episode 20; the take over final episode!
About this creation
FINAL CONCLUSION...
ZAK;
i m moving a little now!
DEUS;
hurry, he s pounding me like there is no tomorrow!
ZAK;
hold on!
i ll kick him!
ooh! he grabbed me!
ZAK;
woahh!
he s ripping this armor in half!
CCRRRUNCH! [armor hitting the hotel]
ZAK;
OUCH!!!
WILL;
i may not have arms anymore, but, i can tackle!!!
DEUS;
however our armors are damaged,
we can still finish this!
ZAK;
or, he ll finish us...
DEUS;
we can t break his cockpit,
but, maybe we can make it fall off!
oh yeah! it s off!!!
DEUS;
he s going down now!
DEUS;
oufff!
on me!!!
GENERAL VARTOK;
a group of people are following me!
stop them!!!
GENERAL VARTOK;
all is nt lost,
we still have the money!
HURRY!!!
GENERAL VARTOK;
maybe they can rid me of those pests!
CALEB MC SNIPER;
COME ON!
we still have to stop the general!
CALEB S FRIEND;
they re way too strong!
we can t even slow them down!
CALEB S FRIEND;
i ll try for the general!
CALEB;
i ll try to cover you!
GENERAL;
this pistol will reduce you both to ashes!
CALEB;
hu, ho!
VVVVRRRROOOAAAM! [ROARING TRUCK ENGINE CRUNCHING THE GENERAL S MEN]
CALEB;
ALRIGHT!!!
SWAT TEAM MEMBER;
GET THE GENERAL!!!
CRRRAAASH! [TRUCK HITTING THE BUS]
CALEB;
HEY!
LOOKOUT!!!
GENERAL;
LET S GO...NOW!!!
GENERAL;
we ll be back!
GENERAL;
...and they ll regret this!
CALEB;
the general s leaving!
CALEB;
STOP HIM!!!
SWAT MEMBER;
I CAN T!
this truck s had it!
it won t get us anywhere!
SWAT TEAM MEMBER;
it s no use!
it s dead!
CALEB;
well, i ll get him someday...
i swear!
MAYOR;
that s it!
Cybercity s independance from the GF is over!
MAYOR;
look at this disaster!
MAYOR;
they are going to seize our assets to repair this!
MAYOR;
mr harris is going to enjoy this a lot!
MAYOR;
we re finished!
CHIEF OF POLICE;
don t worry mr mayor,
we ll manage something!
CHIEF OF POLICE;
did nt you say you wanted to have races here?
while i never was enthousiastic about it,
i find it very interestring now...
MAYOR;
yes,but,we ll have to borrow,
we can t present races in the city s present state!
DEUS;
well, that was an adventure!
WILL;
definitively different than behind my desk!
ZAK;
well, i like spaceships better!
DEUS;
we ll have to get together again sometime!
WILL;
you can count on it!
ZAK;
as long as it does nt involve fighting armors!
ALL;
LOL!!!
CONSTRUCTION WORKER;
ouh, this weights tons!
CHIEF OF POLICE;
is nt the judge a good friend of mr richmond?
MAYOR;
yes, but, he s friendlier with HIS money!
...we ll see!
WHILE BACK AT THE POLICE STATION...
CHARLIE;
ok, almost out of here!
PEOPLE IN THE STREETS;
THE GF MILITARY IS COMING!
LET S GET OUT OF HERE!
CHARLIE;
mmm, good idea!
CHARLIE;
but, how?...
BIKER;
HEY!
charlie, you re out?
CHARLIE;
yeah!
...and no thanks to you!!!
CHARLIE;
but, things will get back to normal now...
CHARLIE;
i need a bike...
and yours is nice!
BLAM, BLAM! [gun shots]
BIKER;
hhhhaaaarrg!
CHARLIE;
no one calls me charlie anymore...
i ve become...the PUMPKIN TERROR!
GANG;
heu, ok, cha..pumpkin terror...boss!
CHARLIE;
now, let s head back home!
CHARLIE;
i promise you an era of terror like you ve never seen before!
CHIEF OF POLICE;
and, that s how it happened!
now, the GF will reconstruct the city,
but, they ll also have control of it too!
CREATORS LOG;
and that s how it ends this first story!
it was supposed to be much longer,
but, due to different problems,
i had to shorten it a bit,
i hope it s not too disapointing!
all comments and critics appreciated!
Cyberstory 20
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May 14, 2012 |
@romy, thanks! no, I don t know brickwars, if I d had more experience, I d have better pics of those scenes, I often took them over the same color, [ex; red robot in front of red building] so, it s confusing, more close ups would also be better, I hope I ll have the chance to do better next time! |
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May 13, 2012 |
some of your moc like this, are the ideal place to play Brikwars battles, I don't know if you're a fan of that game, but the impressive scenes of your dioramas are really really OK |
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May 12, 2012 |
Quoting Romy British
thanks romy! I have uploaded it here also, under the same name, yeah, I wanted my moc friends to know it was me, at the time, I was nt sure I d make it!
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April 12, 2012 |
Such mayhem! lol, never a dull moment with CyberFrank... |
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April 10, 2012 |
thanks guys! my first stop motion is on you tube, entitled 'street racing in cybercity'! |
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April 10, 2012 |
Awsome,just awsome!:) |
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April 10, 2012 |
Total carnage! I love it. The car stuck in the building is brilliant. I cant wait to see your stop motion. Thanks for your comments :) |
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February 10, 2012 |
Why haven't you posted? |
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November 6, 2011 |
Great fight, but what a MESS! Should be interesting what happens next. Better get cracking! |
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October 28, 2011 |
Nice! I really like the techniques you used for the bank, it looks great! |
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Jasper Vinkenvleugel October 26, 2011 |
Yeah!! Nice end!! |
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October 26, 2011 |
Nice, I like the damaged yellow building, good job with the construction vehicles helping out afterwards as well |
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October 25, 2011 |
Wow just wow!!! |
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October 24, 2011 |
awesome series! are you gong to do more? |
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October 24, 2011 |
très jolie cloture l'ami! Ca a du etre beaucoup de travail! =) |
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October 24, 2011 |
Great..! |
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October 22, 2011 |
Quoting Ben Cossy
thanks a lot ben!!! |
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October 22, 2011 |
Quoting David Calvet
merci david! j y travaille, en plus gros, #2 c est l ordinateur principal de la ville, elle est domotisee!
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October 22, 2011 |
Such a brilliant story with such a brilliant ending! Great work ;) |
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October 22, 2011 |
Dommage que la ville soit à moitié détruite... J'espère que tu vas la reconstruire ! Sinon, c'est quoi la machine bizarre que l'on voit sur la dernière image ? |
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October 22, 2011 |
thanks guys! |
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October 22, 2011 |
More to come...? I think the Pumpkin Terror's bike is the coolest thing I've ever seen. |
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October 21, 2011 |
Awesome story Frank bravo. Look forward to the next season lol |
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October 21, 2011 |
Awesome conclusion! Very good story, Cyberfrank! |
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October 21, 2011 |
Epic finish, but what's with the escapee? I see more epicness comming! |
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October 21, 2011 |
tout ca pour ca! Non, je plaisante, je reviens tout à l'heure!!! =) |
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October 21, 2011 |
nice :D |
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