A Story Reborn Chapter 9 DISCOVERY
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Last time we were with our Hero’s Mata Nui meet a new friend, Aridike, who warned him that he needed to gather six pieces of Golden armour and if he didn’t, Makuta would be the one who won the war on Bara Magna! As Mata Nui told Cossy and Ackar what he had leant, someone was watching over them! It was A.D! As we speak A.D is on his way to Makuta to tell him what he has learnt...
*Vezon and Makuta are discussing their plans*
Vezon: Yes, the Rahkshi found a part of Sandstalker armour, we can only assume the Toa killed him!
Makuta: Enough! It appears A.D has returned to us...
(A.D enters Makuta’s chambers and bows)
A.D: Makuta, my lord
Vezon: What are you doing here! Did we not tell you to leave for Aqua Magna!?
A.D: Indeed you did, but as I was leaving I found something that could be of the up most importance to you, my lords
Vezon: Then speak!
A.D: Makuta, it appears that this Golden mask that was able to cause you a great deal of damage, is a small piece of a much larger puzzle!
Vezon: How can you possibly know this!
A.D: If my lord would listen, he would know! Anyway, Mata Nui and some other Toa came across a golden shield! And when Mata Nui came into contain with it, a being from the future appeared and told them that there are 6 pieces of Golden armour!
(A.D takes a breath and continues)
A.D: This future warrior said that it was you Makuta who destroyed the Great Beings when you used the power of these six pieces!
(Vezon looks at Makuta waiting for a response, but Teridax just stands and listens)
A.D: The future warrior then said that the Toa needed to find more of Golden armour, he said that the rest of the pieces were scattered around Bara Magna!
Vezon: Then we must gather them and fulfil Makuta’s destiny, the Great Being’s will fall once Mata Nui does!
A.D: The future warrior continued to say that if we didn’t find the armour before the Toa, it would be you who would lose this war Teridax!
Makuta: Most Interesting...
(Makuta stares at his hand in a Toa Phosphorus pondering facepalm kinda way)
Makuta: Then we will find this armour! VEZON!
Vezon: Master.
Makuta: Dispatch a group of Rahkshi! Make sure they find the armour before the Toa do!
Vezon: It will be done my lord!
*Vezon leaves*
Makuta: Excellent work A.D, you have proven yourself to be more than worthy to me!
A.D: Anything for you master!
Makuta: Now I hope you haven’t forgotten your orders!
A.D: Of course not my Lord!
Makuta: Good! Now when you arrive on Aqua Magna begin the search at once! I want Destro to be perfect!
A.D: It will be done my Lord!
*A.D leaves for Aqua Magna*
Meanwhile with Cossy and the others...
(Ackar, Mata Nui and Cossy are returning home after Cossy’s “ordeal”)
Ackar: We’re close Cossy!
*Cossy is deep in thought and doesn’t respond at first*
Cossy: Huh what? Oh right, ok.
*Cossy continues staring at the Golden shield, still deep in thought, he ponders what the Golden armour is capable of, what will come of this war, and what has happened to Fortux!*
Ackar: We’re home!
*The Thornatus slows down as Mata Nui parks it*
Perditus: See Owl, I told you they were ok!
*Everyone gets out of the Thornatus, happy to be home*
Perditus: Good to see all of you alive! I was scared you guys got hurt!
*Ackar and Perditus greet each other with a Brofist*
Ackar: Well we’re all ok brother, but Fortux disappeared!
Perditus: Oh!
*Cossy gets out and waves to Owl, he waves back*
*Cossy and Mata Nui make their way into Malum’s cave, but they realise the others are still with Perditus*
Cossy: You coming Ackar?
Ackar: Nah, I’m gonna stay here with Perditus, we haven’t had a good chat in ages!
Cossy: Alright, what about you Owl, you coming?
Owl: I wish! But I’m on guard duty
Cossy: Oh right!
*Mata Nui and Cossy enter*
Meanwhile, inside Malum’s cave...
Tahu: GAH! This thing just makes no sense!
*Tahu throws the Hau on the table*
Lewa: Then stop stressing!
Tahu: I still don’t see how meditating will help find the answer!
Lewa: You’ll see...
