Wee, my self-MOC is finally finished!
This is also an entry for the 2011 Bio-cup.
About this creation
Name: Raudr
Gender: Male
Species: Matoran
Race: Ne-Matoran
Occupation: Mercenary Toa. Killing remaning Makutas, sometimes.
Title(s): Toa, Brother, The Wierd One, Survivor, that metal guy.
Element: Magnetism, and a little bit of Iron powers because of his mother.
Mask: Kanohi Pakari, the Mask of Strength.
Bio: (Yet to expand) Raudr is the son of the only survivor of the "genocide" the Makuta did with Ne-Matorans. (btw, Ne- comes from magNEtism)
No-one knows how that matoran managed to escape, but somehow he did.
However, he encountered a female Fe-Matoran. (Yes, female: in MY bionicle universe there are no gender-element limits, so male toas of water and female toas of fire are common.)
After years, they had a son: Raudr.(Yes it work differently from the canon way. No kaitagenesis, also :P) Then they had to escape to Bara Magna, and Teridax was killed, but Raudr parents were also. So he was left alone... well, not totally, he still had a friend. (that i will soon post, btw.)
His life as a "kid" is a little bit unknown, as well as how he became a toa.
Still considered a teenager by human measures, Raudr's life as made him a skilled fighter and assasin, as well as a technician. All the tribes on Bara Magna ask for him, despite his age. He spend his life doin'nothin, killing the occasional Makuta... Ya'know, ordinary things, no?
Now i think I must stop writing, or the judges will beat the hell outta me ;P
So, I'm entering my first contest here on MOCPages: the 2011 Bio-Cup . The theme for the eliminatories is: Behold the Power!
My interpretation was: to build something badarse and with an amazing elemental power.
So, here's Raudr, the Wierd One, toa of Magnetism!

Full body shot. I hope you can see something, black is hard to photograph, damn.
Anyway, all is custom, apart from the head and the feet.

Showing off his custom arm. Kinda. Lighting here's awful. Also, BEHOLD MY POWAH! :P

His sword. I don't have a good name for her. Yet.
Anyway, have you ever thought about how awesome is Magnetism? You can manipulate every kind of metals (and creating weapons out of it, consequently), "fly", magnetising everything... I mean, you even don't really need a shield, you can deflect/stop incoming bullets, swords, knives... Pretty awesome, IMO.

Another shot of the sword.

Hey Apple! Knives! ;)
I love chains.

Raudr:"Yeah, I mean, look at these babies! Shiny!"

His necklace. It isn't only for the look: it actually contains elemental magnetism energy. How it works? One can put energy inside (but not limitlessly), and use it, in case of emergency. If you ever read Eragon, you'll understand.
Also this is another element that adds to the "power" thing.
But wait! Since I play Bass...

Raudr must have one too! I really like it. (Oh, it will be posted separately, and the desing may change)
This isn't part of the entry, actually.

Just bein'awesome.
IRL I'm pretty good at playing. Might get youtube, dunno...

