The fifth chapter in my story. Sorry it took so long!
About this creation
Jatoh: Did we lose them?
Nartuk: I think so.
Derepor: Well, I don't.
Derepor: Go get Makuta, Rahkshi.
Jatoh: You're outnumbered, Derepor!
Derepor: Not for long. Besides, with the powers Makuta has given me, I can take on three toa any day.
Derepor knocks down Nartuk and sets his sights on Jatoh.
Jatoh stabs with his spear, but only hits air, because Derepor dodges and blocks Hukon's blow.
Derepor trips Jatoh and bears down on Hukon.
Derepor pins Hukon to the ground.
Nartuk turns on his mask of speed and slams into Derepor.
???: Well done, toa
Makuta: Well done indeed.
Makuta: You, however, Derepor, have failed me.
Makuta: And failure cannot be tolerated.
Makuta: Will you still not join me?
Nartuk: I just saw what happened to the last fool who joined you.
Makuta: Very true, but that will happen to you anyway.
Nartuk: It looks like the tables have turned.
Makuta: It does look that way. Haha!
That's the end of another episode. I know, it was short again, no one died again, and there was only fighting. Oh well. Next episode some of that will change. By the way, in case you wondered, I'm just making these episodes up as I go along. I have the next episode planned, (And it will be epic and involve me making more MOC's for it) but that's it. And to all who wonder why Makuta didn't bring backup: He did. they are just waiting for him to call them to come through the portal, and it's not like he needs it (SPOILER).
I gave in and made some pokemon! I used to play the game, but I don't anymore. These were fun to build anyway.
My sigfigure and my favorite pokemon, Sandshrew.
My second favorite, Sandslash.
I don't think anyone has made sandslash or sandshrew in gold. Sandslash's ears are C-3PO hands by the way.
Gligar's body is a scorpion, which I think looks pretty good.
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DANG! Those are some freaking epic Pokemon mate! LOVE them all so much, oh right, meant to be commenting on the comic :P Nice chapter mate! Really like the part were Makuta killed Derepor, love it when people do stuff like that :P Anyway, brilliant work! Can't wait for more ;)