Last time we were with our Heroís they found many new friendís who had escaped from Teridaxís body the same way Takanuva and the others had. After everyone returned to Malumís cave, Cossy and Fortux sent off on a quest to find Makutaís hideout which they felt was located in the White Quarts Mountains. On their way to the believed location of the hideout, Cossy and Fortux were attacked! When Cossy awoke Fortux was gone! Cossy is now on his way home, but first, an Agori is trying to find life on Bara Magna after he survived Makutaís powerful attack...
Agori: *whistling*... Man Iím hungry! Letís see what Iíve got...
(The Agori places his supplies on the ground and looks though them for some food)
Agori: Thornax, Thornax AH! GRUBS!
(The Agori goes to grab one of the grubs when...)
Sand Stalker: I wouldnít do that if I were you!
*Sand Stalker puts his wrist knife close to the Agoriís face so it canít move*
Sand Stalker: Quite struggling!
Nitro: What are you doing? I told you we must keep moving! No stopping!
Sand Stalker: Iím sorry sir, but this Agori had some supplies I figured we could... borrow!
*Nitro bends over to get a better look at the Agoriís supplies*
Nitro: Hmmm... I suppose these could be helpful... FINE, but you can carry them!
Sand Stalker: Fine...
*Nitro throws Sand Stalker the supplies*
Sand Stalker: What of the Agori?
Nitro: PFFT! I donít care! Now letís leave!
*Sand Stalker looks down at the Agori*
Sand Stalker: Sure...
(Nitro starts to walk off while Sand Stalker stays behind looking at the Agori)
*Sand Stalker flips the Agori over a second time and is about to use the tip of his axe to stab him*
Sand Stalker: Iíll destroy you! Like Iíll destroy ALL who...
Nitro: WHAT ARE YOU DOING!
Sand Stalker: You said!? ...
Nitro: When I said I donít care I didnít mean kill him! I meant leave him! He is no threat to us!
Sand Stalker: Iím sorry sir, weíll leave now!
Nitro: Exactly! Come on!
(Sand Stalker leaves with Nitro, he looks back at the Agori who has been badly hurt)
(The Agori lays there unconscious but someone finds him)
Solunus: My word!
Solunus: *Gasp* He is hurt badly! GUYS! Get over here! We need to help this Agori NOW!
Cossy: *Sigh* Curse this Desert! Iíve been walking home this whole time, itís been days! *sigh* Iíll just take a rest!
*Cossy lays down*
Cossy: Ah nice and comfy... Listen to me, Iím talking to myself! Deserts making me crazy!
*Cossy looks off into the distance*
Cossy: What the!? Whatís that?
Cossy: Oh great, whatever took Fortux is on its way back! ... Wait...
*Cossy tries to work out what it is*
Cossy: HEY! My rescues here!
Cossy; Hey guys!
Ackar: Cossy? Where have you been? Youíve been gone for days!
Cossy: Yeah I know
Ackar: Wait whereís Fortux?
*Cossy gets up*
Cossy: Well, something attacked us and took him, ever since then Iíve been walking home!
Ackar: So you didnít find Makutaís Lair?
Cossy: Nope, figured I should get home ASAP! Didnít want what took Fortux to take me!
Ackar: So youíve been walking home since?
Ackar: Why didnít use just use your mask and fly home?
*Cossy says nothing and looks off into the distance in deep thought*
Ackar: Cossy... Did you forget your own mask power?
*Cossy clenches his fist in anger*
Cossy: I forgot my own mask power
Cossy: How do I forget that!
*Cossy walks back, contemplating how on Bara Magna he forgot his mask power!*
Ackar: HAHA well if I had one I probably would to!
Cossy: This isnít something you forget Ackar! Man this desert made me crazy...
Ackar: Come on Mata Nui, letís go!
*The three set off*
Cossy: Hey where are we going?
Ackar: Malumís cave, were else would we be going!?
Cossy: Shouldnít we go looking for Fortux? Maybe it was just a Rahi that took him?
Ackar: Thatís a good plan!
Mata Nui: Which direction do I need to go?
Cossy: Um... Oh what do you know, where going the right way, HA
Ackar: Hopefully this works and we arenít walking into a trap!
Cossy: ... agreed...
(They drive to the location Fortux was last seen)
Cossy: Ok guys weíre here!
*Mata Nui stops the Thornatus*
Ackar: So whatís the plan Cossy?
Cossy: Um... Just take a look around I guess! We canít do too much; we donít wanna end up like Fortux!
Ackar: Agreed, I think the best thing to do is split up, whatever attacked Fortux canít take us all out at once if we are split up!
Mata Nui: Good idea Ackar, I will stay here and guard the Thornatus!
Cossy: Great idea, ok Ackar you go that way, Iíll go this way and Mata Nui you stay here!
Ackar and Mata Nui: Will do!
(Ackar and Cossy go different ways while Mata Nui gets out of the Thornatus to guard it from the turret)
(On his way over to the turret he sees something)
Mata Nui: Hmm...
(Mata Nui walks over and bends down to get a closer look)
Mata Nui: What could this be?
*He picks up the strange tablet*
*Mata Nui looks at every corner of the object, intrigued by its beauty*
Mata Nui: What a magnificent object!
Mata Nui: MY WORD!
(The tablet starts to glow and beams of light shoot out of it!)