Tahu: Why is it that when you try and use it, Malum, that nothing happens! But when I use it, it has limitless power!
Malum: Perhaps...
*Cossy and Mata Nui walk in*
Cossy: Hey guys!
Lewa: Great Beings! Cossy! You’re alive!
Tahu: Good to see you! Where is Fortux?
Cossy: He disappeared, I’ll tell you later!
Mata Nui: Have you figured out how to work the mask yet Tahu?
*The Toa gather around the table*
Tahu: No, it just makes no sense!
Cossy: Well we did learn something, didn’t we Mata Nui
Mata Nui: Yes, we did
(Mata Nui explains everything Aridike told them)
*Cossy places the shield on the table*
Cossy: So this is that shield Aridike was talking about.
Tahu: Wow!
Tahu: So wait, in total there are 6 pieces of this ‘Golden armour’?
Cossy: Yes
Tahu: And if we don’t find them first Makuta will destroy us all?
Cossy: Yes
*Tahu puts down the mask and picks up the shield*
*Tahu walks away from the table and stares at the shield*
Tahu: Hm. So this shield is meant to provide just as much power as the mask is?
Mata Nui: Yes, but first we must find out how to use it, Aridike never explained how!
Tahu: Well let’s see...
Tahu: When Malum tried to use the mask’s power, nothing happened, but when I tried, all its power was unleashed, so maybe...WOAH!
*The shield starts to glow*
*The shield glows even brighter now! Suddenly golden beams shoot out of every corner of the shield forming a golden barrier*
Mata Nui: Magnificent!
Tahu: It’s... It’s amazing!
*The shield continues glowing and then stops*
Tahu: Wow!
Cossy: Aridike did say each piece of armour had power over one element and special ability, I think he said this one had the ability of knowledge, and... I think rock as it’s element.
Tahu: Well it would make sense, but I still don’t get why only I can control it!?
Malum: I have a theory, perhaps this Golden armour can only be controlled by you Tahu?
Mata Nui: Malum could be right, perhaps it is your destiny to use this armour against Makuta?
Malum: Indeed.
Tahu: That would make sense, but why me?
Mata Nui: No one understands the will of the Great Beings Tahu!
Tahu: Well... I guess I’m honoured!
Mata Nui: Alright, well now that we have a theory, I fell it is time we get a search party to find more pieces to the rest of this armour
Cossy: Well the search party will need to have Tahu with it, if he does have some link to this armour then it could help us!
Mata Nui: A great idea Cossy!
Mata Nui: Then it is decided, Tahu, Lewa and Cossy shall be the search party!
*Cossy looks at Tahu and Lewa*
Cossy: SWEET!
Lewa: Sounds good to me
Tahu: Agreed!
Cossy: Mata Nui, is it alright if I bring another friend with us?
Mata Nui: As long as there is room on the Thornatus!
Cossy: Sweet! Alright guys, let’s roll!
The Toa leave on the Thornatus in search for more pieces of the Golden armour
However, what are the Skrall up too...
Sandstalker: So who is this friend of yours anyway?
Nitro: Shadavax, the Dark Crusader, he was a strong fighter, and one of Tuma’s best, he will be a fine asset to our rebellion!
*Sandstalker stops walking*
Sandstalker: What in blazes happened here?
*Sandstalker looks around wondering what the heck happened*
Sandstalker: Red armour... Could it be Skrall armour?
Nitro: It could be a variety of things...
Nitro: But judging by the fact that there is Skrall little armour, I’d say it was either a Glatorian, or just some Bone Hunter that lost his loot!
Sandstalker: Huh.
Nitro: No, I’ve seen this tactic before! It must have been...
Sandstalker: UGH!
Skrall*: Hello Nitro, haven’t seen you in ages!
Nitro: Well, well, look who it is! I don’t believe we’ve seen each other since Tuma’s death!
Skrall: It’s been a while hasn’t it!
Sandstalker: Mind telling me what the Karzahni is going on?
Nitro: When Tuma was alive I was a commander in one of his stronger armies, this man here was my best man! I thought that he was dead, like everyone else in our team is.
Skrall: Though they are dead, I lived; I was not stupid enough to fight the Glatorian once Tuma died!
Skrall: So what are you doing here?
