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Dewan, Waters of the Eastern Seas
Don't worry, she's a WHOLE lot better than last time :D Anyway, here is the 3rd last member of Lotem I will post... Dewan :D After this it's Arvach :) Anyway, enjoy!
About this creation
"The ocean shelters me, heals me... and obeys me."
Dewan

(Bio)
Name: Dewan
Gender: Female
Species: Ga-Matoran
Element: Water
Title(s): Toa, sister, ‘That Chick With the Gun’
Mask: Kanohi Faxon
Weapon(s): Large Gunblade (Greeble 2000)
Story: Dewan was an extremely smart Matoran, who was the smartest in her village and was always studying. Whenever she wasn’t she was teaching younger Matoran and sometimes even Toa on things like history or even how to fight! When Toa Hahli was sent to guard Dewan's village she took great interest in Dewan, she realised that she would make an excellent Toa with her knowledge! Hahli offered Dewan a Toa stone, but she took no interest in being a Toa, she was happy as she was, but Hahli persisted for days, weeks, until Dewan gave in. Hahli trained Dewan until she became a powerful and smart Toa. Dewan and Hahli became great friends, but Hahli was assigned to an important mission and Dewan was forced to guard her old city, in this time she was sent to Le-Koro to put out a Bush fire, little did she know she would be meeting a Makuta there and would also have to defeat him! She and two other Toa did, and they were hailed as heroes! Dewan and Furven’s (One of the Toa who helped stop the Makuta) Were later assigned to join The Toa Lotem.




Here she is better than ever after all her upgrades :D You like?



A back shot :) By the way, credit to Adam Toh for the torso design :D I did change it a bit though ;)



Her new feet, a lot better than last time, last time they were...horrible.



Her legs :D



Her upper legs :)



Her skirt, I'm pleased with how this turned out!



The back of her legs.



The back of her skirt, where oddly enough there is no skirt 0.o



Her chest now with a heartlight :)



Her back, I'm pleased with how this part turned out :D



Her mask and upper body.



Her hair, I'm pleased with this part :) You like it?



Her shoulders, I love Nuva shoulders so much :]



Her lower arms.



Her gun known as the GreebleGun for obvious reasons, Credit to Adam Toh for this ;)



Another look at it :)



Dewan: Behold my power!



Another pose.



Cute/girly/shy/can't think of a word to describe it pose :]



Getting ready to shoot :)



Cossy with Dewan :D Also sadly no "Everyone I've posted so far shot" because Furven's is begin revamped :)



Size comparison with Ackar :D



Dewan: See ya!

Well that's all for now! Hope you liked her :D Soon I'm post Arvach :D
Thanks for viewing!
Don't forget to rate and comment!
Till next time ;)