Last shot! Some of you may say "finally!" ;P
Judges, if you need better pictures, just tell me!!!
Well, how was it?
I hope the judges, and you all, will like it.
Good luck everyone in the constest!
Raudr
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT FOR THE JUDGES:
due to baseball matches and some sort of BaseballCamp, I can't use computer from 24/7 till 8/8. I hope i'll find the time, and a way to partecipate regardless of this absence. Thanks for reading.
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January 5, 2012 |
Quoting Dragonax lord of all things black and creepy I love the knives on the chain, can I use that?
Sure thing bro :)
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January 4, 2012 |
Excallent! I love the knives on the chain, can I use that? Please? And the Ignika armor on the custom torso is great, I admire the skill it takes to do something like that! |
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Dave Russ November 18, 2011 |
Ohhhhh.....bang.....wha.....what....happened.....ehhh.....u.....passed out! XD BEAST! |
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Saido Dieono November 3, 2011 |
OMG That is epic love the hand body is awesome i like all about the moc. |
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November 3, 2011 |
Thanks everyone :) Btw, V2 should come out shortly. |
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this is an amazing self moc i like how u used all the inika armor pieces yet kept it unique from them all |
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October 10, 2011 |
Nice work! Love the torso and arms. |
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September 29, 2011 |
Quoting Vored 03
Wow, you really know how to make a good self-MoC. Nice part use of that Inika-chestplate! Many great designs in here, such as the daggers on his upper legs. Fantastic!
Many thanks bro :) |
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September 29, 2011 |
Wow, you really know how to make a good self-MoC. Nice part use of that Inika-chestplate! Many great designs in here, such as the daggers on his upper legs. Fantastic! |
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September 29, 2011 |
Quoting M G
Not previously commenting on this makes me feel, well lame. I mean seriously this is fantstic. What was i thinking not even giving you my thoughts on how flipping amazing your self moc is, how his hair makes him unique, that the custom body is beautiful, and that overall i'm shocked at the glory that is Raudr, the Weird One. Well i guess i can tell you all of that now. Oh wait...
Thanks a lot for the kind words bro, it means a lot :D |
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September 28, 2011 |
Not previously commenting on this makes me feel, well lame. I mean seriously this is fantstic. What was i thinking not even giving you my thoughts on how flipping amazing your self moc is, how his hair makes him unique, that the custom body is beautiful, and that overall i'm shocked at the glory that is Raudr, the Weird One. Well i guess i can tell you all of that now. Oh wait... |
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September 27, 2011 |
Quoting carrubba antonio
bellissimo..veramente tanti dettagli poi le armi sono belle ma la chitarra e' una figata,,,,,bravo
Grazie Antonio ;) |
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September 27, 2011 |
bellissimo..veramente tanti dettagli poi le armi sono belle ma la chitarra e' una figata,,,,,bravo |
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September 22, 2011 |
Your self moc is soo awesome ! :D I love the annoying orange reference lol, and awesome designs and weapons for this guy. 5/5 |
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September 21, 2011 |
Thanks ya' all for the comments ;D |
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September 21, 2011 |
That's one beastly Self MOC! Great work mate! Love all of his weapons and awesome work on the torso and colour scheme :D Awesome work ;) |
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September 21, 2011 |
O_O Wow. This has to be one of the best BIONICLE MOCs I have seen in quite some time. Hats off yo you, sir! :D |
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September 20, 2011 |
now i got to this moc by seeing it at the side of your revamped toa nomaka moc and this is epic!!!! every thig about is awesome but the chest is slighty simple but if you want to you should check out my self moc which is also a toa of magnetism and has the same mask http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/288198 |
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nice moc my selfmoc is a toa of magnetism |
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September 6, 2011 |
Quoting Gideon Fucci
Very nicely done.
Thanks :) |
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September 5, 2011 |
Very nicely done. |
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September 1, 2011 |
Quoting Ricky Comisso
veramente molto bello! non sono un fan dei bionicol perņ questo mi piace! ho letto nella tua home page che vieni dal nord italia! anche io (io abito a 20 km da udine) se vuoi unisciti al gruppo mocpages italiano la potrai parlare con tutti gli altri costruttori italiani questo č il link: http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/16180 ciao =D
Grazie per l'invito! Io abito a 40 km sotto Udine :) |
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August 31, 2011 |
veramente molto bello! non sono un fan dei bionicol perņ questo mi piace! ho letto nella tua home page che vieni dal nord italia! anche io (io abito a 20 km da udine) se vuoi unisciti al gruppo mocpages italiano la potrai parlare con tutti gli altri costruttori italiani questo č il link: http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/16180 ciao =D
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July 24, 2011 |
Awesome self moc but he does remind me of kyler's drogu because of the mask, body and sliver krika blade as the weapon |
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July 23, 2011 |
Quoting Raviel .
Dude,amazing work with your self-MOC.Guess who's facing you in the second round?It's me!
Yep! Good luck! |
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July 21, 2011 |
Dude,amazing work with your self-MOC.Guess who's facing you in the second round?It's me! |
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July 18, 2011 |
Quoting Kai Heffernan
An excellent entry! The belt with knives, sword and necklace all added to the 'behold the power' theme but I felt that a little more could have been done to get those last few points. The colour scheme is a nice one and everything just blends really well. I think it deserves an 7/10. Also, don't be discouraged or angry about what the judges say, it's our job to give constructive criticism. Good luck in the contest!
Hey, I'm not angry at all! I perfectly know that I'm an around-average-skill builder.
But, thanks a lot for your kind words :D |
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July 17, 2011 |
amazing bionicle moc the design is fantastic and the concept is amazing |
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July 16, 2011 |
An excellent entry! The belt with knives, sword and necklace all added to the 'behold the power' theme but I felt that a little more could have been done to get those last few points. The colour scheme is a nice one and everything just blends really well. I think it deserves an 7/10. Also, don't be discouraged or angry about what the judges say, it's our job to give constructive criticism. Good luck in the contest! |
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July 15, 2011 |
Thanks y'all!
Quoting Harvey Cu
Quite a nice build especially the guitar. My only concern is that its body is pretty simple and I just don't see the "power". 6/10
Actually, the only simple thing in his body is his chest armour. But, whatever... |
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July 15, 2011 |
Cool entry and self-moc! Good luck in the contest! |
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July 15, 2011 |
Very good moc!I love all the style and poseability of his,and the build is great too!I also find that belt with his knifes a very creative addition!Your score:7/10 |
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July 15, 2011 |
Quite a nice build especially the guitar. My only concern is that its body is pretty simple and I just don't see the "power". 6/10 |
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July 14, 2011 |
Quoting Yuri Fassio
Nice. The stilish appearence and cool equipment make this an adequate entry. 6/10.
Thanks. |
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July 14, 2011 |
Nice. The stilish appearence and cool equipment make this an adequate entry. 6/10. |
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July 14, 2011 |
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~
Awesome! You play bass too? Sweet. But your LEGO bass is better than mine. :P
Yours was awesome :D btw i discovered i can play guitar like three days ago... I don't call myself weird for nothing ;P |
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July 14, 2011 |
Awesome! You play bass too? Sweet. But your LEGO bass is better than mine. :P |
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July 14, 2011 |
Quoting Johann Dakitsch
Quite a good one. Its design seems solid, altough not really impressive, and the build is nice. I like these weapons, and that hair stuff was a good touch. However, I think the chest armor could be another one, this one makes the creations look simpler han it is. A shot of its back could have avoided this a bit. 7/10
Thankies! I was expecting a 4 :P
I can still take a picture of it without the chest armour, but i guess that'll be sorta unfair. So, shall I? |
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Quite a good one. Its design seems solid, altough not really impressive, and the build is nice. I like these weapons, and that hair stuff was a good touch. However, I think the chest armor could be another one, this one makes the creations look simpler han it is. A shot of its back could have avoided this a bit. 7/10 |
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July 14, 2011 |
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July 14, 2011 |
Quoting Nathan Davis
Awesome! The way his shoulders are connected is great and his legs look cool. Nice job!
Hey, thanks! :D
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July 14, 2011 |
Awesome! The way his shoulders are connected is great and his legs look cool. Nice job! |
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