Well, I watched the whole series few times (6-7), so I could call myself an A:TLA geek. This is my favorite episode from 2nd season, and this is 100% my favorite part of it. Song "Leaves for the Vine" is so wonderfull, and this scene is very sad. You've made it very well, but there's many things you did wrong in it. Only thing that actually bothers me is that there's no Iroh. Nice job, but I still like Runamock's MOC better. Here's a link to it:
http://www.eurobricks.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=58759