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War on the Rogue Part 9: Some ends unmet...
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The conclusion of the OoMN's war on the Rouge. What can happen now?!? Read and find out!
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(WARNING: Chapter contains occasional slightly blurry images. I apologize)

2 hours after the previous happenings....

Luja: Hey Kydretial... How are you doing with the prisoner...

Kydretial: Nothing, Luja... Besides, how did we get this blasted job, anyway?! Cossy and Aridike were gonna take care of this!

Luja: Come on, now! Plans change. Cossy had to take Jordan back to base and was summoned by the current head of the OoMN in Helryx's absence. Aridike decided to go back with the others.... They have had enough of the Rogue today...

Spike: Too bad you haven't....

BLAM!!!
Luja: KYDRETIAL!!! What in Mata Nui?!?

Luja: Agent Luja coming in!! My partner has been murdered, I'm coming back for back up!
Unfortunately, Luja forgot to grab the prisoner in his hurry...

Crash!
Spike: Ha, that should give us a few minutes....

Caldana: Well done Spike!! Now get me out of these chains and let's get outta here!

Spike: As much as I'd love to, my orders were to take Magmagear and finish up his accomplices...

Spike: I prefer the chance to kill, so I'm gonna take it. After all, Momma didn't say anything about shooting girls!
Caldana: Please... No!!...
BLAM!!!

Spike: Surprised your capture wasn't the first thing they took care of... Well you're coming with me.....

Later....

Callan: So you say you saved me from saving you and dying?!?
Aridike: Uh... yes.

Aridike: If only we could have saved Cheesy and Magmagear too! By the way, Cossy never told us how he got the Mask of Time!!

Callan: Well now you can ask him! Here he comes!

Davix: Whoa!!
Aridike: Ill say!! What happened to you?!
Cossy: New armor. My reward for stopping the Rogue. With Jordan barely alive, Ive been given his position....

Callan: Wow, great to hear!! But why do you look so tired...

Cossy: You want a list!? Kulstof escaped from us, who knows what hell do now.... Somebody killed one of our men and Caldana, not to mention they stole Magmagears body.... Urgh... I feel I dont deserve my promotion at all...

Callan: Of course you do! You played a big role in this whole operation!!

Cossy: Well thanks Callan, that means quite a lot.
Aridike: By the way, Cossy, how did you get the Mask of Time anyway?!?

Cossy: How did you.. Oh right, you did use it after all. Well an associate of ours called the Toa of Time helped a group of Toa he had summoned recover the Mask of Time from Nektann the leader of the Skakdi. He told the team he would take care of the mask, but secretly returned it to Tahu as a reward for helping the team. That was the package I got from Tahu a week or so ago....

Cossy: Thats why we needed you on the team. You've proven yourself a good fighter, Aridike, we could use more of your kind in the Order of Mata Nui. Interested?

Aridike: Ive spent all my time here trying to avoid my duties... I think its time I fulfill them... and eventually, my destiny!!

Cossy: Great to have you Aridike!! Consider yourself a member! Just go through that teleporter over there and tell them Cossy sent you!
Aridike: Thank you, Cossy. Farewell, my friends!!
Davix: Later!
Callan: Good luck, Aridike!

Cossy: By the way, my latest orders are to stay here and keep on the watch for the remaining Rogue members! Hey... What is wrong?
Callan: Hmm... Cheesy killed, Jordan injured, and Vazok captured. But I just realized...

Callan: Rogi never came back with us!!!

Meanwhile....

Gaturahk: I beat that Vazzzok up good... He wont lassst long in that desssert...
Veneno: Good... Now to take care of you, Rogi!!
Rogi: No, what are you doing!!!
Veneno: Put him in thisss vat. Toxikeel made it and sssaid drinking it would wipe your memory clean.... I added sssome of my own toxins for fun, who knowsss what will happen to him!!! Now do it!

Rogi: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Rogi: P-pleeeeeeeeeeeease... S-stoooooooop!!!!


Veneno: Ssstop? No thanksss... But I found one of your old hatsss when we moved locationsss...
Veneno: Might asss well take it to your grave or keep it if you manage to sssurvive!

Rahkshika: Veneno, Spike has returned with Magmagear!!
Veneno: Excssssellent! Let us not keep him waiting!

Veneno: Hes ssstill unconscious?!
Spike: Has been ever since I brought him here.
Veneno: Wake him. Painfully.
Spike: A step on the face might do it!!
CRUNCH!!!

Veneno: Nothing.... That would have to hurt, but the lights arent on in there!

Gaturahk: Veneno, I see a gash in his ssstomach!! It appears someone else got him first!

Veneno: Really? Shame... Well, I wasss going to kill him anyway so...

Veneno: Get rid of him!!
Spike: Hey, Ill do what I want, thank you very much!!
Veneno: Urgh... whatever...

Spike: And I want to kick him off!!
KICK!!!


THAM!!
And so, Magmagears once powerful body fell...
Motionless....

All except for a few gears.... slowly turning

Now with one damaged eye, Magmagear rests eternally...

Or does he?

THE END!!!!