Comments

 I like it 
  April 11, 2014
Cute, this is a cute moc. The only thing that could've been improved is that maybe she could have a rahkshi head, but that is my opinion. I just love rahkshi heads, but i LOVE how the faxon fits in. Great work.....as usual.
 I made it 
  August 15, 2013
Not anytime soon but yes sir
 I like it 
  August 15, 2013
Dat smell...is dat smell a team revamp Cossy? ;)
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  August 15, 2013
Nah, just don't like her. Oh but she will be revamped for sure :)
 I like it 
  August 14, 2013
I don't know why you don't like it,I for one think it's a great Moc.(though a revamp would be nice XD)
 I made it 
  April 22, 2012
Thanks :)
 I like it 
  March 29, 2012
love the updates :)
 I made it 
  March 16, 2012
Get on Skype or Neatchat foo!
  March 16, 2012
Your alive, mate!
 I made it 
  February 9, 2012
Glad you guys like her :)
  January 31, 2012
AWESOME!!!!
 I like it 
  January 15, 2012
OMG, weapon is amazing!!!
 I made it 
  December 10, 2011
Really? Wow thanks! To be honest I feel she's the worst and that she really needs a revamp. Anyway glad you like her :) Oh and it comes from this set, http://lego.wikia.com/wiki/4868_Rahaga_Gaaki
 I like it 
  December 9, 2011
Awesome, this is the best one other than Furven! Btw,what set did you get the dark blue rahkshi head in?
 I made it 
  November 6, 2011
Cheers ;)
Ben Cossy
 I like it 
Groundquake 9911
  November 5, 2011
Fantastic!I must warn you though, You're a member of my group Bionicle 2012,and I wish that you stay active and contribute ideas and not only creations.I'm cleaning up the group and if you do not respond to this message,I'm afraid You will be removed.This is a warning.
Ben Cossy
Groundquake 9911
  November 5, 2011
Like I said good work here.And thanks for responding,I'll keep you on the list.
 I made it 
  November 5, 2011
Oh I'm sorry, I'll try and be a bit more active then.
 I made it 
  October 17, 2011
Thanks!
 I like it 
  October 17, 2011
awsome moc dude!
 I made it 
  October 16, 2011
Will do Reese! Thanks a bunch Liam!
 I like it 
  October 15, 2011
That is a lot better than the original!! Would you mind looking at this http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/291234 I really hate asking for comments but this is my first bionicle posted on mocpages. I've been building with them since they came out.
Ben Cossy
NoWhereMan .
  October 14, 2011
well, I haven't commented yet so. I give it a three. I like the MOC, but there's also something that I don't like. The skirt is fantastic so that should be kept. however, the arms really don't look that great. I wouldn't horrible though. But what really bugs me is the hair. I tried using that piece for Larillia when she was first being created, but I couldn't stand the look of it. You don't have to change it of course. Also, she always looks like she's slouching around her neck. It just doesn't seem to add up.
 I like it 
  October 14, 2011
This is really well-done. My favorite part is probably the skirt; the piece usage for it is awesome. Nice stuff :D
 I made it 
  October 14, 2011
Will do Jensen. Thanks Kalik, I didn't SELP. I got it from Dew (as in the water on the grass in the morning) and just added an :)
 I like it 
  October 13, 2011
Cool! *coughyourippedoffdevan'snamecough*
 I like it 
  October 13, 2011
Great, I like the left hand, shoulder pads, and gun. :).
  October 11, 2011
Hey, you know how i was bugging you to make a senate floating thing? well i made it, could you look at it plz? (and comment) http://mocpages.com/moc.php/290308 thanks!
 I like it 
  October 11, 2011
Awesome! I really like the skirt, but you should probably have it go all the way around. Ben, you said you would tell me how to judge 7 days ago. Could you do that soon?
 I made it 
  October 10, 2011
Thanks you guys! Glad you like her :D
 I like it 
  October 10, 2011
yeah, a lot better than last time. Those old feet made her legs look really twiggy. i like what you done here mate, especially the hair. XD
 I like it 
  October 10, 2011
Nice techniques at work here :)
  October 9, 2011
Hey Ben, join me for FB chat?
 I made it 
  October 9, 2011
Thanks.
 I like it 
  October 8, 2011
Cool!!
 I made it 
  October 8, 2011
Well that's cool and all but why are you telling me all this?
  October 8, 2011
The inspiration came from Norenji, you know. Nathan Ingerson's Self MOC, he had short arms and long legs. Which looked awesome.
 I made it 
  October 8, 2011
Ok
  October 8, 2011
I was going for a more "samurai" look.
 I made it 
  October 8, 2011
I know.
  October 8, 2011
Thanks! BTW that isn't the actual NEW Destrin it was just a certain "different form" of him :P
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  October 8, 2011
Done.
  October 8, 2011
Mind commenting and giving critique on these? Galvis http://mocpages.com/moc.php/290516 and Destrin http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/290515
 I made it 
  October 8, 2011
I don't think you did, thanks Legofreak and thanks Oblivious ;)
 I like it 
  October 7, 2011
Happy Moc Anaverasry.
  October 7, 2011
Hey Cossy, did I already say Happy MOCiversery? Well, if I didn't, Happy MOCiversery! :D
 I made it 
  October 7, 2011
HAHA :P
  October 7, 2011
How far can you reach? I've reached farther into the universe and maybe in a few other galaxies, but you know :P
 I made it 
  October 7, 2011
Oh I do that all the time so I'm good :)
  October 7, 2011
But it works when your riding on a flying rainbow-eating blue elephant! :D
 I made it 
  October 7, 2011
Thanks Legobob, Hmmm... I see your point, I do like it though, maybe I'll move it so it looks like it's touching the mask more. Ah what a shame S.T.S :/
  October 7, 2011
Product does not work in space or Tardis.
 I like it 
  October 7, 2011
Awesome! She is so cool :] The feet are a mighty great improvement :D But I'm not too sure about the hair, it doesn't seem to... flow like hair does. Nice skirt :) Keep up that good work!
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  October 7, 2011
OH that's awesome Popcorn! Can't wait to see more :] Just what I wanted S.T.S, now I can live in space :3
