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Bio Cup 2011 - Round Four - Clockwork Tempest -Vs- The Lego Obsessionist - Monster Titan
Rai, Monster of Lightning
About this creation


(Dragonforce - Fury of the Storm)

This is lightning monster, Rai. This colossus is known as a controller of weather. Able to absorb massive amount of water, he can create thunderstorms, hurricanes, also blizzards. He forms storms to level entire cities with water, ignite forests with lighting, and freeze over small towns. He only appears seconds before one of his storms hit, while he is casting it himself. No other information is known about this elusive being.



























FOURTH WALL COMMENTARY

UGH, where do I begin? xD. First off,I will state that this is clearly my entry to the Bio-cup.

My opponent

This was a major rush build for me. As some may not be aware of, there is a hurricane hitting America's East coast, and my area is being evacuated, so I had to finish fast. This MOC had so much more potential in my eyes, it was meant to be Unicron from the Transformers series, but sadly had no time. Granted, I'm not saying I just threw stuff together,I tried some things out, and I say it looks alright. Another quick bit to notice is the Bohrok eye on the chest, that is a misprint trans gold eye, that I stumbled upon finding on a Brutaka, thought it be perfect for this MOC. I hope it is well revived by fans, and the judges, and best of luck to my opponent!




Comments

 I like it 
  October 21, 2012
O_O holy cow thats big
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  October 26, 2011
Too big for your background, eh?
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  October 15, 2011
ah i remember getting unicron for christmas one year my dad cussed sooooo much getting the thing open ah good times
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  September 1, 2011
Not bad, would you mind commenting on this please?... http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/285589
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  September 1, 2011
i hope u brought ur mocing stuff.
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  August 31, 2011
First of all, I'm sorry for the hurricane incident, too bad it interfered with your MOCing, and I hope you are all well. Now, on the MOC: even tough its great by itself(the lower legs are my favourite bit, but it doesn't match the rest at all), I really don't feel the monster in it. And I can se it was kinda rushed, specially on the torso... Probably, I would have said better about it if it wasn't on the contest, but... My vote have to go for your opponent.
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  August 31, 2011
Quoting Yuri Fassio I'll post the same comment in both entries because I see that, despite the coolness of both MOCs, you both had problems in making decent hip joints. You might (or not) know how much I value the playability of a MOC, so you can understand how much disappointed I was in this match between two outstanding bio-builders. In the end, Clockwork gets my vote, mainly due to the originality of his MOC's legs. Great technique.
The years that I have been following you, I have been able to pick up that characteristic. I also, am a man who is very picky on play ability of a MOC. I have my inspiration from Japanese action figures for that. The hip joints on my creation are ridiculous. Personally, an amalgamation of of random limbs to form a waist is rather...unattractive for my taste (for the exception of Grond and a few other MOCs). Anyways, thank you for the vote.
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  August 31, 2011
I'll post the same comment in both entries because I see that, despite the coolness of both MOCs, you both had problems in making decent hip joints. You might (or not) know how much I value the playability of a MOC, so you can understand how much disappointed I was in this match between two outstanding bio-builders. In the end, Clockwork gets my vote, mainly due to the originality of his MOC's legs. Great technique.
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  August 31, 2011
that is huge! and awesome!
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  August 30, 2011
THAT IS HUGE. It's not quite a SHIP (although the acronym would fit here as well....), but still!
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  August 30, 2011
I have to say your entry was quite formidable indeed. It tall, big and awesome. However, I have some reservation with regards to the head design. While everything looked original, I felt the head designed looked boring a bit as I've seen it used several times by others. I have to vote in favor of Lego Obsessionist but just a close margin.
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  August 30, 2011
oh wait somebody said that first, seriousley i didnt know he did! =D
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  August 30, 2011
holy cheese its huge!!!!! =D
  August 29, 2011
OH PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD COME BACK TO YOUTUBE ITS GETTING SOOOOO BOOARING. PLEASSSEEE!!!!!
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  August 29, 2011
NO HURRICANE CAN TOPPLE THE MIGHTY CLOCKWORK TEMPEST!!!!! hope you're ok though p.s. when i post it, would you mind taking a look at my self moc p.s.s. how did you get your homepage like that with all the links and the photo- Naaro
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  August 29, 2011
Not your best, but I think being evacuated for a hurricane is a legitimate excuse for rushing. Save the lego!
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  August 28, 2011
ok i was like its not your best work until i read the word UNICRON!!!!! 100% destroy the competition
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  August 28, 2011
you said you rushed on this and it definitely shows, but considering your standards. it still looks amazing and far beyond many mocists abilitys. I would of loved to see this as unicron one day, hope you aren't badly affected by the hurricane.
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  August 28, 2011
Great MOC. As soon as you said that it was supposed to be Unicron before you changed it, I instintally saw the resembalance. Hope you do good in the Cup and sorry to hear about the hurricane.
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  August 28, 2011