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Comments

Caleb Lang
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Puggy Pug
  May 31, 2012
One word. EPIC!
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  April 3, 2012
read/looked at the whole thing. really liked it. great job.
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  September 8, 2011
is it finished now?
  September 4, 2011
well Callan, thanks. But just cause I don't agree with what you did this chapter, doesn't mean you have to change the story.
Caleb Lang
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  September 3, 2011
Hey Callan Can i join in and help?
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  September 3, 2011
:D
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  September 3, 2011
:D
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  September 3, 2011
A decent story even if I hadn't heard of half of the characters. You should use more of your own MOCs. Don't waste your talent!
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  September 3, 2011
cool...
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  September 3, 2011
Another epic ending to another epic story. I look foreward to seeing more of your work, Callan! :)
  September 2, 2011
I can't get skype. :( You sure it's too hard to explain? Ah well... (BTW, you can judge the MOC-Off entries now.)
  September 2, 2011
Hey Callan, two quick questions. 1: Would you like to judge in George G's, Shadow Toa's and my MOC-Off? Thanks if you can, I invited you to the group. And 2: what size tire fits on a HF torso piece? ;)
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  September 2, 2011
Sweet chapter!
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  September 2, 2011
Like Chopper said, there were a few bits in there which were a little weird, like Luja leaves to get backup instead of staying while radioing for backup. And Spike can't tell if a guy's dead or not? Ah well, it was nice anyway. Can't wait for a sequel story. BTW, what's this about scraping 2444 and revamping Cossy? :P
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  September 2, 2011
Great stories always end in: "or is he?". Incredible job! I wish i had the patience to do all that work of typing, an' waiting, an' all that other stuff. Again, Awesome job!
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  September 2, 2011
Awesome story. BTW who is SED? I saw his name on nick nitro bricks page.
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  September 2, 2011
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant I waited until you posted the final chapter before reading the entire thing, and I loved it. Gringat was very well portrayed, Jordan was amazing. If I can make a suggestion though; Gringat is a powerfully religious Lord. He'd likely give funeral rites to some of the dead toa. Probably look after Jojo too. He's not so much of a fighter, especially after getting knocked out so easily before, but he's a brilliant suport guy.
Wow, thanks so much!!! I do wish I had him as a supporting character a little more, I now completely regret cutting all the fighters in the last chapter.... Ah well... :D Thank you so much, maybe I'll have Gringat perform a funeral for Cheesy or something. XD
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  September 2, 2011
I waited until you posted the final chapter before reading the entire thing, and I loved it. Gringat was very well portrayed, Jordan was amazing. If I can make a suggestion though; Gringat is a powerfully religious Lord. He'd likely give funeral rites to some of the dead toa. Probably look after Jojo too. He's not so much of a fighter, especially after getting knocked out so easily before, but he's a brilliant suport guy.
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  September 2, 2011
SO EPIC! Loved that ending so much, this was just brilliant! Great work, what an epic chapter and epic comic mate ;)
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  September 2, 2011
WHOA!! Great Chapter! :D Aridike in the Order...Hmm... his first job should proly be to check out that "Toa of Time" you mentioned. Toa cannot control the element of Time, and thus any Toa who claims to be is just an extremely powerful Toa of Temporal Gravity. If this is the case, Aridike'll want to check it out, considering that he's pretty much the only being in existance to be a Toa of Temporal Gravity. :P It may very well be him who gave Tahu the Vahi. >.>
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  September 2, 2011
RRRRROOOOOGGGGGIIIII!!!!! NOOOOO!!!! :( Anyway, nice chapter! Poor Magmagear XD
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  September 2, 2011
AND SO THE PLOT THICKENS. Well done Callan! Another awesome story!
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  September 2, 2011
Hmm cool! I do like the ending! Nice uprades to Cossy! Btw could you look at my new MOC? ,Shadow
Caleb Lang
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Chaos Master
  September 1, 2011
It did 't realize this was the last chapter until I read it...now I have to wait for you to make a new story! Wait, are you making a new one? Or are you done for now?
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  September 1, 2011
Awesome just awesome. So this series is done, are you going to make another one?
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  September 1, 2011
Quoting Chopperskull (Leader of air) I'm soo confused about the intro. I have no idea what happened after Luja's partner died. Ok, it was sas you made magmagear die, but to bring him back ,i don't know man. I'm not too sure i liked this chapter. Sorry.
Yeah, I see your point and I'm sorry. Luja went for back up, and left Spike with Caldana. He eventually returned with reinforcements only to find Caldana dead and Magmagear's body gone. And it does appear Magmagear lives....
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  September 1, 2011
Whoa-ho-ho-ho-hoa! PLOT TWISST! Oh, how I love being an annoying bard. Anyway, great ending, I can't wait for the next installment in Callan's story!
  September 1, 2011
I'm soo confused about the intro. I have no idea what happened after Luja's partner died. Ok, it was sas you made magmagear die, but to bring him back ,i don't know man. I'm not too sure i liked this chapter. Sorry.
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  September 1, 2011
Sweet! Good opening for a new season!
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  September 1, 2011
Sad ending... Epic story!!!!!
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  September 1, 2011
pretty wicked ending dude. cant wait to see what comes next. im gonna try to finally upload something, ive been having trouble finding time cuz of school, but i think i can get soemthing done by friday.
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  September 1, 2011
Dun dun dun!!!! Cool ending. Are you going to make another series?
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  September 1, 2011
Another great episode! Great job!
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  September 1, 2011
Bravo! Well done!
 
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