Last time we were with our Heroís Mata Nui meet a new friend, Aridike, who warned him that he needed to gather six pieces of Golden armour and if he didnít, Makuta would be the one who won the war on Bara Magna! As Mata Nui told Cossy and Ackar what he had leant, someone was watching over them! It was A.D! As we speak A.D is on his way to Makuta to tell him what he has learnt...
*Vezon and Makuta are discussing their plans*
Vezon: Yes, the Rahkshi found a part of Sandstalker armour, we can only assume the Toa killed him!
Makuta: Enough! It appears A.D has returned to us...
(A.D enters Makutaís chambers and bows)
A.D: Makuta, my lord
Vezon: What are you doing here! Did we not tell you to leave for Aqua Magna!?
A.D: Indeed you did, but as I was leaving I found something that could be of the up most importance to you, my lords
Vezon: Then speak!
A.D: Makuta, it appears that this Golden mask that was able to cause you a great deal of damage, is a small piece of a much larger puzzle!
Vezon: How can you possibly know this!
A.D: If my lord would listen, he would know! Anyway, Mata Nui and some other Toa came across a golden shield! And when Mata Nui came into contain with it, a being from the future appeared and told them that there are 6 pieces of Golden armour!
(A.D takes a breath and continues)
A.D: This future warrior said that it was you Makuta who destroyed the Great Beings when you used the power of these six pieces!
(Vezon looks at Makuta waiting for a response, but Teridax just stands and listens)
A.D: The future warrior then said that the Toa needed to find more of Golden armour, he said that the rest of the pieces were scattered around Bara Magna!
Vezon: Then we must gather them and fulfil Makutaís destiny, the Great Beingís will fall once Mata Nui does!
A.D: The future warrior continued to say that if we didnít find the armour before the Toa, it would be you who would lose this war Teridax!
Makuta: Most Interesting...
(Makuta stares at his hand in a Toa Phosphorus pondering facepalm kinda way)
Makuta: Then we will find this armour! VEZON!
Makuta: Dispatch a group of Rahkshi! Make sure they find the armour before the Toa do!
Vezon: It will be done my lord!
Makuta: Excellent work A.D, you have proven yourself to be more than worthy to me!
A.D: Anything for you master!
Makuta: Now I hope you havenít forgotten your orders!
A.D: Of course not my Lord!
Makuta: Good! Now when you arrive on Aqua Magna begin the search at once! I want Destro to be perfect!
A.D: It will be done my Lord!
*A.D leaves for Aqua Magna*
Meanwhile with Cossy and the others...
(Ackar, Mata Nui and Cossy are returning home after Cossyís ďordealĒ)
Ackar: Weíre close Cossy!
*Cossy is deep in thought and doesnít respond at first*
Cossy: Huh what? Oh right, ok.
*Cossy continues staring at the Golden shield, still deep in thought, he ponders what the Golden armour is capable of, what will come of this war, and what has happened to Fortux!*
Ackar: Weíre home!
*The Thornatus slows down as Mata Nui parks it*
Perditus: See Owl, I told you they were ok!
*Everyone gets out of the Thornatus, happy to be home*
Perditus: Good to see all of you alive! I was scared you guys got hurt!
*Ackar and Perditus greet each other with a Brofist*
Ackar: Well weíre all ok brother, but Fortux disappeared!
*Cossy gets out and waves to Owl, he waves back*
*Cossy and Mata Nui make their way into Malumís cave, but they realise the others are still with Perditus*
Cossy: You coming Ackar?
Ackar: Nah, Iím gonna stay here with Perditus, we havenít had a good chat in ages!
Cossy: Alright, what about you Owl, you coming?
Owl: I wish! But Iím on guard duty
Cossy: Oh right!
*Mata Nui and Cossy enter*
Meanwhile, inside Malumís cave...
Tahu: GAH! This thing just makes no sense!
*Tahu throws the Hau on the table*
Lewa: Then stop stressing!
Tahu: I still donít see how meditating will help find the answer!
Lewa: Youíll see...
Tahu: Why is it that when you try and use it, Malum, that nothing happens! But when I use it, it has limitless power!
*Cossy and Mata Nui walk in*
Cossy: Hey guys!
Lewa: Great Beings! Cossy! Youíre alive!
Tahu: Good to see you! Where is Fortux?
Cossy: He disappeared, Iíll tell you later!
Mata Nui: Have you figured out how to work the mask yet Tahu?
*The Toa gather around the table*
Tahu: No, it just makes no sense!
Cossy: Well we did learn something, didnít we Mata Nui
Mata Nui: Yes, we did
(Mata Nui explains everything Aridike told them)
*Cossy places the shield on the table*
Cossy: So this is that shield Aridike was talking about.
Tahu: So wait, in total there are 6 pieces of this ĎGolden armourí?
Tahu: And if we donít find them first Makuta will destroy us all?
