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Hunt For "God" #1: Nebulus
Well, this is part 1 of my new series. i hope you like. sorry there is no real introduction. But i think you'll like this anywayz. anyway, enough chat, lets cut to the action!!
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Leka: Damn, those guys are tough!
Galika: yeah, that silver guy knocked us down with one punch.
Onika: the battle is still going strong

Korapa: who the hell are these guys!

Parah: According to Turaga Trokan, they're ment to be thugs! they're stronger than Makuta!

Benu: i thought these guys would be supid!
Corroder: I don't like being called stupid!

Corroder: in fact i have the cumpulsion to kill mean people like you!!

Onika: i'll take it from here brother!
Corroder: HEY!

Benu: leka, you help Korapa, Galika, you help Parah, and i'll...

...go to the head of the operation!

Nebulus: ah, so one of you survived my minions...oh well, i'll crush you anyway!
Benu: according to files, Two midjets were able to beat you!

Nebulus: yeah, that was before i could do this!
Benu: AAGH!

Galika: I'm worried, will Onika and Benu be able to fight by themselves?

Parah: don't wirry, sister, i'm sure the villans are the ones who should worry!
Corroder: don't hurt me!!

XPlode: hey, you punks are the ones who should worry!
BOOM!

Parah: OW! whats IN those spikes!?!
XPlode: HA! HA! HA!

Thunder: prepare to be crushed, fool!

Thunder:...!

Korapa: no way!



Benu: spill the beans! how are your lackeys so damn powerful?

Nebulus: lets have a bet! if you win this fight, i'll tell you. And if i win, well, then you'll be dead!



XPlode: which one of you will die first?
Parah: take me first.

XPlode: ok then, its your funeral.

Galika: NO!

XPlode: my hand!!



XPlode: no, you die first, you crazy fool!

Corroder: you'll regret fighting this 'bot, punk!

Onika: "'bot"? so that means your only machines?

Corroder: the worst machines, punk!

Thunder: ok then wise guy, eat meteor blaster!

Leka: no chance!
Thunder: aagh!

Thunder: oof!

Leka: he's out.
Korapa, tie him up, and leave him in the corner!

Nebulus:... thunder is out cold.
Benu: then, that means your gunna lose!

Nebulus: FOOL!!! you have to beat ME to get that infomation! Thunder and the rest of my minions have no relevance!

Benu: thats what you think...

Corroder: DIE!

Corroder: W-What are you doing!?!

Corodrer: Y-Y-You just crushed My Meteor blaster!

Onika: if you ever try to mess with the Toa Racta again, i'll not hold back and show no mercy...!

XPlode: regret fighting me yet, woman?

Galika: (thinking) He's crushing me with my own blade!! can't hold much longer!!!

Parah: (thinking) i can't sit on my butt while Galika's getting killed!!

BOOM!
Parah: uugh!

(Galika starts pushing XPlode back)
Galika: thanks Parah, thats the only distraction i need!

XPlode: whoa!!!

Galika: done yet? cos now it's my turn!

Corroder: any last words?

Corroder: aagh!
Leka: it's a bad habit i got, sneaking up behind people!

Onika: that leaves only one of them left!

XPlode: heh heh...

Onika: i think it's best you just surrender!
XPlode: y-yes, i agree.

Benu: you lost, "Nessy"!
Nebulus: oh, and how is that so?

Leka: because your surrounded!

Benu: you know the rules, speak up!
Nebulus: fine, fine! so me and my thugs were looting this temple, yeah...

...and a light appeared and along with it, a giant creature, which dwarfed any one of us...

... he told us he would give us Godhood if we got rid of you, and he gave us powers to do so.

Nebulus: and i must be going now. see ya.
Benu: hey wait, what...

Korapa: ..!

Thunder: Do you think that guy'll be angry?

Xplode: lets hope not...
(to be continued)
WERTMAN'S NOTES


Well, thats the first episode done! i hope you like! and i know your probably angry that i used Hero Factory in my story but i don't care! and do you want me to post my thunder and XPlode revamps or not? please tell me. Oh, and i just want to say when Onika threatened Corroder, he was only bluffing. he's a nice guy really. well, the next part should be up soon. see you then!!



