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War on the Rogue Part 4: The First Battle...
After getting the surprising news that the Rogue is attacking that very night, Jordan has split their team in to 3 groups, hoping to stop the Rogue before they can get to the innocent. But can any one of these groups stop Magmagear alone?!?
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(Warning: LONG chapter ahead, so make sure you aren't in a rush to read it. :D)


Kreezon: Sigh... How did we get to go HERE?!? They're not gonna be here after we've searched this area a billion times!!!

Aridike: You never know, Kreezon. Maybe they though this was the most likely place for them to appear....

Callan: I still dont know..... Even if they are here, the closest team to us, which has Cossy, Cheesy, Komart, and Gringat in it, is quite aways away. And could we handle these guys?!?

Kreezon: Looks like we will have to!! Look!!

Aridike: The Rogue!!! So they ARE living somewhere around here!! How haven't we not found them yet!?!?

Davix: It matters not now!! I'll call the other teams, hop to it!!

Toxikeel: Look, Master!!! It is the Toa!! How did they know to come here?!?
Spike: Who cares?!? I'll kill them all easily.
Toxikeel: Wait, you....
Magmagear: Let him go. He'll do nothing, but we don't need him to take care of them anyway. Let's consider him, Wave 1....

Kreezon: I got him, guys, you might as well sit around!!

Spike: Foolish Toa, you all will DIE!!!
Kreezon: Don't make me laugh, shortie.

Spike: Fine...
Kreezon: ARGH!!

Kreezon: Oof!!
Spike: Ha ha ha, typical.

Spike: All is well, Magmagear, I can take care of...

BANG!!!
Spike:....Ungh...

Callan: Apparently, nothing. You can't even take care of yourself!!

Davix: Cossy, we have found them!!! Come ASAP!!!

Toxikeel: Sure enough. Wave 2?
Magmagear: Rogi and your Rahkshi. They won't do much either, but they will raise the hopes of these Toa, only to be crushed right after.

Kreezon: Urgh!!! More guys coming on the way!!! I got that Rahkshi!!!

Kreezon: Eat some Light and Darkness, monster!!!

Ting!!
Rahkshi: Hissss!!

Callan: YOWZA!!!!
Kreezon: SOOOORRRRRRRYY!!!!

Kreezon: Alright, now youre really going down!!!
Aridike: I got this Rogi fella!!!

Aridike: Stay down!!! Well, you really have no choice thanks to the Gravity pushing down on you!!
Rogi: Ouch!!!

Rogi: Uh-oh, Rogi unhappy now....

Aridike: Nighty-night!!

Kreezon: Urgh!! These things are tougher than they look!!

Davix: Not for long!!

Kreezon: Ah, thanks Davix!!!

Kreezon: Won't be going anywhere without a head, will you?!?

Callan: Ow, you really need to work on your aim, Kreezon...
Kreezon: He he heh, sorry bout that.

Kreezon: Uh-oh. Looks like the big guns are coming....

Magmagear: Hmm, I'm surprised they beat them that quickly. My turn now. Stay back, Toxikeel, aid me only when I call you.
Toxikeel: Of course, sir. Pity, I don't have many of those Rahkshi left...

Kreezon: Menace?!? I'd like to see you take me down, shortie!!

Magmagea: Well since you asked so nicely...

THWAK!!!
Kreezon: Uuk!!

Magmagear: All talk and no show, quite disappointing. Might as well dispatch you now...
*Click*

Magmagear: Urgh!! What..?!
Aridike: Gotcha!!

Aridike: Take one move and you can stop breathing... or whatever you do to live.

Magmagear: Sorry...
Aridike: Ouuuuw!!

THWAK!!!
Magmagear: I didn't like that game.

Magmagear: Only two more? Pity, I'm so used to more.
Davix: Come, Callan, let's try combining our powers like Tahu and Lewa once did!

Callan: FIRE!!!
Davix: AIR!!!!

Magmagear: What it..?!?

Davix: It worked!!!
Toxikeel: No!!

Callan: Well done, Davix!!!
CRACK!!!

Davix: Huh?!?

Callan: He's GONE?!? But...

Magmagear: You seem to have misplaced something. Let me help you...

THWAK!!!
Callan: Unnngh.....
Davix: WHOA!!!

Magmagear: Well, now we have a little hero. To bad Im losing my patience now...
Davix: Funny, so am I....

Magmagear: Be finished, Toa!!!

Davix: Air powers, be with me!!!

Magmagear: Wow, you're quite good with your powers. No wonder you two got the upper hand for a moment. Too bad Fire isn't my only element...

Davix: Augh!! Fire, and Protodermis!?!? Unnnngh...

Magmagear: Afraid so. Too bad, you even broke the record for longest Toa to keep me busy. Well, since I am merciful, you all shall die peacefully...
???: Sorry, not gonna happen!