*Tahu puts down the mask and picks up the shield*
*Tahu walks away from the table and stares at the shield*
Tahu: Hm. So this shield is meant to provide just as much power as the mask is?
Mata Nui: Yes, but first we must find out how to use it, Aridike never explained how!
Tahu: Well letís see...
Tahu: When Malum tried to use the maskís power, nothing happened, but when I tried, all its power was unleashed, so maybe...WOAH!
*The shield starts to glow*
*The shield glows even brighter now! Suddenly golden beams shoot out of every corner of the shield forming a golden barrier*
Mata Nui: Magnificent!
Tahu: Itís... Itís amazing!
*The shield continues glowing and then stops*
Cossy: Aridike did say each piece of armour had power over one element and special ability, I think he said this one had the ability of knowledge, and... I think rock as itís element.
Tahu: Well it would make sense, but I still donít get why only I can control it!?
Malum: I have a theory, perhaps this Golden armour can only be controlled by you Tahu?
Mata Nui: Malum could be right, perhaps it is your destiny to use this armour against Makuta?
Tahu: That would make sense, but why me?
Mata Nui: No one understands the will of the Great Beings Tahu!
Tahu: Well... I guess Iím honoured!
Mata Nui: Alright, well now that we have a theory, I fell it is time we get a search party to find more pieces to the rest of this armour
Cossy: Well the search party will need to have Tahu with it, if he does have some link to this armour then it could help us!
Mata Nui: A great idea Cossy!
Mata Nui: Then it is decided, Tahu, Lewa and Cossy shall be the search party!
*Cossy looks at Tahu and Lewa*
Lewa: Sounds good to me
Cossy: Mata Nui, is it alright if I bring another friend with us?
Mata Nui: As long as there is room on the Thornatus!
Cossy: Sweet! Alright guys, letís roll!
The Toa leave on the Thornatus in search for more pieces of the Golden armour
However, what are the Skrall up too...
Sandstalker: So who is this friend of yours anyway?
Nitro: Shadavax, the Dark Crusader, he was a strong fighter, and one of Tumaís best, he will be a fine asset to our rebellion!
*Sandstalker stops walking*
Sandstalker: What in blazes happened here?
*Sandstalker looks around wondering what the heck happened*
Sandstalker: Red armour... Could it be Skrall armour?
Nitro: It could be a variety of things...
Nitro: But judging by the fact that there is Skrall little armour, Iíd say it was either a Glatorian, or just some Bone Hunter that lost his loot!
Nitro: No, Iíve seen this tactic before! It must have been...
Skrall*: Hello Nitro, havenít seen you in ages!
Nitro: Well, well, look who it is! I donít believe weíve seen each other since Tumaís death!
Skrall: Itís been a while hasnít it!
Sandstalker: Mind telling me what the Karzahni is going on?
Nitro: When Tuma was alive I was a commander in one of his stronger armies, this man here was my best man! I thought that he was dead, like everyone else in our team is.
Skrall: Though they are dead, I lived; I was not stupid enough to fight the Glatorian once Tuma died!
Skrall: So what are you doing here?
Nitro: Trying to get a small rebellion going so I may rule the Skrall the same way Tuma did, you?
Skrall: Attracting passersby with the old armour trick you to taught me, bring emí in, and kill them!
Nitro: I see
Sandstalker: Enough of this...
*The Skrall lets go of his sword...*
*...And Sandstalker grabs it, pinning him to the ground*
Sandstalker: Putting a sword to my throat is no way to introduce yourself!
Skrall: GAH!, who is this buffoon Nitro?
*The Skrall gets up*
Skrall: Well? Who is he?
Nitro: Sandstalker, a skilful assassin, he is going a be a great asset to our rebellion
Skrall: So this rebellion of yours is going to have a warrior in it who is not a Skrall? HA, what on earth are you doing that for?
Nitro: He may be an off worlder but he is a Skrall at heart, not to mention he knows our enemy better than any Skrall could!
Skrall: Oh, so he is with the Toa?
Sandstalker: Iím an Ex-Makuta, I know both the Toa and the Makuta better than you do, so start liking me kid, Iím gonna be around here a long time!
*Sandstalker throws the Skrallís sword at him and he catches it, giving Sandstalker a dirty look*
Skrall: FINE! I guess he can stay, but I want in!
Nitro: Excellent, It will be grand having you with us!
*Nitro starts to walk down the cliff*
Nitro: I guess I didnít make this clear, Skrall, we need to find Shadavax, and in order to do that, we gotta walk quickly, so hurry up!
*Skrall walks faster but Nitro picks up something and stops*
Skrall: What happened to moving quickly?
Nitro: Hmm... Oh yes, of course, let us go
(Nitro takes the mask and the three of them continue to walk)
*Skrallís name is actually Skrall, all Skrall warriorís were called that, only the best Skrall were given names, for example Stronius (This is true, look it up) Oh and Skrall is a MOC I made ages ago but never posted, that's why it's so bad :P
IMPORTANT, READ OR DIE!
