My self-moc is back and ready for action. and the tail was added from sheer boardem..it might be removed in the future,maybe;)
About this creation
PLZ HELP ME MAKE HIM MY MOST POPULAR CREATION!
Real Name: Devon Kramer
Name:Shadowflame
Quote:"No mercy,its the way of the flame"
"i am the incorruptible shadowflame"
Speices:Matoran (Toa/Makuta Hybrid)
Race:Ta-Matoran/Shadow Matoran
Occupation: Leader of the Toa on The Field, Soul Guardian of The Field
Titles:shadowflame, Legendary toa,
the Toa of the Field, Brother
Alignment:Chaotic Good
Personality:hes alot like me, hes pretty solitary but opens up to his friends when in need. he likes to have fun but is mostly serious.he always sticks up for others, hes kind hearted and will give it all up for everyone he loves. and when hes up against his enemys. he pours his soul into his battle, and hes dedicated to win.
Element:Fire and Shadows
Kanohi:Rakthor Mask of Hypers
Weapons:Flame Sword,Double barrel energy shotgun,Arm energy guns.
Moc Status: Indestructible and ready to Kill some Makuta
Backstory:
On Fieldus Magna an evil ruler named Makuta Hydroxanoid spread the land with fear and disgrace. He was mutated from parts of other makuta. But he was building an army of perfect androids but needed a base body so he spent years capturing matoran of all kinds but all failures. But one day he came across a tribe of Ta-Matoran and ransacked the tribe. Finding a Ta-Matoran more powerful the the rest, It was Shada (Shadowflame) the leader of the tribe. Hydroxanoid took this matoran and cloned it into the android with modifications to make it a toa size. Keeping Shada ina jail cell.Spending Years in that jail cell building strength and mutations form Makuta Hydroxanoid, He became a toa of fire and shadows. He then broke out of his jail cell fighting the prototype androids. He finally broke out of the base, but he was still being chased by the androids. So he did the one thing he could do, He ran and jumped off a 100 Ft. cliff into energized protodermis. Finally coming out like the toa nuva with more armor he ran towards the souther continent. He met a rag-tag team of toa warriors called The Elemental Warriors. They fought many battles but after the Great Cataclysm Almost all of them died except, the second in command, member of the glatorian Tarix Tribe, Shadowflame and Wheelier the trasforming robot. But this didnt stop them. They grew stronger and stronger every day. but after the death of almost his entire old team the lemental warriors......he took the last survivier.....ignika, with him to find others...after finding his new toa team...the toa feildus...so now he is leading the tos feildus to destroy the makuta of the feild
It is your lucky day! I'm going to build him! TOA SIZED! :D ,Shadow
I like it
Soap M.
September 3, 2011
Wow! I'm very impressed. This is amazing! I have never noticed you before, and you've got some massive potentiel! I could go on, and on, and on.....May I use a bunch of your designs, they're great! Excellent MOC. I have to say I will be adding you as a favorite, and you have the honor of being on my homepage. ;)
I like it
SAIDO DIEON
September 1, 2011
EPIC MOC like the body ,the arms and legs are awesome and your self moc is my favorite of all your mocs
A very good self-moc. I agree with Berial about the colours though and I think there are some loose pieces that need some cleaning up. Other than that, nice moc :)
Quoting Berial .
Nice self-moc,I like the bulky build and the color scheme,though I do think he's a bit too colorful with all those tones of red and the trans-green on him.Very good work nonetheless,keep it up!
thanks berial and i changed the guns to dark red :D
Nice self-moc,I like the bulky build and the color scheme,though I do think he's a bit too colorful with all those tones of red and the trans-green on him.Very good work nonetheless,keep it up!
Very cool! Here's 1 like towards making him your most popular! Also, can my brother and I build Shadowflame?We might have to alter the colors slightly to include more red and less gold, would that be okay?
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant
With all that new snazzy detail, Shadowflame wouldn't look out of place in something like SoulCalibur or something. You know, where they have those really elaborate armour and swords and things.
thanks for commenting dude and yea your right he could be in sould calibur cause of all his armor and how complex it gets
With all that new snazzy detail, Shadowflame wouldn't look out of place in something like SoulCalibur or something. You know, where they have those really elaborate armour and swords and things.
Quoting Chopperskull (Leader of air)
I think this is the perfect version of Shadowflame. 5/5. I don't know if the tail is a great idea, unless there is a explanation.
there is actually....i basicLY WANTEDD TO REALESE MORE OF HIS MAKUTA SIDE..SO I added a dark spiney tail
SWEET! Lovely upgrades! Really liking the KK armour and his new tail is a nice touch :D Great work on this brother! I do agree with Cody on the grammar, but still EPIC work :D
For starters, you spelled "boredom" "boardom". The first one is correct. Sometimes I copy and paste all the HTML into a Word document and write my story there. It will check spelling and grammar for you, and if MOCpages glitches out on you, you have everything on the document so you don't have to go retyping everything.
Quoting Cody G
Nice, I love the tail! It gives him some personality. Oh, and you might want to check your spelling, you wouldn't want your Self-MOC page to look un-professional, would you? ;)
Nice, I love the tail! It gives him some personality. Oh, and you might want to check your spelling, you wouldn't want your Self-MOC page to look un-professional, would you? ;)
