Here is my entry for the MocOlympics! I'm happy with how it came out! I tried making a waterfall but that didn't work out so I made this. I like this Idea better anyway. Well enough chat, take a look!
About this creation
Mom: Jimmy? Will you do me a favor?
Jimmy: Sure mom!
Mom: Ok, will you you rake up all the leaves into a pile?
Jimmy: But... But... I did that last week mom!
Mom: I know but there has been a lot of leaves falling since.
Jimmy: But... Theres so many!
Mom: That's why they need to be raked!
Jimmy: But... But... Oh fine!
Jimmy: Stupid leaves.
We will check on little Jimmy later.
Since its fall most of the flowers are dead.
Here is the tree. No leaves because it is fall.
Here is the inside.
No one wants green studded carpet so I put some flooring down.
A nice plant for decoration.
Now to the kitchen. Here is the oven.
Looks like something is baking.
Here is the sink. I know that part of it is black but just use your imagination. Maybe little Jimmy was doing a science experiment for school but something went wrong...
Lets check back on Jimmy.
Looks like he is making some progress.
As you can see, some leaves are caught in the gutters.
Not a big problem to little Jimmy! Small but mighty!
He rakes them down one by one!
Looks like he changed his attitude! He puts a smile on his face and picks up the leaves that were caught in the dead flowers!
*Sings his happy song*
Jimmy: Doo doo dee doo!
... Dee daw dood doo...
Jimmy: Yay! All done!
Mom: I'm proud of my little worker! Come have some pie!
Jimmy: Yay! Thanks mom! Your the best!
Here is the rake.
The only non purist thing in the diorama was the U-clip.
Well tell me what you think!
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Quoting karsten Rees
NICE!! (mind if I use the oven+leaves concept?) I like the oven it's very good and functionable too! five stars!
Thanks! Sure! Just give credit. The oven is not fully functional, I had to fit that pie threw the the back of it. So if you want it to work like that you have to make the inside bigger by making it taller.
Nice build. Good luck in the MIT. I think the story is good but could have been consolidated so there weren't so many pictures. I would have also broken up the grass by using a different shape, Texture, and/or multiple colors for the path. Same with the house. Perhaps break up the roof or add more detail to the foundation to add detail. These little details along with the previous comments about the tree and you will move to the next level.
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Your presentation is very good made and heart-touching. I do like the interior, especially the oven. And nowadays a black sink seems just normal, doesn´t it? I do honor your work and wish you all the best luck for R02!
Think I have a very great grandson with a wonderful imagination and he knows how to use the english language to convey his thoughts in a clear and concise manner. He is also very funny and thoghtful. Keep em comming IceMan. We love you!!