and gang leaders using the crazy Inventions. I suggest making each part a little longer; to give more development, maybe have each page be an entire story. Each story could be a new area, era even, a new crazy Inventor and equally crazy Invention, and a new villain to fight. Just an Idea If you want to make this into series, it’s up to you. However, if you do make a series, I suggest making a formal title, using a subtitle and label for each part, because it will make it easier to find each portion. For Instance, 'The Inventor's Misadventures: The Devil’s Work Boyo (Part 1)’ would make things way easier to follow stories. Another thing you may want to do Is link the parts together, so have the previous and next parts linked on page, and have a link to the beginning as well. This will make navigating easier for readers, which helps you, and if someone new happens to stumble upon a random part, they can check out the story from the beginning. Other than that, I suggest running with the Idea, maybe using the Ideas I mentioned, and make a series out of this, It doesn't matter If people want a third part, what matters If you want to make that third part, keep that in mind.
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