Episode 9
About this creation
The people in the small house stared at the T.V., waiting for something to happen.
A French man sat down at the desk.
He began to speak in French.
His voice began to escalate, then it stopped.
He turned he turned his head, obviously distracted.
Suddenly, a gun appeared in the screen and shot the man.
The channel went blank.
Everyone continued to watch the video as in re-ran several times.
And every time it went blank.
"We're wasting time," Caleb said eventually.
He got up and began to leave.
Jaren looked at the ladder to make sure no one was coming.
He walked to the small cot...
and hid it under the bed.
Just then, Jess came down the ladder
She saw what he was doing.
Jaren stood up
"What are you doing?..." Jess asked.
"Are you stealing food?" she asked, shocked.
"It's every man for himself," he said, "get used to it."
Just then, Bob came down.
"What's going on?" he asked.
"He's stealing food!" Jess.
"Not cool man!"
"Look, we need to split the food up, we aren't going to let this happen again."
Everyone lounged around, not sure what to do.
Eventually Jess went to play solitaire
But instead, she found a message, sent from the secretary of defense, to every email in America
She rested her head against the screen, this was bad, very bad
She went to get the rest, they all read the message, stone-faced.
This was Very bad.
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Jarod Waltz August 22, 2011 |
am I still alive, my MOCpages has been down and I've finaly been able to see the pictures |
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August 21, 2011 |
great scenes cal!!! |
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I made it |
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August 15, 2011 |
Quoting Captain Sam
Thanks. I wonder what the message said...
what message? either way, next episode is out. |
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August 15, 2011 |
Thanks. I wonder what the message said... |
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August 15, 2011 |
great ep! |
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August 15, 2011 |
Quoting Captain Sam
Please tell me I'm not banned! My email didn't tell me this was out!
Don't worry, you're in |
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August 14, 2011 |
Please tell me I'm not banned! My email didn't tell me this was out! |
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August 14, 2011 |
I need you to make your choice in the Adventures of Olympus within 2 days of me getting pictures on or I will be forced to kill you off. |
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August 12, 2011 |
Great episode! I wish it had pictures though. |
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Paperweight . August 2, 2011 |
Nice ep! |
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Sargeant Brick August 2, 2011 |
Nice cliff hanger
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Nate Bott August 2, 2011 |
Sweet episode! I really liked it! |
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August 2, 2011 |
Nice work!!! I really like where your going with this. Great job!! |
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August 2, 2011 |
Nice, but short. |
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August 2, 2011 |
ok. |
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August 2, 2011 |
Very suspensful. I really like all the elements of the story. |
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August 2, 2011 |
Heehee. I'm a dirty little bandit. You never know what might disappear next. Maybe a submachine gun, maybe Bob's medicine. This is cool! |
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August 2, 2011 |
Cool! |
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August 2, 2011 |
Quoting Athanasios Lazarou
Hey, Caleb, I have a question. I'm in this anymore, am I? Or have you not introduced me yet? (Doubt it.) If I am not, then ok. If I am, then who am I? And either way, if I am, you can make the choices for me.
I'll put you in, but you wont have choices, since you almost never get on |
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August 2, 2011 |
This is great! I love how its coming along. There's also better cliffhangers here than in island locked. |
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August 2, 2011 |
This is good, really good. |
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August 2, 2011 |
great cliff hanger |
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August 2, 2011 |
great cliff hanger |
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August 2, 2011 |
Hey, Caleb, I have a question. I'm in this anymore, am I? Or have you not introduced me yet? (Doubt it.) If I am not, then ok. If I am, then who am I? And either way, if I am, you can make the choices for me.
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August 2, 2011 |
BEST ONE YET!And can you add me on favorites |
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