Ok, thatís the next chapter done :D More will be up some time in the future :) Now the important thing, I originally promised everyone that all my built Self MOCís will be in A Story Reborn, but that is no longer true, some will not be :/ Still not sure which, but some wonít be or if they do theyíll have a very small roll with minimal lines. :/
Before you go, make sure you look at this...
Want your Self MOC like this? Ask Fortrux! HERE!
(Also see more epic edit's on the given link above)
Thanks for viewing!
Hope you liked it!
Oh and I got HEAPS of new MOC's to post, so stay tuned over the weekend ;)
Donít forget to rate and comment!
Till next time ;)
Just an idea. My self MOC uses all the gold pieces from the stars series so if you wanted to put him in the story some how then I would love it and it might work really well with your story? Not that you have to just an idea.
Thanks everyone! Sorry Eli and Daniel, if you read the information that was after the comic, you would see that a lot of Self MOC's won't be in it, so it'll be extremely hard to get you in! I'm sorry about that :/ Thanks Legofreak! Thanks Jan, can't wait to see those updates! As far as I know it was Master N, thanks ;) I didn't count this as a MOC Evox, this is a comic, but in my next "MOC" I'll have the pictures up for it :D Thanks Connor, They'll be up soon mate ;)
I like it
August 25, 2011
Dude thats awesome.When I saw those red pieces on the ground I just noticed the mask and thought:Nitro will pick it up.and he did.nice chapter.Im so busy because of school.Thats why I dont comment that much on mocpages at the moment but stay tuned for some new mocs and sme neat updates for Atlos and Steamgear :D
Thanks everyone! Woah, never realised that Skorp, what a coincidence! I'm glad you think that Callan :D Thanks ;) HEHE well I could make it you, but I think maybe Ackar might be it, because he would know stuff about Bara Magna, still, I'll see what I can do :D WOW! Thanks so much Shadow ;) Cheers Chopper ;) I'll take a look Austin. I'm glad you like him Zam ;) Sorry Master N, but Omni will have nothing to do with the armour, if he did it would really mess up the storyline :) Thanks Chaos, I'll post something cool on Friday mate :D Thanks Nathan, Yeah, he probably won't be in it, but he will be made, and he will be awesome! How so A.D? Eh, I'll see what I can do JP. I love your long comments Popcorn :D Ah good, I'm glad you're excited to see Fortrux :D It's a great twist :D Oh, well I hope you don't cancel the CYOA, it's awesome! Anyway, thanks for the comment ;) Glad you liked that Legobob ;)
Awesome chapter once again Ben! :D Oh, and this line is great ;) "(Makuta stairs at his hand in a Toa Phosphorus pondering facepalm kinda way)"
I like it
August 24, 2011
Epic new chapter, my friend! Now I wait for the next one. The next chapter in my story should be up soon, I took the pictures for the whole story (it's about 100 pictures long) instead of taking the pictures for one chapter and then posting it. Oh, and if there are any epic MOCs that you want me too see, make sure you post them before Saturday, 'cause I leave for vacation that day.
August 24, 2011
One...Awesome Story..And Two...No Jurassica =O Ahhhhh! Not To Sound Mean Here But I Really Want Jurassica In This Story...Now I Know He Might Not Be In It....But Please If He Is Not Just At Least Mention Him....Thanks...
A.D Lord of Darkness
August 24, 2011
Sorry, if i sound like a jerk, It's just an opinion on how my self MOC acts. Mainly that he acts like a servant, which would be fine if he was reluctant. Just my opinion, i don't mean to offend at all.
I like it
A.D Lord of Darkness
August 24, 2011
Cool, loving the story but A.D needs a bit of a personality change.
Nice!!! I really like the awesome plot. I never really got into the Bionicle story line before, but now I am upset about not keeping up with it.:( I'm really curious about what happened to Fortux. Dude, I am so stoked for some weird reason. I can't stop from being happy today. There's nothing that should've made me happy today. I mean I've been so busy that I have hardly had any time for anything. I guess that I'm just happy to finally be on MOCpages with my few but awesome friends after a busy day. Btw my CYOA will probably be canceled. I don't really have the time for it now. Am I talking to much? I hopefully will be making a BL order soon. So than I can start making those self MOCs that I promised. I'm going to stop typing now. Bye. Anyways, great job, man!!!! You are a great story teller.;)
Great chapter! The photoshopping at the end was very good too. If or when you make my selfMOC, he doesn't have to be in any of your stories if you don't want him to, and he can be shorter than the average toa, because I like him like that.
I hate to say it, but I think that's a good idea cutting some self mocs. Don't want too many people who's personalities can be hard to match. Anywayz, nice episode!!! Lots of talk in this one, I want some action in the next! :D Oh, and room for one more in your scout group with Tahu and Lewa? XD I kid. :D