Nitro: Trying to get a small rebellion going so I may rule the Skrall the same way Tuma did, you?
Skrall: Attracting passersby with the old armour trick you to taught me, bring em’ in, and kill them!
Nitro: I see
Sandstalker: Enough of this...
*BAM*
Skrall: UGH!
*The Skrall lets go of his sword...*
*...And Sandstalker grabs it, pinning him to the ground*
Skrall: GAH!
Sandstalker: Putting a sword to my throat is no way to introduce yourself!
Skrall: GAH!, who is this buffoon Nitro?
*The Skrall gets up*
Skrall: Well? Who is he?
Nitro: Sandstalker, a skilful assassin, he is going a be a great asset to our rebellion
Skrall: So this rebellion of yours is going to have a warrior in it who is not a Skrall? HA, what on earth are you doing that for?
Nitro: He may be an off worlder but he is a Skrall at heart, not to mention he knows our enemy better than any Skrall could!
Skrall: Oh, so he is with the Toa?
Sandstalker: I’m an Ex-Makuta, I know both the Toa and the Makuta better than you do, so start liking me kid, I’m gonna be around here a long time!
*Sandstalker throws the Skrall’s sword at him and he catches it, giving Sandstalker a dirty look*
Skrall: FINE! I guess he can stay, but I want in!
Nitro: Excellent, It will be grand having you with us!
*Nitro starts to walk down the cliff*
Nitro: I guess I didn’t make this clear, Skrall, we need to find Shadavax, and in order to do that, we gotta walk quickly, so hurry up!
Skrall: Alright...
*Skrall walks faster but Nitro picks up something and stops*
Skrall: What happened to moving quickly?
Nitro: Hmm... Oh yes, of course, let us go
(Nitro takes the mask and the three of them continue to walk)
*Skrall’s name is actually Skrall, all Skrall warrior’s were called that, only the best Skrall were given names, for example Stronius (This is true, look it up) Oh and Skrall is a MOC I made ages ago but never posted, that's why it's so bad :P
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IMPORTANT, READ OR DIE!
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Ok, that’s the next chapter done :D More will be up some time in the future :) Now the important thing, I originally promised everyone that all my built Self MOC’s will be in A Story Reborn, but that is no longer true, some will not be :/ Still not sure which, but some won’t be or if they do they’ll have a very small roll with minimal lines. :/
Before you go, make sure you look at this...
Want your Self MOC like this? Ask Fortrux! HERE!
(Also see more epic edit's on the given link above)
Thanks for viewing!
Hope you liked it!
Oh and I got HEAPS of new MOC's to post, so stay tuned over the weekend ;)
Don’t forget to rate and comment!
Till next time ;)
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April 13, 2012 |
Not a lot, it's gonna be hard to continue the story 0.o Anyway glad you enjoy them :) |
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I wonder how many of these MOCs are still intact? (Or maybe That's just me being terrible at taking older mocs apart XD) I was reading this again, and i realised how much i loved it XP |
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November 8, 2011 |
Cheers ;) |
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oh well. I like the story btw! |
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November 7, 2011 |
Yeah like you said it would mess up everything with Tahu and the story itself. Sorry, thanks for the idea though :D |
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but it would screw up tahu's destiney hmm... |
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November 6, 2011 |
Just an idea. My self MOC uses all the gold pieces from the stars series so if you wanted to put him in the story some how then I would love it and it might work really well with your story? Not that you have to just an idea. |
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September 10, 2011 |
Sorry mate, I'm not taking requests :D |
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September 9, 2011 |
Could you make a self MOC of me, please? |
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September 2, 2011 |
Thanks mate :D Well you are somewhat right, and somewhat wrong :3 |
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September 1, 2011 |
Oh I see why fortux disappeared! he was being revamped, wasn't he? Will he come back in his new form? Anyway, I was surprised that lewa meditates. Cool episode, as usual. |
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August 31, 2011 |
Well, it won't be easy, like I said at the bottom. But I'll see what I can do. |
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August 30, 2011 |
I would to love 2 be in it! |
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August 28, 2011 |
Thanks you two! Well Keegan, I'm sure there will be one thing you won't know is coming ;) Thanks Nitro, He'll wear it soon :D |
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August 28, 2011 |
put the mask on! put the mask on! I a so much better then that stupid skrall! I am the lord of black and Mata red! JK. cool chapter. I can not wait fro the next one. |
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August 28, 2011 |
