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War on the Rogue Part 8: The Smoke clears....
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After seeing himself knock Magmagear away, Aridike, Callan, and the rest of our heroes continue to fight for their lives! But not all will live past this day....
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In case you didn't see the last episode written by Baron von Ben, HERE is the link to it! :D
(WARNING: Chapter contains occasional slightly blurry images. I apologize)


Surprised at seeing himself disappear before his eyes, Aridike averts his attention to his comrade....

Aridike: How many of me do you see, Cal?
Callan: Excuse me?

Meanwhile with the others...

Kreezon: You aren't much of a fighter, beast!!
Toxikeel: Oh really?! Well then....

(Toxikeel springs back)

Toxikeel: Guess I will just kill your friend while I'm a "poor fighter"!

Kreezon: I think not, monster!!
Toxikeel: SCCCCCRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAACH!!!!

Kreezon: Foul play not work out for you, now did it?

Veneno: I tire of playing games!!
Davix: AAARGH!!!
Jordan: Surrender now beast or I'll...

Veneno: Do what?!? Die?!?

Jordan: Uuuuuuugh!!
Veneno: Cause I can make you do that easily...

Kreezon: JORDAN!!!

Kreezon: I'll KILL you for this!!
Veneno: I was hoping you would do that...

BAM!!
Kreezon: Yow!!!
Veneno: You feeble Toa always get sloppy when your angry...

Veneno: Oh, Spike, time to save your keister again....

Spike: Ooourgh!!!
Cheesy: Take that ya varmint!

Cheesy: You killed my friend Destrin, and if I didn' know any better, I'd kill you for it.

Veneno: But you DON'T know any better!

Cheesy: YOOUUU!!! Unngh...
Veneno: You Toa never knew anything about vengeance....

Spike: Is he dead?!
Veneno: Almost. You can finish him off if you like...

Amtrox: Don't even think about it!
Spike: Ha ha ha, I'll finish you too!!

Veneno: Uh, Spike, I'm not to sure about that...
Davix: You're going down, bug!!
Veneno: I don't think so!!! EVERYONE RETREAT!!! RETREAT!!!

Gaturahk: I'm not leaving without a hostage!! That oughta assure our escape!

Meanwhile....

Magmagear: I don't know what you just did, but you've only angered me further!!

Callan: And you think we care!!
Magmagear: Ooof!!

Aridike: You could beat us separately, but you're no match for us together!!
Magmagear: YARGH!!

Callan: So do you prefer a fist, or a foot in your face?!?

Rahkshika: Later, fools, follow us and the silver one gets it!!
Callan: No!!

Gaturahk: What about Magmagear?!
Veneno: What about him?!? Let's move!

Cossy: Urgh... The rest of em got away, but nice work on Magmagear, guys!
Aridike: Thanks!! But they have Vazok...

Davix: Not him alone, Jordan will die we dont get him help soon....

Amtrox: He is lucky, I'm afraid. The Commander Cheesy just passed, asking me to take care of his golden armor with his last breath...
Cossy: Oh no....

But one more will die today....

Kulstof: Oooh... Red freak got the jump on me....

Kulstof: Urgh!! Where's my rifle!?

Kulstof: Ah, this will do nicely for now...

Kulstof: They got him... but they won't keep him....

Kulstof: Today Magmagear will die!!! He must!!!

Rushing behind them all, Kulstof lunges towards Magmagear, wanting just one kill...

And he gets it....
Magmagear: G-goodbye..... Toa..... Ungh....

Cossy: NO!!!
THWAK!!
Kulstof: Argh...

Cossy: He's out, and he will pay for this... wait... The mask of Time!!! Aridike, can you stop this?!?

Suddenly, Aridike remembers saving Callan's life and seeing his death beforehand.... but he also remembers the price....
Aridike: Ugh... I.. can not. I have already bent the rules of time once, and I am forbidden to do it again. For how long, I don't know.

Cossy: Sigh.... Very well. Davix, Callan, and Kreezon, help wake our unconscious friends.... Aridike, you and I are going to interrogate this member. Let's hope she will help us track down the others....

TO BE CONCLUDED!!!

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Comments

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  September 8, 2011
cool!
Caleb Lang
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  August 29, 2011
NO! Me save tha day! "D
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  August 27, 2011
The first chapter of Into the Inferno is up!
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  August 25, 2011
Another awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  August 25, 2011
Hey Caleb! It is me Shadow Toa. I made new account because my old one would not get likes and the mods and Sean would not give them back. So here I am! ,Shadow
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  August 25, 2011
awesome story. poor cheesy. cant wait for the next chapter.
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  August 25, 2011
Ooh dear! The suspense. :D Can't wait to see the end. :)
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  August 25, 2011
Awesome new chapter!
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  August 24, 2011
amazing chapter that i was actually Pi$$ed off at the end ! Man this was epic, but i didn't want the self mocs and magma gear to die !!!!! Well, you left us an epic cliffhanger ! 5/5
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  August 24, 2011
Awesome work! This just keeps getting better and better!
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  August 24, 2011
Awesome! You never fail to deliver a fantastic comic Callan. I was wondering if I could please make an edited picture for you? I can do Callan or I could do somebody else if you like. anyway FANTASTIC COMIC!!! XD
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  August 24, 2011
Awesome! Love the bit with Kulstof killing Magmagear. That was really unexpected! :O Great work!
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  August 24, 2011
Totally epic bro! Lovely work! Great to see Magmagear dead (Or is he :3) This was an epic Chapter, hopefully Chessy isn't too upset :P Anyway, great work mate ;)
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  August 24, 2011
Why didn't they all just fuse into a katia at the start and PWN magma butt?
Caleb Lang
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Chaos Master
  August 23, 2011
Very nice chapter, Callan! Can't wait until the next one!
Caleb Lang
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Soap M.
  August 23, 2011
Wow, Callan, didn't die. :D Great one! :D
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  August 23, 2011
Yay! Magmagear is dead! He got what he deserved, but, why kill off Cheesy? That was so unexpected! Another great chapter Callan! Keep it up!
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  August 23, 2011
I Killed Magmagear!!! Ya!!!!! Great chapter.
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  August 23, 2011
lol if u brang in shadow venom he would destroy everone after all he is ninja
 I made it 
  August 23, 2011
Thanks a million everybody!!! And why Cheesy? Well, I kinda need his parts. :/ Sorry Cheesemaster.
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  August 23, 2011
:( This is sad. Why Cheesy??? Great Job though!
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  August 23, 2011
Wow, that's alot of dead people. At least Magmagear got what he had coming to him. I can't wait for the next chapter... Any idea bout your next story?
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  August 23, 2011
AWESOME!
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  August 23, 2011
Good story! I was confused at first with the no-part-7, but then I saw it. Nice ending!
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  August 23, 2011
amazing story :D no magmagear cant be dead! he was an awesome villian :(
 
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