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2011 Bio-Cup-Eliminatoriers-"Behold The Power"(OUTDATED)
Yes,this is my first MOC on MOCpages and an entry for the 2011 Bio-Cup.For my first MOC,I will post my self-MOC,Raviel!
About this creation

This is the back of him.

A pose.

"Top of the morning,eh?"Another pose.

Yes,for the power is one of the most evilest elements,the power of darkness!

Bye-bye!"Okay,so why did I decide to make my self-MOC a villain?It's because you don't see that many villain self-MOCs.Any advice would be apprecited.Oh,and if you want,comment!My next MOCs are going to be Jordan and Morack.Thanks for viewing!:D
And special thanks to Fortrux!



Comments

 I made it 
  February 21, 2012
Okay,even though this is outdated,I realized while looking at my MOCs that this has gotten 1000 views! :D
 I like it 
  November 30, 2011
AWESOME!
 I like it 
  November 25, 2011
Amazing job!!!
  November 23, 2011
Hey Raviel, in the torunamocoff, there are 2 creations you haven't commented on yet, and don't forget, this is the last day before round 2. The 2 entries are Rennoc's: http://mocpages.com/moc.php/296007 and Banjax's: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/296311 thanks, this is just a warning.
 I like it 
  October 3, 2011
He definitely looks evil! 5/5
 I like it 
  September 10, 2011
Great moc! The head design is creative, and weapon and feet gives you props man. Great job! :D
 I like it 
  August 29, 2011
Great job! The staff gives him a sort of "Witch doctory feel"
 I made it 
  August 28, 2011
Sad to say,this version is outdated.:'(
 I made it 
  August 28, 2011
30 likes now!Thanks all!
 I like it 
  August 28, 2011
This is cool, it kind of reminds me of a ghost.
 I like it 
  August 26, 2011
That's a thin head but still cool lol
 I made it 
  August 26, 2011
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Sweet updates. I think you should give him a better, more realistic mask though. How come you can't change the first pic?
Don't really know how to.
 I like it 
  August 25, 2011
Sweet updates. I think you should give him a better, more realistic mask though. How come you can't change the first pic?
 I made it 
  August 25, 2011
New pictures,I can turn them now!Except the main picture.
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  August 25, 2011
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/284430 I built him and he's in my serial.
 I made it 
  August 24, 2011
Quoting Fortrux VoidMaster Scratch that- I was bored so i did it here-- http://mocpages.com/moc.php/284158 :)
Thanks dude.:)
 I like it 
  August 24, 2011
Scratch that- I was bored so i did it here-- http://mocpages.com/moc.php/284158 :)
 I made it 
  August 24, 2011
Quoting Fortrux VoidMaster SURE! I can do this guy- im going away so ill do it next week, just let me knwo about his element
Darkness
 I like it 
  August 24, 2011
SURE! I can do this guy- im going away so ill do it next week, just let me knwo about his element
 I like it 
  August 23, 2011
His feet are strange but look good on the Moc. Good job :)
 I like it 
  August 22, 2011
Interesting self moc. I plan to build him (along with many many) self mocs at the end of the year. He has a superb creepy but cool look, hat and head design ! If i were you, i'd make your self moc both good and bad. He is truly awesome. 5/5 bro !
Raviel .
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  August 21, 2011
I accept challenge. :D
 I like it 
  August 21, 2011
Great one. Especially those feet! And the head is very unique.. and he also has a very interesting staff! Excellent!
 I made it 
  August 20, 2011
Quoting Magmabane the Toa of Magma I liked his head so much I had to build you! Due to pieces drought no epic body although I did gacve him a cool chibi-like body. And I had to substitute the hat for a bowl looking thing he kinda looks the black guy from one of Gringat's new MOCs although I built you in chibi a week or two before him.
You mean Jibs?No,this hat is completly different.Again,thanks for the comments!;)
 I like it 
  August 20, 2011
I liked his head so much I had to build you! Due to pieces drought no epic body although I did gacve him a cool chibi-like body. And I had to substitute the hat for a bowl looking thing he kinda looks the black guy from one of Gringat's new MOCs although I built you in chibi a week or two before him.
 I like it 
  August 17, 2011
Love him! You are right, there arn't enoughbad self MOCs out there, It'll be a pleasure to build him!
 I made it 
  August 16, 2011
