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Cyberstory 20
episode 20; the take over final episode!
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FINAL CONCLUSION...

ZAK;
i m moving a little now!

DEUS;
hurry, he s pounding me like there is no tomorrow!




ZAK;
hold on!
i ll kick him!
ooh! he grabbed me!



ZAK;
woahh!
he s ripping this armor in half!




CCRRRUNCH! [armor hitting the hotel]

ZAK;
OUCH!!!



WILL;
i may not have arms anymore, but, i can tackle!!!



DEUS;
however our armors are damaged,
we can still finish this!



ZAK;
or, he ll finish us...



DEUS;
we can t break his cockpit,
but, maybe we can make it fall off!
oh yeah! it s off!!!



DEUS;
he s going down now!



DEUS;
oufff!
on me!!!



GENERAL VARTOK;
a group of people are following me!
stop them!!!



GENERAL VARTOK;
all is nt lost,
we still have the money!
HURRY!!!



GENERAL VARTOK;
maybe they can rid me of those pests!



CALEB MC SNIPER;
COME ON!
we still have to stop the general!

CALEB S FRIEND;
they re way too strong!
we can t even slow them down!



CALEB S FRIEND;
i ll try for the general!

CALEB;
i ll try to cover you!



GENERAL;
this pistol will reduce you both to ashes!

CALEB;
hu, ho!



VVVVRRRROOOAAAM! [ROARING TRUCK ENGINE CRUNCHING THE GENERAL S MEN]

CALEB;
ALRIGHT!!!

SWAT TEAM MEMBER;
GET THE GENERAL!!!



CRRRAAASH! [TRUCK HITTING THE BUS]

CALEB;
HEY!
LOOKOUT!!!



GENERAL;
LET S GO...NOW!!!



GENERAL;
we ll be back!



GENERAL;
...and they ll regret this!

CALEB;
the general s leaving!



CALEB;
STOP HIM!!!

SWAT MEMBER;
I CAN T!
this truck s had it!
it won t get us anywhere!



SWAT TEAM MEMBER;
it s no use!
it s dead!



CALEB;
well, i ll get him someday...
i swear!



MAYOR;
that s it!
Cybercity s independance from the GF is over!



MAYOR;
look at this disaster!



MAYOR;
they are going to seize our assets to repair this!



MAYOR;
mr harris is going to enjoy this a lot!



MAYOR;
we re finished!

CHIEF OF POLICE;
don t worry mr mayor,
we ll manage something!



CHIEF OF POLICE;
did nt you say you wanted to have races here?
while i never was enthousiastic about it,
i find it very interestring now...



MAYOR;
yes,but,we ll have to borrow,
we can t present races in the city s present state!



DEUS;
well, that was an adventure!

WILL;
definitively different than behind my desk!

ZAK;
well, i like spaceships better!



DEUS;
we ll have to get together again sometime!

WILL;
you can count on it!

ZAK;
as long as it does nt involve fighting armors!

ALL;
LOL!!!



CONSTRUCTION WORKER;
ouh, this weights tons!



CHIEF OF POLICE;
is nt the judge a good friend of mr richmond?



MAYOR;
yes, but, he s friendlier with HIS money!
...we ll see!



WHILE BACK AT THE POLICE STATION...

CHARLIE;
ok, almost out of here!



PEOPLE IN THE STREETS;
THE GF MILITARY IS COMING!
LET S GET OUT OF HERE!

CHARLIE;
mmm, good idea!



CHARLIE;
but, how?...



BIKER;
HEY!
charlie, you re out?

CHARLIE;
yeah!
...and no thanks to you!!!



CHARLIE;
but, things will get back to normal now...



CHARLIE;
i need a bike...
and yours is nice!

BLAM, BLAM! [gun shots]

BIKER;
hhhhaaaarrg!



CHARLIE;
no one calls me charlie anymore...
i ve become...the PUMPKIN TERROR!

