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First Mecha
This is my first Mecha bot so please comment and give me your honest opionion about this and constructive critisism could help!
About this creation
The first weapon I made for this mech.It's some kind of razor thing.

Some sort of blue minigun.

A shoulder turret and some thing attached to the left arm.

i used minifigure legs to make the legs bend.

Back veiw.Tell me how you like it!




Comments

 Wicked  Split
 I like it 
Andrew AKA Hump-Free
  December 2, 2011
Hey Man, Thanks For Joining The Group. Alright, about your first mech, for a first attempt, it has the basic aspects down, and with practice you'll pick up tricks to help smooth out your designs, so don't worry if someone says that this is rough. The only actual issue I have with this MOC is the descriptive info. In my opinion, in order to be a successful mech MOC page builder, you need to be able to explain the mech clearly. So, if I were you, I would try to come up with actual names for each feature you have shown here. Another important aspect is not to have features without some sort of purpose, let's use your hose as an example, you could say that is an ammo belt for the Minigun, or a cooling system to prevent the gun from overheating. But the most important aspect is making sure the features you've added come to together to make a unit that fulfils the desired role, for instance you wouldn't want loud weapons on a mech used to sneak around. When adding features these little details come to together and greatly add to the overall value of the MOC. Also, if you choose to make more mechs in the future, I suggest not checking out other people's MOCs, at least for designs to use, inspiration is a different matter. What will help is trying to create your own style, this applies to a lot actually, so try to create as much as you can on your own, but if you feel that you need a nudge, then go a check out other MOCs. Other than that, as I said, you have the basics down, you have enough creative power, all you need now is practice and refinement and then you'll be set. Nice work.
 I made it 
  December 2, 2011
Quoting Andrew AKA Hump-Free Hey Man, Thanks For Joining The Group. Alright, about your first mech, for a first attempt, it has the basic aspects down, and with practice you'll pick up tricks to help smooth out your designs, so don't worry if someone says that this is rough. The only actual issue I have with this MOC is the descriptive info. In my opinion, in order to be a successful mech MOC page builder, you need to be able to explain the mech clearly. So, if I were you, I would try to come up with actual names for each feature you have shown here. Another important aspect is not to have features without some sort of purpose, let's use your hose as an example, you could say that is an ammo belt for the Minigun, or a cooling system to prevent the gun from overheating. But the most important aspect is making sure the features you've added come to together to make a unit that fulfils the desired role, for instance you wouldn't want loud weapons on a mech used to sneak around. When adding features these little details come to together and greatly add to the overall value of the MOC. Also, if you choose to make more mechs in the future, I suggest not checking out other people's MOCs, at least for designs to use, inspiration is a different matter. What will help is trying to create your own style, this applies to a lot actually, so try to create as much as you can on your own, but if you feel that you need a nudge, then go a check out other MOCs. Other than that, as I said, you have the basics down, you have enough creative power, all you need now is practice and refinement and then you'll be set. Nice work.
Thanks for comment. I'll be making more mechas and I'll practice more.
 I like it 
  October 29, 2011
Like those legs!
 I made it 
  October 28, 2011
Quoting lego fan121 Hi i made a new MOC.
Don't worry,I added you as a favorite builder so I can check out your new creations but thanks for commenting.
 Wicked  Split
 I like it 
lego fan121
  October 26, 2011
Hi i made a new MOC.
 I made it 
  October 24, 2011
Quoting Super Squirtle 97 SQUIRTLE its cool i like the leg bending idea. also you know yesterday we were talking about where you live, in south korea, did you move there or do you live there.
Thanks.I also thought the leg idea was genius.I live in my location.If I moved my creations would be broken.I would be mad if that happened >:^(
 Wicked  Split
 I like it 
Super Squirtle 97 SQUIRTLE
  October 23, 2011
its cool i like the leg bending idea. also you know yesterday we were talking about where you live, in south korea, did you move there or do you live there.
 Wicked  Split
 I like it 
lego fan121
  October 23, 2011
Interesting i also made a mecha its in an older folder.
 
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