Quoting M G Awesome i'll get started on that along with Galvis tomorrow. Hopefully all of the self mocs including you will be up tomorrow!
Thanks for being the first one to make him.:)
 I like it 
  August 15, 2011
Awesome i'll get started on that along with Galvis tomorrow. Hopefully all of the self mocs including you will be up tomorrow!
 I made it 
  August 15, 2011
Quoting M G Even though i can't see these pics i saw it on google and its awesome. In case you didn't see my comment in the group "Into the Inferno", here's what i said... "Awesome self moc however here's the problem, all of the evil characters are red, black, and a little grey. How about this though, your self moc is a matoran in the comic and agrees to trick the heroes in return for his freedom which is an evil thing to do. You'd be a primary antagonist for maybe 2 episodes and then you may return later though this may involve a change of character (bad to good). Hows that sound?"
I'm fine with that.:)
 I like it 
  August 14, 2011
Even though i can't see these pics i saw it on google and its awesome. In case you didn't see my comment in the group "Into the Inferno", here's what i said... "Awesome self moc however here's the problem, all of the evil characters are red, black, and a little grey. How about this though, your self moc is a matoran in the comic and agrees to trick the heroes in return for his freedom which is an evil thing to do. You'd be a primary antagonist for maybe 2 episodes and then you may return later though this may involve a change of character (bad to good). Hows that sound?"
 I like it 
  August 12, 2011
Awesome work Raviel.:)
 I like it 
  July 21, 2011
Sick! I love the staff and legs!
 I made it 
  July 20, 2011
Quoting Toa Venom Nice! I really like the body design, and the head is a work of art. Good luck in the contest!
Thanks Toa Venom!:)
 I made it 
  July 20, 2011
Wow,everyone likes the head.Maybe I'll do a how-to on it today.
 I like it 
  July 20, 2011
Nice! I really like the body design, and the head is a work of art. Good luck in the contest!
 I made it 
  July 20, 2011
Quoting Cody G Nice entry, and excellent build for a first MOC! I love the top hat. :)
Thanks Cody.:)
 I like it 
  July 20, 2011
Nice entry, and excellent build for a first MOC! I love the top hat. :)
 I made it 
  July 18, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy HAHA Brilliant! Love the top hat and great work on the legs and feet :D Awesome work for a first post :D Great stuff ;) Can't wait for more ;)
Thanks Cossy.=)
 I like it 
  July 18, 2011
HAHA Brilliant! Love the top hat and great work on the legs and feet :D Awesome work for a first post :D Great stuff ;) Can't wait for more ;)
 I made it 
  July 17, 2011
Quoting Kai Heffernan Well, I'm honoured that your first moc on MOCpages is an entry to our contest :) I read the last comments and it sounds like you had trouble with the pics? Looks like you've fixed that for the most part but still look stretched. The build is nice and original, the arms on the back unnecessary and the colour scheme a bit too simple. 6/10.
Thanks,this was actually made before the contest but posted when you could put the entries in.So from four judges so far,that's 22/60.Come on Harvey and Chris,I need atleast need a 14 combined or higher to get in.
Raviel .
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Kai Heffernan
  July 16, 2011
Well, I'm honoured that your first moc on MOCpages is an entry to our contest :) I read the last comments and it sounds like you had trouble with the pics? Looks like you've fixed that for the most part but still look stretched. The build is nice and original, the arms on the back unnecessary and the colour scheme a bit too simple. 6/10.
 I made it 
  July 16, 2011
Quoting Yuri Fassio Don't sweat it, there should not be many eliminations and you got an average overall score so far :)
Well,thank you Mr.Fassio.I was feeling worried but it's my first MOC.
  July 16, 2011
Don't sweat it, there should not be many eliminations and you got an average overall score so far :)
 I made it 
  July 15, 2011
Updated pictures now!Now people can actually see the MOC now instead of clicking the pictures and going sideways.=D
 I made it 
  July 15, 2011
Quoting LegoBob 123 (Bacon) Awesome man, and welcome to the Pages! Sorry that I have not commented on this sooner, when I last tried to look at it the Mod's had not approved it. Again brill wok Raviel! Keep it up ;)
Thanks man.Don't worry,your self-MOC and Jordan's will be up soon.=D
 I like it 
  July 15, 2011
Awesome man, and welcome to the Pages! Sorry that I have not commented on this sooner, when I last tried to look at it the Mod's had not approved it. Again brill wok Raviel! Keep it up ;)
