Since Commander Pauper and Commander Rutherford already commented about the presentation, the only thing left to say is: After you do these things, take pictures and repost your entry. I'll be there to review it! I appreciate your contribution, Commander Weaver!
Commander Weaver. I agree with Commander Rutherford. A neutral background (white paper if nothing else), clear pictures (check out the Macro setting for close-ups), and good lighting (nothing beats natural light) will improve your presentation immensely. But you have one up on me, you made it to the battle! Kudos for that! Loyal to the Legion!
Commander Weaver. Glad you made it to the field. But man! You have got to do three things! Move off the desk, get more light, and take time to focus! Your MOC presentation will improve dramatically! Build! Post! Review! Attack!