  October 7, 2011
CORRECT! DING DING DING! YOU WIN A LIFE SUPPLIES OF OXYGEN! :D
 I like it 
  October 7, 2011
Happy B-day, S.T.S! Hey, Ben, I just wanted to tell you that I have started a secret project. Go to Helix's page to find a hint. Here's a link http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/282146.
 I made it 
  October 7, 2011
-3.14 :3 Nah just kidding, I'm guessing 12?
  October 7, 2011
Can you guess how old I am now?
 I made it 
  October 7, 2011
Happy Birthday!
  October 7, 2011
It's my birthday!
 I made it 
  October 7, 2011
Thanks guys! Cheers Popcorn! Oh well, get better soon ;) I see Pho, ok, my next project will be back up to the right leave, I promise ;) I'll take a look Nick :) That's a bit harsh A.D, maybe some advice to improving it would be nice please. Thanks Brickprime! Thanks Red-Eye and Cyborg! Thanks Galaxus, yeah, I might find a replacement for that!
 I like it 
  October 7, 2011
Guess who's baaaaack??? Awesome job here! The feet and torso are awesome! So is everything else! However, about the lower arms. That piece is under a lot of stress, it may not break but... OUCH! That's all I have to say for now :)
 I like it 
  October 6, 2011
Woah!! Its a girl! A great girl at that too!!!!
 I like it 
  October 6, 2011
Impressive Ben! I really like what you did with the legs and the lower body. It paricitally brings out character and really nice dersigns. Great work! :D
 I like it 
  October 6, 2011
Great job Cossy!!! Love her feet!!! I like how you did her hair!!! Good choice of mask!!! Oh, Happy Belated MOCiversery!!!
Ben Cossy
A.D Lord of Darkness
  October 5, 2011
it's fine, but the arms are simply appalling.
 I like it 
  October 5, 2011
great build Cossy, Just as a suggestion maybe you could put the front part of the skirt onto the back to make it look more ninja. Also could you please check out my new self moc, Toa Magnum, He's a significant upgrade of korra. ~ Nick
 I like it 
  October 5, 2011
Ya know i love the concept but it feels like your falling in that rut again where your mocs just aren't as complex as i'd expect. The legs are very basic. love the feet. The body up to your high standard but where it really fell flat was the arms. just very simple not much too them and overall just not the greatest aesthetically wise. I know i'm being very critical but I think this could be something great and right now it's just average. Hope you don't take this the wrong way. Pho
 I like it 
  October 5, 2011
Very nice, Ben, very nice. I really like her colors and all. She looks LOADS better than before. Sadly, I don't feel like writing a long comment today. My sis is sick and I think I'm getting a cold. So I'm not feeling the best. I really like her gun, and her feet are spectacular. Great job!!!
 I made it 
  October 5, 2011
Thanks guys! Oh well cheers Jensen! That means a lot :) Wait what are you saying Ben? Cheers Gringat! Those are the kinda comment I freaking love! I'll totally take your advice on hand ;) It's a new MOC Windedge :) Sounds cool Nick! Thanks Grievous and L! Thanks Cody! I'll take your advice on hand! Well Iceman, thank you for your advice, however, like Adam said not all MOC's need that kinda look, still, I will totally use your advice on later Female MOC's. Thank you Crazy! You advice is always the best! I'm glad you like her, I'll totally follow your advice mate ;) Thanks Legofreak! Thanks Kenaz! That means a lot, ok, I'll change her, thanks ;) Thanks a bunch Connor! I will totally follow your advice (not just for her, but for future MOC's :D) Thanks Adam! Thanks Ware Wolf! Thanks Vored! That's some great advice! I'll take it on hand ;) Thanks everyone else ;)
 I like it 
  October 5, 2011
LOVEloveLOVE that head design! Great work on overall aquatic theme, too!
 I like it 
  October 5, 2011
Great Toa of water! Even in her size, you make her look very female, and the proportions were very well made. I also like her skirt-thingy! As always, you gave her a nice color sheme. The only thing I doN't like is the neck connection, which makes her head stick out too far. But still gets 5/5!
 I like it 
  October 5, 2011
ok, I got to say, this is AMAZING! those feet r brilliant! the whole thing is awesome! keep it up!
Ben Cossy
 I like it 
Chaos Master
  October 4, 2011
Awesome, the body could be a little more stream-like but it is still awesome, and a lot better than before. (the old feet where kinda...yeah...)
Ben Cossy
 I like it 
Jayce Thomson
  October 4, 2011
Excellent work, again Ben!!! I love the skirt and hair, definitly a female at first sight! Wow, you continually amaze me!!! I've added a bunch of new stuff, if you could look at them? Thanks for EVERYTHING!!! ;)
Ben Cossy
Jayce Thomson
  October 4, 2011
Thanks! :) You rock!
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
MUCH better bro. No complaints except for her neck making her head stick out a bit. And @Glacies, not all Fe-MOCs and real life girls have big hips - _- The definition of feminine is vast
  October 4, 2011
One more thing, and this is just my honest opinion, but I don't think the gun suits her at all. :( Sorry.
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
I actually really like the torso! :P Much better than your last one, but I feel the limbs are severely lacking. One thing I've learned form the 2 female MOCs I've built, is that you need to keep a good balance between the amount of armor on the limbs compared to the torso. Proportion is crucial, but anatomy (You know what I mean) doesn't really matter. (It only does if you can make it work.) What I would do is either beef up the limbs or slim down the body. Other than all that I think she looks fine. Also, I really like where the Nuva Shoulders are. If you do end up changing her, I'd like to see that remain on the MOC. :) That is all. XD
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
Not bad but she is taller than Cossy :D
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
It could use some more trans-blue and less grey maybe, but it is still super-awesome! Those custom feet are just ingenious. :)
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
what kenaz said.