GANG;
heu, ok, cha..pumpkin terror...boss!



CHARLIE;
now, let s head back home!



CHARLIE;
i promise you an era of terror like you ve never seen before!



CHIEF OF POLICE;
and, that s how it happened!
now, the GF will reconstruct the city,
but, they ll also have control of it too!



CREATORS LOG;
and that s how it ends this first story!
it was supposed to be much longer,
but, due to different problems,
i had to shorten it a bit,
i hope it s not too disapointing!

all comments and critics appreciated!




Cyberstory 20



Comments

 I made it 
  May 14, 2012
@romy, thanks! no, I don t know brickwars, if I d had more experience, I d have better pics of those scenes, I often took them over the same color, [ex; red robot in front of red building] so, it s confusing, more close ups would also be better, I hope I ll have the chance to do better next time!
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  May 13, 2012
some of your moc like this, are the ideal place to play Brikwars battles, I don't know if you're a fan of that game, but the impressive scenes of your dioramas are really really OK
 I made it 
  May 12, 2012
Quoting Romy British thanks romy! I have uploaded it here also, under the same name, yeah, I wanted my moc friends to know it was me, at the time, I was nt sure I d make it!
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  May 11, 2012
Cool moc and this video is amazing http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fV3gx4Wij7Y you're in the final sequence on your motorcycle !!! Really cool, congrats again !
 I like it 
  April 12, 2012
Such mayhem! lol, never a dull moment with CyberFrank...
 I made it 
  April 10, 2012
thanks guys! my first stop motion is on you tube, entitled 'street racing in cybercity'!
 I like it 
  April 10, 2012
Awsome,just awsome!:)
 I like it 
  April 10, 2012
Total carnage! I love it. The car stuck in the building is brilliant. I cant wait to see your stop motion. Thanks for your comments :)
 I like it 
  February 10, 2012
Why haven't you posted?
 I like it 
  January 8, 2012
Giant builds. And honored to be nominated in 1 category of the Tall tales Awards 2011. Support here: http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=18493&topicid=75915
 I like it 
  November 6, 2011
Great fight, but what a MESS! Should be interesting what happens next. Better get cracking!
 I like it 
  October 28, 2011
Nice! I really like the techniques you used for the bank, it looks great!
cyberfrank 2010
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Jasper Vinkenvleugel
  October 26, 2011
Yeah!! Nice end!!
 I like it 
  October 26, 2011
Nice, I like the damaged yellow building, good job with the construction vehicles helping out afterwards as well
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  October 25, 2011
Wow just wow!!!
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  October 24, 2011
awesome series! are you gong to do more?
 I like it 
  October 24, 2011
très jolie cloture l'ami! Ca a du etre beaucoup de travail! =)
 I like it 
  October 24, 2011
Great..!
 I made it 
  October 22, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy thanks a lot ben!!!
 I made it 
  October 22, 2011
Quoting David Calvet merci david! j y travaille, en plus gros, #2 c est l ordinateur principal de la ville, elle est domotisee!
 I like it 
  October 22, 2011
Such a brilliant story with such a brilliant ending! Great work ;)
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  October 22, 2011
Dommage que la ville soit à moitié détruite... J'espère que tu vas la reconstruire ! Sinon, c'est quoi la machine bizarre que l'on voit sur la dernière image ?
 I made it 
  October 22, 2011
thanks guys!
 I like it 
  October 22, 2011
More to come...? I think the Pumpkin Terror's bike is the coolest thing I've ever seen.
 I like it 
  October 21, 2011
Awesome story Frank bravo. Look forward to the next season lol
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  October 21, 2011
Awesome conclusion! Very good story, Cyberfrank!
 I like it 
  October 21, 2011
Epic finish, but what's with the escapee? I see more epicness comming!
 I like it 
  October 21, 2011
tout ca pour ca! Non, je plaisante, je reviens tout à l'heure!!! =)
 I like it 
  October 21, 2011
nice :D
 
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