DUDE!!! this is great, i can tell where the story is going though :P and im not going to put it in this comment to spoil it for everyone else. |
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August 28, 2011 |
NO WAY! I'd never cut you out man! You just won't be in a few for a bit, anyway, great to hear you're back :D |
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August 28, 2011 |
am i one of the guys who gets cut out? that would be a shame, since i was the first self Moc other than Cossy there! oh well, guess what? IM BACK FROM HOLIDAYS! XD |
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August 28, 2011 |
Thanks everyone, I'll check it all out :D |
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August 27, 2011 |
I'm working on my own story line, so stay tuned |
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August 27, 2011 |
The first chapter of Into the Inferno is up! |
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August 26, 2011 |
It's cool bro ;) Thanks ;) |
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August 26, 2011 |
Wow another great episode! Sorry I didn't comment sooner I have had school and I can't get on during the weekdays. Great stuff bro! =D |
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August 26, 2011 |
Thanks everyone! Sorry Eli and Daniel, if you read the information that was after the comic, you would see that a lot of Self MOC's won't be in it, so it'll be extremely hard to get you in! I'm sorry about that :/ Thanks Legofreak! Thanks Jan, can't wait to see those updates! As far as I know it was Master N, thanks ;) I didn't count this as a MOC Evox, this is a comic, but in my next "MOC" I'll have the pictures up for it :D Thanks Connor, They'll be up soon mate ;) |
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August 25, 2011 |
I'm loving this story, though the chapters are a bit far apart. Can't wait to see those "Heaps of new MOCs!" :D |
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August 25, 2011 |
Great job!! could i possibly be in the next chapter as a soldier of hire, or a helper to the toa, possibly a scout? |
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August 25, 2011 |
I thought you said you would put more views of akarta's head design on your next moc thing. when are you going to do that? |
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August 25, 2011 |
awesome story dude. cant wait for the next chapter. |
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August 25, 2011 |
Alright thats fine. Really liked the part about the armor trick, was that your idea? |
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August 25, 2011 |
Dude thats awesome.When I saw those red pieces on the ground I just noticed the mask and thought:Nitro will pick it up.and he did.nice chapter.Im so busy because of school.Thats why I dont comment that much on mocpages at the moment but stay tuned for some new mocs and sme neat updates for Atlos and Steamgear :D |
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August 25, 2011 |
Very awesome ! TOok me forever to get through though. :P I had to go throuh a bunch of my fav builder's MOCs. Great job. Can't wait to see more. :) |
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August 25, 2011 |
HAHA thanks for that mate :P I love it when people help me with grammar mess ups :P I'll fix that now :D Thanks ;) |
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August 25, 2011 |
oooo! Snazzy! Yet another awesome chapter! Makuta stairs at his hand, looks like he has some big STEPS to overcome! Jokes aside, it's "stares" :D |
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August 25, 2011 |
Thanks everyone! Woah, never realised that Skorp, what a coincidence! I'm glad you think that Callan :D Thanks ;) HEHE well I could make it you, but I think maybe Ackar might be it, because he would know stuff about Bara Magna, still, I'll see what I can do :D WOW! Thanks so much Shadow ;) Cheers Chopper ;) I'll take a look Austin. I'm glad you like him Zam ;) Sorry Master N, but Omni will have nothing to do with the armour, if he did it would really mess up the storyline :) Thanks Chaos, I'll post something cool on Friday mate :D Thanks Nathan, Yeah, he probably won't be in it, but he will be made, and he will be awesome! How so A.D? Eh, I'll see what I can do JP. I love your long comments Popcorn :D Ah good, I'm glad you're excited to see Fortrux :D It's a great twist :D Oh, well I hope you don't cancel the CYOA, it's awesome! Anyway, thanks for the comment ;) Glad you liked that Legobob ;) |
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August 25, 2011 |
Awesome chapter once again Ben! :D Oh, and this line is great ;) "(Makuta stairs at his hand in a Toa Phosphorus pondering facepalm kinda way)" |
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Chaos Master August 24, 2011 |
Epic new chapter, my friend! Now I wait for the next one. The next chapter in my story should be up soon, I took the pictures for the whole story (it's about 100 pictures long) instead of taking the pictures for one chapter and then posting it. Oh, and if there are any epic MOCs that you want me too see, make sure you post them before Saturday, 'cause I leave for vacation that day. |