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
I agree somewhat with Glacies, she could use work, and she doesn't look as feminine as she could, and I think the gun is a. Too big and b. Impractical (I think that a water toa would want more 'smooth' weapons, you know?). I'm sorry if I sound like I don't like her. She's great, but with work, she could be fantastic.
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
Sweet! Not your best, but it's still nice. :) I think you should put some trans blue on the upper torso and arms, it looks a little uneven with the trans blue pieces on her legs and feet but not the rest of her. :) Can't wait for more bro. BTW, Happy MOCiversery! :D
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
Ahh...much better than your last version. She's been beefed up and greebled heavily, which I like, and I'm especially fond of the torso and the lower legs. However, I think this one still has the most room for improvement: as mentioned earlier, the thighs and open greeble sockets are a bit unattractive. Great job though, and I can't wait for Arvach!
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
Definitely not your best. She isn't very feminine at all. She has a lack of proper thighs. She also seems a little generic, just another personality-less water toa. She certainly needs work, but it can be easy to fix her up :D
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
I hear ya bro! Nuva shoulders for the win!
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
Wicked!
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  October 4, 2011
Fantastic! The empty sockets sticking out everywhere are distracting, bot other than that, I really like her.
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
Nice work! A few things though: The gun needs a longer stock; the socket greebles on her armor leave lots of odd little gaps, try filling those in; and her overall build isn't extremely feminine. Try exaggerating it with that hourglass figure. ;D
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
very cool! i love the weapon and the skirt was a nice touch!
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
MUCH better then last time. Especially the feet.
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
awesome! love that skirt. I am making a Fe-MOC. she is a Toa of magnesium.
  October 4, 2011
Awesome saucey cossy
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  October 4, 2011
i like ur new lok :) i love the moc and how it turned out^^
  October 4, 2011
I like the skirt idea, but the rest doesn't really fit for me...
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  October 4, 2011
Very cool and MUCH better feet. The gun is pretty cool and I like the skirt. I do think that you should replace some silver with blue. Can't wait for Arvach. Compared to your first one with the Pohatu Nuva mask, well, he is much better. Wait a sec! Is Woodhammer a new or old moc? If old, then I know who it is... :)
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
Masterful, although a couple of tips might be to make the thighs more smooth in build than those loose pins, and maybe to move her neck joint back by half a stud or so. She looks a bit stooped the way she is. Otherwise, I have no complaints, the skirt is brilliant... and she looks disconcertingly like one of my MOC-off entries against you, but no matter!
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
i like those feet very much....they look like....combat boots.....i hope you dont mind if i (attempt to) use them
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  October 4, 2011
This is a very heavy mask. Very feminine. But without glass, with rowel, very evil. ...and excellent photos!
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  October 4, 2011
WOW! =D All the TOA Lotem of Biblical! Can't wait to see the the rest and Project Woodhammer!
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  October 4, 2011
for some reason i cannot think of i have a problem with her mask, other than that amasing.
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  October 4, 2011
Nice! I really like the skirt idea!
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  October 4, 2011
oh yah the gun is awesome to one bad girl ;)
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  October 4, 2011
Probably the best water bionicle yet, so streamlined!
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  October 4, 2011
Thanks Carrubba! HAHA thanks Callan ;) Thanks Mr. Echo. Cheers Ben! That means a lot :D
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  October 4, 2011
Wow! ALOT better than the first one! I really like the feet, and the GREEBLES! Awesome job!
 I like it 
  October 4, 2011
Cool
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  October 4, 2011
You know my thoughts already, so I'm just gonna say this is GOLD!!! Well, technically it's blue. ;)
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  October 4, 2011
very very nice ,,great weapon...
 I made it 
  October 4, 2011
Sure I'll take a look Jayce, glad you like her :)
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  October 4, 2011
Thanks Austin! Thanks Owl, I'm really glad you like her ;)
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  October 4, 2011
Ooooh, very nice Ben! I love the skirt and lack-there-of, that is funny XD. That gun is awesome. Great job! I can't wait to see the rest!
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  October 4, 2011
awesome the mask looks cool with that head looks a bit like a zombie really cool torso to!
 I made it 
  October 4, 2011
Thanks Nick, your advice is very helpful :) And thanks Maxus :) Glad you like her ;)
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  October 4, 2011
She looks a lot better now. Like the hair/tail, skirt. Biography is very nice.
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  October 4, 2011
don't know ow I feel about the feet but the rest is great, a tip woupd be to change the hand pieces that connect the arms, that way it will be more flush
 
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