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ML Test, Raid on White Tigers
A picture test for my Metal Legion battles. :D Words for each photo is below the picture! ...
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*Ksshtk!* *Move in! Move in!*
Ratatatatata!
BLAM! BLAM!

"Watch your back!"
Ratatatata!

"Heads up!"
Ratatata!
"Urgh!"



Ratatata!
"Agh!"



Ratatata!



"This is it! Let's move out!"



KA-BOOM!
"Whoa!"

"Watch it!"
BLAM!

"Watch that TNT!"

"Argh!"

"Quick! The dynamite!"

Bam! Bam!
"Sucka!"

KA-BOOM!

Ratatatata!

"Let's go!"

"Sir, we got it!"
*Kshtk!* *Well done soldier! Bring it on home!*

Well I really enjoyed that. This is a test to try out this kinda picture taking. I'll definitely make more in the future. :D
I'll make a squadron later.
Please rate and comment!



Comments

 I like it 
  July 4, 2011
Really nice techniques! =D
 I made it 
  July 4, 2011
Quoting The Pied Pauper $$
I already was using the Macro setting, it's just the focus.
 I like it 
  July 4, 2011
I think my favorite pic was the knife in the throat! For close-up shots, your camera should have a macro setting. It usually has a pic of a flower, or similar. If you fix the fuzziness and add a bit more dialog, you definitely have a winner! Loyal to the Legion!
Legofreak2444 ~
AA (Noname)
  July 2, 2011
Wait, if it's just a test, why did you upload it?
 I like it 
  July 2, 2011
cool tecnique, some pics are a little blury but good job anyways! Please stay active in eXtreme TFOL's!
 I made it 
  July 2, 2011
Quoting AA (Noname)
To get input from others, and you gave me yours, thanks. I knew the dialog was crud. :P
 I like it 
  July 2, 2011
Good use of the crystal.
Legofreak2444 ~
AA (Noname)
  July 1, 2011
I agree with Commander Hedzet, I just throw away blurry pictures. Now for C&C (since this is a ML MOC): The good: (1) visual effects. I like the use of the flames and the crystal. (2) The story. It's interesting, but a bit undeveloped. As a reader, I want to know what's are these plans. Is this some sort of super-destructive weapon? A military vehicle that you're going to build later? Maybe battle plans, or perhaps because of the bad focus I can't see it's a super-important computer chip and not super important plans... The bad: (1) I can't understand what's going on. Write your backstory as if I'm a newcomer who knows nothing about WT and ML. All I'm seeing is "Boom boom pew pew" and "Yay! We got the blur". the odd too-close angles are not so helpful either. Imagine it like you're filming a movie or a TV series. Isn't that a bit too close to their faces? (2) The blurry pictures. Throw them away! The unrelated: I can't criticize the build since I don't see anything. The conclusion: A beginning of an intriguing story, annoying photography, bad narrative.
 I like it 
  July 1, 2011
Nice job, but the first person aspect could be done better. >Eric
 I like it 
  July 1, 2011
I liked the explosion and the crystal on the gun. That crystal was a great way to do the flash of the gun. Very creative.
 I like it 
  July 1, 2011
Reminds me of the James Bond video games. The theme was going through my head the whole time. :)
 I like it 
  July 1, 2011
Well okay. Good way to recycle an old moc. :P
 I made it 
  July 1, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
Yeah, maybe I could take the pictures on the guy's back. What do ya think?
 I made it 
  July 1, 2011
Quoting Kyle Peckham
First of all, I don't need anymore distaste on the pictures. I'll try to fix it. Second, as I said to AA and as it says in the title, this is just a picture TEST for me. I'm not meaning anything by it. It's the capital building from my Galaxy comic. :P
 I made it 
  July 1, 2011
Quoting AA (Noname)
Yeah, I know they're distracting. I'll try to fix that but as I said, I can't really focus on the guy's are and the scene at hand. I meant for this to be a TEST. I didn't mean to put any story in just right now. This is for future reference. Thanks for your input AA.
 I like it 
  July 1, 2011
Well Legofreak, this different photo thing intrigues me. I like the moc, but as others have said, it is blurry and seems hard to follow. There are a couple of things that I would like to point out. 1. Why are they in a base? You probably never saw this, but I stated in the group that "We are somewhere in between a militia and an organized army. We have ranks and squads, but no formal military system. We have no bases, so we are moving all the time. This is so the ML hopefully doesn't find us." 2. I am surprised that you haven't added it to the White Tiger's group. Join it here: http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/17624. Thank you and this scouting mission that you caught us in was completely a fluke. Let the Roar of the White Tiger's be heard!
 I like it 
  July 1, 2011
I love the Black Ops feel of it!
 I like it 
  July 1, 2011
I very interesting idea for taking the pictures :D I love it :D When the first KA-BOOM happened, I thought 2444 would show up XD Anyway, great idea :D May I suggest you take the pictures further back? Not for the fuzziness but so it seems more life like? Sometimes it looked like he was on the floor :P Anyway, great idea :D
 I like it 
  July 1, 2011
I think you should try to take clear pictures, with focus set correctly. Comic is really good, like most of the pictures. Good job!
Legofreak2444 ~
 I like it 
Chaos Master
  June 30, 2011
I wouldn't strain yourself with trying to get the gun in focus, it looks fine as it is. :) awesome job here!
Legofreak2444 ~
 I like it 
Mark Eckerson
  June 30, 2011
For the blurriness try to hold the camera farther away from the set and zooming in on the scene. But AWESOME MOC I love the way it was put together.
 I made it 
  June 30, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
Interesting.
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
Cool,but I am making ML in BIONICLE :D
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
Cool,but I am making ML in BIONICLE :D
 I made it 
  June 30, 2011
Quoting Zam Himmaq
Is that a positive comment? :P
 I made it 
  June 30, 2011
Quoting Freeling ++
I didn't mean to be mean or anything. Glad you understand. ;)
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
Must see more! Nice work with the fuzzy shots too!
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
In reply to your comment. Sorry for my MOCs that you don't like, I am starting now, to build creations to the full extent of detail. I hope you appreciate it. :P
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
nice
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
Sweet. :D
 I made it 
  June 30, 2011
Quoting Mark Eckerson
I was doing that. It's just that the camera can only focus on one thing and I couldn't really focus on the gun. I'll work on that.
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
Intense. =)
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
Ahhh, dynamite! Or, as we call it, nitro glycerin! No, wait, best name ever: dyna-mina-mite....
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
try to work on photo's and dialogue, but I liked the style.
 I like it 
  June 30, 2011
Cool.Dude,you are on a roll today with MOCs!
 
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