Here it is....
About this creation
Sorry it's late, had some trouble with MOCpages... Okay as normal Don't make your choice and get BANNED!!!!!! (MR. Viking is out for the weekend so he get's a pass.
The bus slowed down as they passed the house.
Inside, the light was on.
Caleb got out and ran toward the door.
A young woman answered the door.
"Please, we need somewhere to stay, we've been driving for hours!"
She was silent for a minute, then she said, "I don't have much room, but fine."
Sarge got off the top off the bus where he's been shooting zombies from, and followed the rest inside.
Caleb got back in the bus to go park it while the others went inside?
He parked it in the yard and got out.
He closed the door behind him as he went inside.
Inside, everyone was exhausted and laid about the place.
Sam rested his head on Jude.
"Do you live here alone?" asked Caleb.
"I do now," she said silently, "My husband left several weeks back to try and make contact... he said he's be back in a day... he never came back."
"Oh," Caleb said as he looked silently ahead.
"Do you believe in God?" asked the woman.
"I do," he said, wondering where this would lead.
"Well, answer this, why would a God let my husband die, or even let this world Damn itself." she asked.
Peter was the one that answered, "You see, God can use things, like your husband not coming back, for good! It might be that you pray for his safety and that he will someday come back, that he does come back. God would have used that to help your faith grow."
The woman looked ahead, not quite convinced, but she let the conversation go, not wanting to get in a full scale argument with someone she's met minutes ago and didn't know his name.
Sergeant pulled out a letter from his pocket and read it, Marcus wondered what it said.
The woman got up and turned the T.V. on. She'd seen everything that was on, it was constantly on, but it was still something.
Everyone's heads' turned when the T.V. began to show something new, something about the bombing
Again, sorry this took so long, but hey better than not at all.
Again, IF YOU ARE IN THIS EPISODE, you are REQUIRED to comment! or you WILL be booted from the series.
Sorry no choices, just wait for the next one.
God bless you!
-Caleb
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August 21, 2011 |
hi cal!!! it s so cool that you have a yellow bus!!! i hope there is a pursuit!!! |
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Nate Bott August 1, 2011 |
Once again, great episode, I loved it. I have been having trouble with MOCpages, too. |
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August 1, 2011 |
Sad there are no choices. I really liked this one. |
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August 1, 2011 |
This is very good. I'm back but I may be gone again all week so if there is another one please don't ban me! |
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July 31, 2011 |
Am I still in? |
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July 31, 2011 |
nice! 5 in a row! hehehehe! great ep! |
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July 31, 2011 |
Nice, and suspensful. Great one Caleb. |
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July 31, 2011 |
nice! |
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Sargeant Brick July 30, 2011 |
I'm back now I dont have to worry of being booted anyway nice job |
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Nate Bott July 30, 2011 |
Nice! Great episode, and great cliffhanger! |
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July 30, 2011 |
Nice Episode! |
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July 30, 2011 |
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July 30, 2011 |
Oh yeah! They show Spongebob in the Apocalypse! Jk. Great night-time effect! |
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July 30, 2011 |
Great episode. Kinda short though. |
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July 30, 2011 |
Very nice! |
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July 30, 2011 |
Nice!!!! Great work, Caleb!!! I really like how the story is coming. You have inspired me to make a zombie apocalypse in the future. Probably when I finish my lego city. Again, nice work!!!! |
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July 30, 2011 |
I'm using the dog as a pillow. XD |
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July 30, 2011 |
I thought That talk was going to lead somewhere else. XD |
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I made it |
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July 30, 2011 |
Quoting Captain McCoy™
was I banned? Nice epi. btw.
No one has been banned yet |
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July 30, 2011 |
was I banned? Nice epi. btw. |
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July 30, 2011 |
Great! Darn, that was a great cliffhanger. Now I need to see the next one! Oh and I'll be gone until August 11. But i MAY comment. so yeah... |
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I made it |
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July 30, 2011 |
I'm surprised no one noticed before, but she's missing, you'll see her soon though =P she's not banned btw |
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July 30, 2011 |
Nice episode Is my character banned? |
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