The 1st chapter of my all new comic series of the 717 Special Ops has been released,enjoy.
About this creation
(STAR WARS THEME SONG PLAYING)
Tom Kane narrating-On the planet of Devaron,Separatist viceroy Nute Gunray has established a small hideout for him to introduce his sinister plans to dominate the planet.
Having noticed that loosing Devaron to the separatists was a great threat,Anakin Skywalker has dispatched the members of the 717 Special Ops to capture the viceroy,and prevent separatist world conquer....

Nute-Hmmmm,I shall discuss this matter with Count Dooku later.Now we must focus on the conquering of this puny planet.
Droid Commander-Roger roger.
Outside the hideout...
Hawk(on comlink)-You guys ready?

Longshot(on comlink)-Oh yeah,lets kick some droid scrap.
Hawk(through comlink)-Shhh,do you want them to know we're here?
Longshot(on comlink)-Ooops,sorry sir.
As they near the entrance...
Hawk places a charge on the entrance door.
*Knock-knock*
Droid-Who's there?
BOOM!!!The door flies open...
...And the real fight begins!
Hawk-Go go go go go!
Wraith-Take em down,take em down!
Droid-Uh-oh!
Five short minutes later...
Evo-What a mess.
Hawk-Well Viceroy,you're coming with us.

Nute-Oh no,you're wrong puny clones. EG-5,NOW!!!!

EG-5-Clones,you've reached your apparent end,now prepare to know the true meaning of pain and suffering!
Evo-This isn't good.
The droid leaps to strike the first two clones it sees.
EG-5-Raaarrrgh!!!!
Clone #1-Aaaaargh!
Clone #2-Aaaack!
Now the droid heads directly toward Commander Hawk!
EG-5-Die Commander!!!

Suddenly,the droid's photoreceptor is hit by a blue colored shot.

Longshot-If there's one thing Wraith taught me about EG-5 Jedi Hunter droids,is how to kill one.

Hawk-Thanks, Longshot.
Longshot-It's my duty sir.

Hawk-Now Viceroy,where were we?
Nute-I will make you pay for this!!
Coming outside....
Hawk(on comlink)-Nix,come in,we need out of here.
Nix(through comlink)-On my way.
Longshot-Uh,commander,I think Nix should wait.
Hawk-Why?
Longshot-Look!

Death Watch Trooper #1-Greetings Clones,I'm afraid to say that the Viceroy is coming with us!
Hawk-Not if we have guns on our hands he's not.
A new battle rages on,Lightning Squad vs. Death Watch,and Death Watch quickly gains the upper hands until....
Death Watch trooper #2-DIE Republic Scum!!!
Boom!Nix arrives on his gunship and blasted the Mandalorian battalion into shreds.
Nix arrives on his gunship and blasted the Mandalorian battalion into shreds.
Nix-Am I too late?
Hawk-You arrived just in time,Nix.

Evo-Now let's get outta here.
Nute-But I don't wanna go,please oh mercy!
Longshot-Oh shut up already!
As they leave,they failed to realize that-
-a Mandalorian survivor had made it safely to contact his employeer.
Mysterious woman voice on comlink-Trooper,report.
Death Watch trooper #1-We failed to get the viceroy back mistress,but we'll catch up to them.
Mysterious woman voice on comlink-You better not fail me!!
Death Watch trooper #1-Don't worry mistress,the Death Watch isn't easily broken;and we will finish our mission,no matter what.
To Be Continued!
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October 2, 2011 |
Thanks. |
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October 2, 2011 |
Very nice! |
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September 29, 2011 |
Thanks guys,episode 2 will be released somewhere in October if I get the time(I get too busy with school work).Or if not,I will release it during Thanksgiving. |
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September 27, 2011 |
Cool! I like that commander Hawk |
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September 26, 2011 |
nice. |
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