Wow, what can i say? Its so... big...
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  August 28, 2011
This moc is so good! But I'm really sorry to hear that a hurricane is coming your way.:(
  August 27, 2011
srry to say but, i dont like this at all.
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  August 27, 2011
This is truly amazing. I love it
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  August 27, 2011
Stupendous. I don't see what else to say about your creations. :D Good luck in the contest.
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  August 27, 2011
Holy cheese and... I don't know actually 0_o
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  August 27, 2011
This is great, especially considering that you had to rush. I am getting ready for Irene myself, but at least my area isn't getting evacuated. Well, if you are able to I was wondering if you could take a look at this and give me some feedback:http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/284796
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  August 27, 2011
So, hows the taste of Hurricane Irene? :P
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  August 27, 2011
Wow, truly awesome. It's huge and is filled up everywhere (no gaps) but the bad thing is, it looks heavy ! LOL Awesome job, it's nice. I really love the lower legs ! You used soo mnay pieces in awkward but cool ways. Good luck in the contest dude but you probably don't need luck, your good already :D. Dude be safe, ya never know what a hurricane can do.
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  August 27, 2011
Despicable! Just despcable! Rushing to avoid death! How dare you! :D
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  August 27, 2011
He is a huge whopping monster! I love his legs.
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  August 27, 2011
The building techniques you used on him are amazing... although the same can't be said about the look of the MOC as a whole. Considering you had to pack off to avoid death and destruction, it's forgivable. Just. :P
 I like it 
  August 27, 2011
By the way, sorry the hurricane hit you so hard. It just got up here, but were're pretty safe, so I can really strive for perfection on my entry. Good thing, too, I'll neet the whole alloted time to beat this.
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  August 27, 2011
I'm seriously scared now! I thought that my WIP entry had enough potential to beat yours untill you posted this. I think this is amazing, but you'll have to forgive if I hope that the judges think otherwise. I love the square legs. The misprint bohrok eye is very cool.
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  August 27, 2011
Nice! I need to pray and go get into beast mode or something, since I'm against Adam Toh!
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  August 27, 2011
wow, thats just epic. it wouldve been awesome to see a massive unicron moc, but this is still really cool.
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  August 27, 2011
sir you are the best mocer in the world.
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  August 27, 2011
Still incredible not as Unicron!!! Good luck, Lego Obsessionist! :D
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  August 27, 2011
BIIIIIG! good luck in the contest! No forces of nature can stop the awesome CLOCKWORK TEMPEST!
  August 27, 2011
Wow..... Irene had to come for you, didn't it? Either way, hope you're OK. Hope your MOCs can make it through. (Unless they're all with you) Nice MOC though.
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  August 27, 2011
The fingers are awesome, the legs are cuby, and head reminds me fun house. I hope you are safe. Hope you re mocs and pieces are with you.
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  August 27, 2011
Nice. The chest could use some work though and the lower arms should be dark grey to balance out with the legs. Other than that, great job bro.
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  August 27, 2011
Ok, its one thing to make a Epic Gigantic Monster but its ANOTHER when you make a HUGE EPIC MONSTER THAT MAY HAVE MADE ME (This has been deleted for Public Safety).
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  August 27, 2011
This is a great moc! I know that you didn't have enough time to completely build what you wanted, but given that circumstance, it's amazing how you brought this guy together. Sorry about the hurricane, by the way. It's been all over the news :(
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  August 27, 2011
how is the weather up there
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  August 27, 2011
This is so epic!!!! Hope you'll be okay during the hurricane.
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  August 27, 2011
Unicron's one fo the most bad*censored* villians of all time! XD Hmm, wonder if he were to take a form in the BIONICLE Universe. O_O
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  August 27, 2011
The head is tiny but the rest is an epic moc but i never seen those fingers before
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  August 27, 2011
man this guy is a midget! ON OPPOSITE DAY!
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  August 27, 2011
Nice job! I see the Unicron insparation. I'm sorry yo have to evacuate and hope your home is fine when this is over. ,Shadow
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  August 27, 2011
..... (Censored).... thats big
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  August 27, 2011
this is amazing and im so sorry about the hurricane..who are u bringing with you?
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  August 27, 2011
THIS IS 1 BADASS EPIC TITAN MOC :D
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  August 27, 2011
Dude that's epic it's funny my area was hit by the hurricane to my neighbors lost part of their roof I'm down in georgia. Awesome moc mind checking out some of mine?
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  August 27, 2011
AMAZING! The torso looks amazing! And I really like his head! I'm not 100% sure about his lower legs, but other than that, this is excellent! Nice work on the fingers! Great work mate ;) HEHE Cossy vs Rai XD
 
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