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Legends of Corta Nui Ep.1 New beginings
This is my new story line, Enjoy, rate & comment
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Orik: Master, You called?
???: yes Orik, i have a job for you.

Orik: whatever you need sir.
???: Good to see your loyalty is still to me, Anyways, i feel the presence of a new threat, i'm still not sure of the location, so i need you to assemble a team for me.
Orik: Whatever you say master

???: Good... Now get going!!

Orik: Yes sir...

LATER THAT DAY
Orik: ahhh... Drayden, good to see you since your 'accident'.
Drayden: Yes, good to see you as well... what can i do for you?


Orik: our master has called us to assist him with a ppossible new threat to our rule over this land.
Drayden: what does that have to do with us?
Orik: he needs us to help him do to his 'current form'.

Drayden: i believe i can help, my new arm seems to be fitting quite well, it especially helps with my power over earth.

Orik: so, you'll help?

Drayden: Sure why not?

Orik: Excellent.
Scrack: Orik, you rang?

Orik: Ah yes scrack, ineed your assistantce.
Scrack: doing what?
Orik: scouting the island for anything suspicous.


Scrack: suspicous how?
Orik: just do as your told!
Scrack: yes sir!!

Orik: Go! go! go!


Scrack; Here i go!

AT A MATORAN TRAINING CAMP

???: Gusta(green arms) you need to work on your punches a little more. Mavy, your form is sloppy!

???: Zom! (brown arms) put more power in it, Benva, put less power into it!!

???: Ajaz, how are you doing to day?
Ajaz: oh i'm doing fine Agete, you?

(not sure what this is :P)

Agete: so, how are the recruits doing?
Ajaz: they've done better.


Agete: Hahahaha. you should go easier on them, they are just matoran you know?

Ajaz: i know but still...

???: rrrrrrr.....

???: rahrrrrr!!!!

???: time to pounce!!

???:Agete sir, i have a report for you.

Agete: Yes, what is it Zilla?

Zilla: the makuta have not done much activity latley, their camps have grown a bit, but that is it.

Agete: excellent work Zilla.
Zilla: Thank you.


Zilla: should we prepare the troops?
Agete: no, are troops arent quite strong enough(winks at ajaz)

???: what are they talking about?

Evok; what do you think scavenger?

Evok: Scavenger?

Scavenger: i don't know.

Agete: Zilla, you should see this.
Zilla: what is it?
Agete: well, we arent quite sure Who or WHAT he is, but he crashed here a week ago and has been unconcious ever since.

Evok: Now what?


Agete pulls the cover off a bit
Zilla: Oh my Mata Nui!!!

Stay tuned to next weeks edition of LoCN where questions like, who is the mystery person, whi s he here, and more.

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Comments

WhatsHisFace  .
JPfan65 Studios
  September 7, 2011
Awesomeness! Cool Story Man! I Just Noticed That Scrack Looks Like A Pterosaur, Zilla Looks Like A Species Of Theropod & Agete Looks A Little Bit Like A Capeless Jurassica =P !
WhatsHisFace  .
JPfan65 Studios
  September 7, 2011
Well, From The 1998 Movie, Godzilla Is A Marine Iguana Mutated By Nuclear Bombs....I'm Not Really Into Godzilla But...Yeah XD !
 I made it 
  September 7, 2011
Quoting JPfan65 Studios Awesomeness! Cool Story Man! I Just Noticed That Scrack Looks Like A Pterosaur, Zilla Looks Like A Species Of Theropod & Agete Looks A Little Bit Like A Capeless Jurassica =P !
I noticed the pterasaur, i tried to add a little prehistoricness for ya, But i just tried to make zilla as much like the godzilla that attacked new york. so maybe thats why he looks dinosaur-ish. so yeah
 I made it 
  August 30, 2011
Quoting Chopperskull (Leader of air) Well really cool ! I don't like that the villains at the beginning are soo colorful. This first chapter is a little blank and needs more description, but so far, soo good. 4/5 Scavenger looks cool !
thanks for the suggestions, and the reason for why the villans are multicollored is because at the moment for my story i'm short on parts. and i think scavenger looks cool too. Say, do you mind if i can put you in my story in a way, i mean it would have to be like the toa nuva sets but still, could i?
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  August 30, 2011
Well really cool ! I don't like that the villains at the beginning are soo colorful. This first chapter is a little blank and needs more description, but so far, soo good. 4/5 Scavenger looks cool !
 
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