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order 66: jedi temple story (part one comic)
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Clone: FOR THE RE- Urrk!! Battle droid: die republic dogs!!

Battle droid: OH NOO!!!

*slice chop* Battle droid: UUnngh!

MEANWHILE... Clone to left: c'mon! Finish these droids!!

Clone to the left: That's it... all hostiles removed.

Clone: LOOK! It's the general!

Jackson: Good work men! Another battle post captured!

Jackson: good work, trooper Clone: Thank you sir, let's get back to the rest of the troops.

clone: the captain wants to talk to you, sir.

Jackson: you wanted to talk to me, captain? Clone on right: yes... some bad news

Clone on right: We are getting the news that most of the Jedi protecting the temple have already been killed.

Jackson: WHAT?! How could most of the Jedi in this temple be defeated by weak battle droids?!!

I'm not sure, but it's probably is about to happen to you, sir.

Jackson: A TRAITOR ?!! WHAT IS THIS ALL ABOUT?!

Clone: It's for the better, sir.

Clone: the Chancellor's orders were very clear.



clone: prepare to be annihilated.

Commander Jackson: you traitors leave me with only one... choice.

Anger pulses through Commander Jackson...

... and makes the General go into a period of madness



Voice: fool, stop toying with those idiots...

... and face me

General Jackson: A clone with a lightsaber... this is new.

Clone Commander: Take that Jedi out! Heavy trooper: With pleasure.



Our Jedi narrowly avoids a bullet from the heavy trooper

Jackson gives a jaw- smashing kick in the face to one clone

Jackson quickly kills the commander's other guard...

... and faces the last clone standing.



Commander Jackson: DIE TRAITOR!!

The Clone Commander delivers a bruising kick to Commander Jackson. Commander Jackson: UUnnggh!

Clone Commander: prepare to die, fool!

Commander Jackson: I... think... NOT!

Commander Jackson uses the force on a destroyed walker

The walker shoots straight at the commander

The fallen walker slams into the clone commander with stunning momentum...

...causing the tank and the clone to fall off the edge, and plummet to his death

Commander Jackson walks away, seething with revenge and hate...

...now with only one new quest...

...to destroy the jedi's former army
TO BE CONTINUED...




Comments

 I like it 
  August 13, 2012
Nice story!
 I like it 
  October 19, 2011
that's a nice story!!!!
 I like it 
  October 5, 2011
Nice story!
 I like it 
  October 1, 2011
love it im going to post some old star wars stuff
 I made it 
  October 1, 2011
Quoting LegoBoy 12 I love it. Can't wait for second part
Thanks! The second part will come out a few days after I come up with an idea! I already have a pretty good plot now.
 I like it 
  October 1, 2011
I love it. Can't wait for second part
 I made it 
  September 29, 2011
Quoting Harry 863 Cool. I like his custom lightsaber. Have a look at my stuff :)
Thanks. I really didn't want my guy to have a boring lightsaber, so I spiced it up a bit.
 I like it 
  September 29, 2011
Cool. I like his custom lightsaber. Have a look at my stuff :)
 
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