Magmagear: Hmm?!? Oh, we seem to have another problem.
Cossy: Surrender and you will not be harmed!!

Magmagear: Unfortunately, escape seems my only option: Caldana!! Activate Toxikeel and my own teleporters!! We can't be seen running back to the cave!!
Caldana: Activating....

A few minutes later....

Cossy: Well done, Gentlemen, although not defeated, we've shown that even a small amount of our numbers can do damage to them....
Gringat: Need a hand, Davix?

Davix: Why are you so happy, Cossy? We still don't know exactly where there base is and we're no closer to finding it...
Cossy: Actually, that's where you're wrong....

Cossy: We've got the informant who will reveal Magmagear's location to us!!!
Rogi: Ugh... Rogi... captured?
Cossy: Yes, yes you are.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Please comment and rate if you liked it! :D



Comments

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  June 4, 2012
HAHAHA!!! Rogi is so hilarious.
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  November 24, 2011
Rogi's funny :D
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  September 8, 2011
cool! i like the effects. but i thought the brown one was Bogi, not Rogi!
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  August 26, 2011
Thee ending`s pretty cute :)
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  June 30, 2011
Sweet fight sequences!! :D Oh, and for future reference, Aridike's gravity powers are Orange when activated. Temporal Gravity is different than Spatial Gravity. :P
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  June 27, 2011
Awesome chapter!
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  June 27, 2011
Quoting Akara The Great Air and fire doesn't make glass. The air would just either extinguish or make the fire stronger. In the movie, Lewa used his powers to make sand go at the Rahkshi. Then Tahu used fire to turn the sand into glass.
There still is sand here, it's a desert area. So the move still works! ;)
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  June 27, 2011
Air and fire doesn't make glass. The air would just either extinguish or make the fire stronger. In the movie, Lewa used his powers to make sand go at the Rahkshi. Then Tahu used fire to turn the sand into glass.
Caleb Lang
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Chaos Master
  June 26, 2011
great story so far, it's one of MOCpages better stories.
Caleb Lang
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Deltaghost55 formerly known as Matthew B.
  June 26, 2011
rogi reminds me of jar jar from starwars XD
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  June 26, 2011
Rogi, Rogi, Rogi... How I love your personality :D
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  June 26, 2011
great story callan. kreezon looks 10 times better than before! :)
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  June 26, 2011
Quoting The Lego Obsessionist Oh, intense! Some of the pictures are very fuzzy, though, were they like that in your other storylines? I love the action.
Not really, so yeah, I'm sorry about that. Sometimes the pic looks good when I take it, but looks awful when I post it! :/ Thanks a million anyway, everyone! :D
 I like it 
  June 26, 2011
Oh, intense! Some of the pictures are very fuzzy, though, were they like that in your other storylines? I love the action.
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  June 26, 2011
Awesome! This is looking great! Make more soon! :D
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  June 26, 2011
cool story dude. cant wait for the next one.
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  June 26, 2011
dang!!!!! that was amazing!!!!! great job Callan!!! keep it up!
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  June 26, 2011
nice fight! and could you check this out plz: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/277081
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  June 26, 2011
AWESOMESAUCE!!!! sweet fight! cant wait for the next one!
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  June 26, 2011
I've only commented on this chapter because I didn't want to navigate awayu from the link to thie next chapter.
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  June 26, 2011
Awesome battle! Awesome chapter!
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  June 26, 2011
Coool!
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  June 26, 2011
Nice work, I like the effects in this one! You're getting better at that. :)
Caleb Lang
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 25, 2011
I want to fly in!
Caleb Lang
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Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  June 25, 2011
Sweet chapter! :D
Caleb Lang
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Soap M.
  June 25, 2011
Great!!! When is the youtube, video gonna, be up?????
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  June 25, 2011
Awesome job on the effects sweet chapter BTW.
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  June 25, 2011
MAN that was an epic chapter :D Great work Callan! You really nailed Magmagear's personality! Great work! Man this is getting epic :D I can't wait for more :D
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  June 25, 2011
Quoting Shadow Toa Wow great! I am making my own story soon so look at the group for that because you are in it! ,Shadow
Wow, thanks Shadow, and thanks to everybody for your support!! Sorry not everybody got action in this one, but the BIG BATTLE will be coming soon enough! :D
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  June 25, 2011
Wow great! I am making my own story soon so look at the group for that because you are in it! ,Shadow
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  June 25, 2011
Next episode, make Callan or Davix be turned evil! Then, of course, he'll turn good again!
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  June 25, 2011
Rogi looks so sad. :( Anyway awesome chapter. I liked the fire/air combination.
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  June 25, 2011
Poor Rogi and Spike. XD Awayways, that sandstorm+fire combo took me by surrpiese. I wasn't expecting that to happen again.
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  June 25, 2011
I did like it! Great action, but nothing beats mine, JKJK Awesome chapter. I like the longetivity and the action, and ROGI FTW!
 
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