Quoting Andrew AKA Hump-Free
Hey Man, Thanks For Joining The Group. For the most part, I have seen much worse LEGO Stop Animations, the actual animations themselves for the most part were rather smooth. Keep in mind, it takes an absurd amount of practice, time, and effort to learn how to move parts just enough to make the movements natural. So even smoother animations will come in due time, granted you keep it up.
My only issue was with the Helicopter scene, it was the least smooth portion of the video, it was rather sloppy compared to other portions of the video. And some of the voices were very hard to understand, not sure if they were recorded or sound clips from other media, but in both cases make sure audio is clear and understandable.
Other than that, I personally don't see any other major issues with the video. Nice work.
Thanks for the review. Yeah the voices were me and my friends. Our recording equipment sucked, but i think its audible enough