Comments

  August 29, 2012
Ah! :)
 I made it 
  August 28, 2012
Quoting Red-Eyes Rider Yes, I am angry that you used Hero Factory (even though I'll be using a certain character in my story later on, which BTW, already got the Chapter 3 footage and I'm biulding your secondary self-moc right now), but do I care about the HERO factory characters? XD I thought that was gonna be part of your story. Anyway, I'll read the rest! :)
Yes, well, as you will be able to tell by the time you get to the current installment, They do become Important characters :)
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  August 27, 2012
Yes, I am angry that you used Hero Factory (even though I'll be using a certain character in my story later on, which BTW, already got the Chapter 3 footage and I'm biulding your secondary self-moc right now), but do I care about the HERO factory characters? XD I thought that was gonna be part of your story. Anyway, I'll read the rest! :)
 I made it 
  November 20, 2011
Quoting LegoBob 123 WHAT???? I didn't comment on this??? I feel so ashamed... :'( Anyways, this is looking good! Can't wait for the next chap--- Oh wait, it's already up! Lol... Yeah. XD
XD
Wertman 8
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Eathuis 305
  September 14, 2011
We had this conversation about which one i liked the best and i said the second one,now i'm very undecided on what to pick as it is quite hard! They are both brilliant stories!
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  September 14, 2011
WHAT???? I didn't comment on this??? I feel so ashamed... :'( Anyways, this is looking good! Can't wait for the next chap--- Oh wait, it's already up! Lol... Yeah. XD
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting Eathuis 305 We had this conversation about which one i liked the best and i said the second one,now i'm very undecided on what to pick as it is quite hard! They are both brilliant stories!
thats good. sorry i put you under pressure :)
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  September 11, 2011
Quoting Eathuis 305 yes,yes love it love everything about it! I have been looking over the comments we have been having over the past 5 months and i have realised nearly all of them change there tones "e.g...(i spelt WOWZAR,not WOWZER!,thanks for liking it mate!!! Did you see it changes tone! Ha WOWZA!
yah. that is kinda funny XD
Wertman 8
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Eathuis 305
  September 7, 2011
yes,yes love it love everything about it! I have been looking over the comments we have been having over the past 5 months and i have realised nearly all of them change there tones "e.g...(i spelt WOWZAR,not WOWZER!,thanks for liking it mate!!! Did you see it changes tone! Ha WOWZA!
Wertman 8
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  September 5, 2011
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 I made it 
  September 5, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy Freaking awesome mate! Loved that you used Hero Factory, I see nothing wrong with it! Yes please do post your revamps! They look awesome! Anyway, great chapter! This will be awesome!
thanks :D i will post them revamps cos so many people is thumbsing up the idea! and i'm glad you don't mind the hero factory guys in there
 I made it 
  September 5, 2011
Quoting WindEdge Gemini Wow! Very awesome story! Those toa are great (remind me of the Toa Mata) and definetly post the hf revamps! Not to be mean STS, but nobody cares about Destrin. He's not that great.
ok then. i'm glad that they remind you of the original toa, because i made them in their image!
 I made it 
  September 5, 2011
Quoting Austin Durick cool but you should take out the bad launguage if sean kenny sees this you will be banned from moc pages
will i? uh oh! better change that right away!!!
 I made it 
  September 5, 2011
Quoting S.T.S The Forgotten Awesome! Is there gonna be any other characters? Like Destrin? :D
yes, destrins in the next episode :D i had that planned in the first place. but he needs new feet!
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  September 5, 2011
Freaking awesome mate! Loved that you used Hero Factory, I see nothing wrong with it! Yes please do post your revamps! They look awesome! Anyway, great chapter! This will be awesome!
Wertman 8
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JPfan65 Studios
  September 4, 2011
Coolness =D !
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  September 4, 2011
cool but you should take out the bad launguage if sean kenny sees this you will be banned from moc pages
 I like it 
  September 4, 2011
Wow! Very awesome story! Those toa are great (remind me of the Toa Mata) and definetly post the hf revamps! Not to be mean STS, but nobody cares about Destrin. He's not that great.
 I like it 
  September 4, 2011
Even though i'm not to fond of the hero factory guys, i still really liked this!
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  September 4, 2011
Awesome! Is there gonna be any other characters? Like Destrin? :D
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  September 4, 2011
awesome :D
 I made it 
  September 4, 2011
Quoting ARCHANGEL TYREAL . its okay aslong as they DIE!
ha ha! well, they don't really die, but... nah, i wont say, cos then i'd spoil the story!!
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  September 4, 2011
its okay aslong as they DIE!
 I made it 
  September 4, 2011
Quoting JPfan65 Studios Coolness =D !
thanks :D
 
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