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| JPfan65 Studios August 24, 2011 |
One...Awesome Story..And Two...No Jurassica =O Ahhhhh! Not To Sound Mean Here But I Really Want Jurassica In This Story...Now I Know He Might Not Be In It....But Please If He Is Not Just At Least Mention Him....Thanks... |
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| A.D Lord of Darkness August 24, 2011 |
Sorry, if i sound like a jerk, It's just an opinion on how my self MOC acts. Mainly that he acts like a servant, which would be fine if he was reluctant. Just my opinion, i don't mean to offend at all. |
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A.D Lord of Darkness August 24, 2011 |
Cool, loving the story but A.D needs a bit of a personality change. |
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Soap M. August 24, 2011 |
Lovely chapter, Mate! :D Great one! ;) |
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August 24, 2011 |
Nice!!! I really like the awesome plot. I never really got into the Bionicle story line before, but now I am upset about not keeping up with it.:( I'm really curious about what happened to Fortux. Dude, I am so stoked for some weird reason. I can't stop from being happy today. There's nothing that should've made me happy today. I mean I've been so busy that I have hardly had any time for anything. I guess that I'm just happy to finally be on MOCpages with my few but awesome friends after a busy day. Btw my CYOA will probably be canceled. I don't really have the time for it now. Am I talking to much? I hopefully will be making a BL order soon. So than I can start making those self MOCs that I promised. I'm going to stop typing now. Bye. Anyways, great job, man!!!! You are a great story teller.;) |
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August 24, 2011 |
Awwww i might not in it? D: |
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August 24, 2011 |
amazing story dude i love it
and a.d:let him do the story how he wants to. |
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August 24, 2011 |
very interesting |
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August 24, 2011 |
Great chapter Ben! So this a.d. guy comes and tells makuta about the gold parts, and the good guys know about the parts as well. This might be intresting... |
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August 24, 2011 |
Great chapter! The photoshopping at the end was very good too. If or when you make my selfMOC, he doesn't have to be in any of your stories if you don't want him to, and he can be shorter than the average toa, because I like him like that. |
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August 24, 2011 |
I still think that Omni should have a good role because our stories coincide on some points. Just an idea. |
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August 24, 2011 |
I do enjoy Sandstalker, and not only for his taste in hats! |
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August 24, 2011 |
cant wait for more! |
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August 24, 2011 |
this story really kicks mine to the trash ! It's awesome and has a good pace. 5/5 ! |
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August 24, 2011 |
Great job! This is the best Bionicle story on MOCpages! (In my mind) ,Shadow |
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August 24, 2011 |
I hate to say it, but I think that's a good idea cutting some self mocs. Don't want too many people who's personalities can be hard to match. Anywayz, nice episode!!! Lots of talk in this one, I want some action in the next! :D Oh, and room for one more in your scout group with Tahu and Lewa? XD I kid. :D |
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Why does this have the same title as chapter 9 of my story? O_o |
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August 24, 2011 |
Awesome work Mr. Cossy! Great story! |
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August 24, 2011 |
I'm really happy to hear you guys like A Story Reborn :D Thanks to all of you ;) |
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August 24, 2011 |
Oh, this is awsome! |
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August 24, 2011 |
Fantastic episode! I love it! |
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August 24, 2011 |
Awesome chapter, this is a great series! |
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August 24, 2011 |
... could be? Nah just kidding, I know who you mean, it isn't though :/ |
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August 24, 2011 |
Cool! That Skrall that Nitro was talking to could be... :0 |
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August 24, 2011 |
Thanks you two :D Glad you liked it, don't act like you don't know what happened to Fortrux Teagle :P |
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August 24, 2011 |
WOO! epic chapter. I love the bit where nitro picks up his mask :) But what has happened to me :0 |
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August 24, 2011 |
Finally!Awesome and first.:P |
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