 I made it 
  July 15, 2011
Oh,and one more thing to say.For his name,do NOT take his name as the Yu-gi-oh card.Thank you.=)
 I made it 
  July 15, 2011
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Ah, welcome (officially) to MOCpages! It's nice to finally see a MOC of yours. I look forward to more in the future. I suggest you keep the pictures on "large" and you flip them over. The flip button's right there on the uploader, I'm sure you can find it. ;) Good luck!
Thanks for the advice!
 I like it 
  July 15, 2011
Ah, welcome (officially) to MOCpages! It's nice to finally see a MOC of yours. I look forward to more in the future. I suggest you keep the pictures on "large" and you flip them over. The flip button's right there on the uploader, I'm sure you can find it. ;) Good luck!
 I made it 
  July 15, 2011
Quoting Yuri Fassio Might be good, but I couldn't stand the pictures so I scrolled down fast. Next time if something seems not be working properly, I suggest you to check and correct it before submitting the creation to a contest. 3/10.
Well,thankyou for your opinon,but if you let me in the contest,I will do the right thing next time.:(
 I like it 
  July 15, 2011
Wow! He is really cool! Great job! I am Cyborg Jedi's brother. I also make bionicles. Well great stuff and I can't wait to see more from you!! =D
  July 14, 2011
Might be good, but I couldn't stand the pictures so I scrolled down fast. Next time if something seems not be working properly, I suggest you to check and correct it before submitting the creation to a contest. 3/10.
 I made it 
  July 14, 2011
Quoting Johann Dakitsch Fine entry. The build is pretty nice, and have some good uses of system elements. Those arms in his back are indeed kinda odd, but nothing serious. The main problem here is presentation. Really, remember to turn your pictures to the right side next time(in case you don't know how to, you can do it in the normal visualization screen of your computer, as well as in the java uploader of the site). 7/10
Sorry Johann,but it was my first time posting something.I will get it right in the next entry.:(
 I like it 
  July 14, 2011
Fine entry. The build is pretty nice, and have some good uses of system elements. Those arms in his back are indeed kinda odd, but nothing serious. The main problem here is presentation. Really, remember to turn your pictures to the right side next time(in case you don't know how to, you can do it in the normal visualization screen of your computer, as well as in the java uploader of the site). 7/10
 I made it 
  July 14, 2011
Quoting Berial . Nice entry!The sideways pics are a bit annoying,and the moc is disproportionated,with small thigs,big shins,thin arms,and small shoulders.And what about those two arms in his back?They don't really loke like wings,and seem rushed.But the build is good,I really like his shins and feet design,the head is cool(is that a hat?),and for a first moc,this is quite good.Your score:6/10
Thanks Berial!You know what they say,live and learn.Hahaha,yes,that's his top hat.:P Why,just why did I have to add the wings.I maybe retake the pictures because it is annoying.I do like the head and I may do a how-to but he's my self-moc so,maybe not.Anyways,thanks for the advice Berial!
 I like it 
  July 14, 2011
Nice entry!The sideways pics are a bit annoying,and the moc is disproportionated,with small thigs,big shins,thin arms,and small shoulders.And what about those two arms in his back?They don't really loke like wings,and seem rushed.But the build is good,I really like his shins and feet design,the head is cool(is that a hat?),and for a first moc,this is quite good.Your score:6/10
 I like it 
  July 14, 2011
Great job!!!
  July 14, 2011
Nah, nothing.
 I made it 
  July 14, 2011
Quoting Puddimus Prime (Formerly Hun-Grr) From which country are you? I'd say Holland or Germany. Ik ben Nederlands! :)
Um,why do you want to ask?
 I made it 
  July 14, 2011
Quoting Nathan Davis Awesome! I really like the head and the legs are very cool too. The wings seem a bit small, but great MOC!
Thanks!And no,the wings were only for the contest.Although,I may keep the top hat.:D
  July 14, 2011
From which country are you? I'd say Holland or Germany. Ik ben Nederlands! :)
 I like it 
  July 14, 2011
Awesome! I really like the head and the legs are very cool too. The wings seem a bit small, but great MOC!
 I made it 
  July 13, 2011
Sorry about the small and sideway pictures.:(
 
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