Deceived Trailer (Part 1): A LEGO® creation by Harry 863 : MOCpages.com

Deceived Trailer (Part 1)

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Hey everyone. I started making this but im not sure if I like it or not so before I go on I'd like some feedback please :)

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Our Time has come. For 300 years we prepared, we grew stronger.
While you rested in your cradle of power, believing your people were safe, and protected.

You were trusted to lead the Republic. But you were Deceived.

As our powers of the Dark Side have blinded you.

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Zor Ember

April 21, 2012

Awesome! Please do part 2!

I like it

RC 1710 "Deff"

November 15, 2011

Looks very cool !

I like it

MarshallsLEGO UK

September 2, 2011

Nice dio of the trailer, i like the ship design as well

cj cutrone9

August 30, 2011

I like the tiling on the second part of the MOC but maybe change it to red. Now on everything else. To be blunt the build is really not much. It is just a flat ground with 2 pillars. Now I am not trying to be mean here or anyhthing. You need to have walls with detail in them. Rewatch the trailer. They main fight was in the library. Build the bookshelves. Take time with your builds. Don't rush. Rushing (as I have learned first hand) leads to complete and utter failure. Now make an order from lego (if you are allowed to) and buy as many tan pieces as you can. Buy pices with cool shapes on them that would still fit in you walls. After that it is just a matter of how much effert you put into it. Hope my advice helps.