WARNING THIS BEFORE ATUKAMS BIGG REVAMP!
About this creation
in the prison cell of atukams ship "Atukams Wing" we find our heros trapped*
Ignika:well it looks like he finally got us cossy..were fresh kratta meat.
Cossy:yep i think this is the end of us all.
Raphael:i become a toa for one day an already we get into a load of Sh*t
Kylord:oh cmon guys stop it, we will get out of this just fine!
Shadowflame:kylords right, stay calm and we,ll be fine
???:i highly doubt that it will be fine!
???:can it,Raisen we will be fine
???:both of you just shut up.
Shadowflame:may i ask who the h*ll are u guys?
???:i am raisen ex-toa of white lightning
???:i am thunder, toa of lightning
???:i am Ray'd ex-toa of red lightning
Ray'd:and if anyone didnt notice that cage over there belongs to Norick, The ice lord.
Shadowflame:NORICK!?!?!
pan to the cage*
Norick:hello toa, it seems we are both *GASP* in a tight situation.
Shadowflame:but why cant he escape!
Ray'd:the cage is called the elementist Prison cell or the E.P.C.
it can sustain all known elements to the feild.
basically he cant use his ice powers or brake free.
FEet walk into the room*
Damian:toa, bow down to your new leader!
Damaian:atukam plz step in!
Atukam walks in*
(remeber this is before the upgrade of atukam)
Atukam: hello pests!
Atukam:and hello norick you Bas*ard
Atukam:now as you can all see, you are trapped under my control.
Shadowflame:and we wont stay in it for long.
Atukam:oh but on the contrary shadowflame your cage, like noricks is a E.P.C cage
Atukam:so you cant escape...
Atukam:so im finally through with hunting you all!
Atukam:so id get some shut eye, cause it will be awhile before you escape.
Later while everyones sleeping*
Shadowflame:hmmm, i cant sleep while im in his cage, i have got to find away out of here!
Shadowflame:any ideas norick?
Norick:of all my years on the feild, i have not seen this technology, i can not help you im afraid.
Shadowflame:WAIT!, i have an idea!
Shadowflame:if i can get my tail out of the cage...got it!
Shadowflame:ok now if i can get this right i can turn of the E.P.C's element blocker so you can break free norick!
Shadowflame:i got it norick! now blast out of there so you can get us out.
pan to cage*
norick opens the cage*
norick kneels and trys to stand*
Norick:thank you shadowflame..now its my turn to get you out.
Shadowflame:Wait norick!
Shadowflame:hes here...
Atukam:YOU! you werent suppose to escape! you will pay for your stupidity!
Norick:you are no match for me you filthy makuta
Atukam:i will erase you!
Norick:arlight atukam!
Both:LETS SEE WHAT YOU GOT!
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August 30, 2011 |
it should be called the "elementide Prison Inside cell" or the "E.P.I.C" which is what this chapter is! :D |
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JPfan65 Studios August 22, 2011 |
Awesome! |
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August 22, 2011 |
KOOL :D |
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A.D Lord of Darkness August 21, 2011 |
Awesome but thunder is the toa of Disasters. Not lightning. :) |
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I made it |
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August 21, 2011 |
Quoting A.D Lord of Darkness
Awesome but thunder is the toa of Disasters. Not lightning. :)
here hes lightning XD |
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August 21, 2011 |
agreed!!! |
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August 20, 2011 |
EPIC!!! |
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August 19, 2011 |
I have to agree with Cody on that XD Anyway, great chapter! What an epic ending! Not to mention what a clever way to have Norick get out! Awesome stuff mate ;) Can't wait for the next chapter! |
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August 19, 2011 |
Sweet, the laundary basket makes a good prison. |
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