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The Tale of Mihka Nui: Chapter 3
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The third chapter of my first story.
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CHAPTER 3

The toa slowly, but steadily, climbed the volcano.


Nartuk: Isn't wierd how Makuta has not sent any resistance against us?


Jatoh: I don't know about you, but I think that climbing this volcano is enough resistance for me.

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After a while, the toa finally reached the top.

Hukon: So where Derepor?


Wuti: There's Derepor!


Magia: And there's Makuta!


Hukon: Everyone spread out!


The toa started to fight Makuta Kagarix, while Nartuk decided to try to slip behind him using his mask of speed.


Nartuk came up behind Makuta Kagarix and was about to stab him in the back when...


Nartuk was hit from behind by someone else's blade!


Nartuk: Derepor!?!


Makuta Kagarix: Haha! Yes, you fools, Derepor's capture was just a ruse to lead you into a trap.


Derepor: A trap which you have all fallen for!


The rest of the toa desperately fought the Rahkshi and Derepor while Nartuk and Hukon engaged Makuta Kagarix.

Makuta Kagarix: Give up puny toa!


Makuta Kagarix: All your friends have been defeated.


Makuta Kagarix: And they serve me now!


Well that was a somewhat short, but very important, chapter. Yes, those are infected masks. Derepor is a traitor! Anyway, here is an important announcement.

I will not be on MOCpages for two weeks starting tomorrow!

If you don't see any activity from me, that is why.

Comments, ratings, and constructive criticism are appreciated!



Comments

 I like it 
  July 19, 2011
sweet betrayal man this is getting better and better!
Nathan Davis
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  July 12, 2011
I like this story but the chapters could be longer.
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  June 29, 2011
Wow awesome! I like how the volcano is stairs. :P Could you check out my self moc? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/240695 thanks! ,Shadow
Nathan Davis
AA (Noname)
  June 26, 2011
Welcome to the TFOL Private Club! Be active and read the rules: http://www.mocpages.com/group_rules.php?id=13672 (Also, don't join if you're not 13 years old to 18 years old.)
 I like it 
  June 26, 2011
Another awesome chapter!
Nathan Davis
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Cheesy Q
  June 25, 2011
treacherous toa! intensify me Cap'n. nice chapter by the way.
 I like it 
  June 25, 2011
Nice one, I love those infected masks! Very cool!
 I like it 
  June 25, 2011
Every story needs betrayal, I'm glad you put some in :D Great work man! This was probably the best chapter yet! Amazing work ;) Can't wait for more :D Have fun on your break, you will be missed ;)
  June 25, 2011
Awesome chapter! Dude 2 weeks? Why? Is it something important, Vacation, what is it? Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter. This was short, but good.
 I like it 
  June 25, 2011
Great! There could be a bit more plot going into it but this is still epic! :D I was listening to this music while reading your comics: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ZlaUhet0F4 :D
 I like it 
  June 25, 2011
Epic betrayal man, loved this
 I like it 
  June 25, 2011
Uh oh!! Not good for Hukon and Nartuk!!
 I made it 
  June 25, 2011
Quoting Cheesy Q treacherous toa! intensify me Cap'n. nice chapter by the way.
Thanks! :)
 
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