*Mata Nui drops the tablet in shock of what has just happened*
(The glowing dies down and suddenly beams of orange light start to flow out)
*All of Mata Nui attention is fixated on the tablet*
(The tablet stops glowing for a few seconds, then oranges dots begin to come out of it and a strange being starts to form)
*Mata Nui jumps back and readyís his shield*
Mata Nui: WHO ARE YOU!
*The orange glowing around the being stops and it begins to speak*
Aridike: Relax Mata Nui! Iím not here to hurt you! I am Aridike, the 28th Baron, I wish you no harm, I only want to give you an important message!
(Mata Nui feels calmer after Aridikeís introduction)
Mata Nui: Iím sorry for my abruptness Aridike...
(Aridike interrupts Mata Nui)
Aridike: No need for apologies Mata Nui! I Understand! Now I donít want to waste too much time, I need to tell you an important message sent to you from the Great Beings themselves!
Mata Nui: The Great beings?!
Aridike: Yes Mata Nui, I am a messenger of the Great Beings, I have travelled here from the future, were the universe is shrouded with evil!
Mata Nui: Evil?
Aridike: Yes Makutaís evil! From the time period I am from, Teridax has challenged the Great Beings for control of the Universe! And he...
Mata Nui: He?
Aridike: *Sigh* He succeeded!
Mata Nui: No!...
Aridike: Iím afraid so Mata Nui! Makuta used six pieces of armour against the Great Beings and destroyed them all! I was watching from afar when it happened and then travelled to this time period to warn you!
*Aridike bends over to pick up the Golden Tablet*
Aridike: This was one of the six pieces he used against them! The other 4 are scattered across Bara Magna, the fifth one you have!
Mata Nui: The Golden Hau?
Aridike: You must find the rest of the pieces to this set of armour Mata Nui! You must collect them all and create the Golden armour! And you MUST find it before Makuta does! If you donít not only will it be the end of The Great Beings! Itíll be the end of you!
Mata Nui: So he used it against me as well?
Aridike: Yes, it was how he killed you! Now before I return to my correct period in time, I must let you know, that each piece of armour has the power over one element and speacial ability! The Golden Hau has the power over Fire, and the ability over shielding, that would be how you all survived Makutaís attack!
*Aridike hands the tablet to Mata Nui*
Aridike: And this Golden shield has the power of knowledge! Hence why I am here, it also has the power over rock. Keep it safe and find the others as soon as you can Mata Nui!
Mata Nui: Thank you for this Aridike! You have been a great help!
Aridike: Iím just glad I could stop Teridax from destroying the beautiful universe we should have! Now, I must return to my original time period...
*Aridike presses some buttons on his wrist computer*
*Aridike presses one more*
(Aridike starts to slowly break down as he is being transported back to his own time period)
Aridike: Remember everything Iíve said Mata Nui! Good Luck!
(Aridike is gone now and has returned to his original time period)
Mata Nui: Goodbye friend, thank you...
*Ackar and Cossy walk over*
Cossy: We didnít find anything, you?
Mata Nui: No, but I learnt something very important from a new friend
Ackar: And whatís that?
Mata Nui: Our Destiny...
(... Someone has been watching Mata Nui and Aridikeís conversation)
A.D: Hmmm... Golden Armour... Makuta must know of this...
TO BE CONTINUED!
WOOT! Chapter 8 is finally up :D Iím so sorry about the wait! I promise you that once exams are over there will be a lot more chapters :D And the good news keeps coming :D I will have my Secret Project up as my next post (Not to sure about a date just yet, but itíll be soon :D) Then after that Turbine will kick of my Self MOC wave and Dweller (Or Shadow Stealer not sure yet :P) Will be my next Dark Hunter :D Ok Thatís all for now!
Oh and one last thing, I'm trying to put less text under each picture so this is easier and more fun to read :D You likely?
Thanks for viewing!
Donít forget to rate and comment!
Till next time ;)
Cossy out :D
Hey, I just had a thought about the Great Beings... If the Great Beings created the Bionicle universe... and Bionicles are designed and built by Lego... I think that means the Great Beings are Lego employees! Anyone else ever notice that? :-D
OMG XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD THANK YOU! *dances around room for an hour or two* Ok all done... Wait I lied *dances some more* Ok NOW I'm done *resists urge to dance some more* Now for some intensive minecraft to calm me down! ~Liam
hey, if its not to much to ask, well, could you consider getting a Youtube account? i mean, It would be Awesome if you had a Youtube channel, and i could show you how to do stuff, eg; Making animations, and eating Cheesy Q (wait, what?) and all that epicness! you could even go on my WOWZA list! please consider it.
Awsome. Just awsome. It's Questioning about cossy being in Bara magna, but I probobly haven't seen much of the rest. Nice job on it, it must have taken hours to make this one chapter. By the way, could you check out this: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/276670
Thanks everyone! Yeah Lone Wolf, pretty much what Mos said, we are very different to America, school wise. HAHA thanks Mos, That sounds good, use that shoulder idea :D Too bad you can't buy me anything :P Thanks ;) Cheers Raudr ;) Thanks Callan ;) It's cool, I'm just happy you commented :D To be honest, I like your comic more than mine :P Thanks Deus, the Great Being's are the Bionicle Gods, but I guess they could be classed as us :P And thanks Kane, thanks everyone ;)
our school year is a year and have 4 terms and we usually get 2 weeks off every 10 or ll weeks and get a 7 week holiday during christmas time and back to school around feburary our school term is almost over and we have term 3 in the next two to three weeks
i wish i could pick up something for you ben lol i swear i can find almost anything in china but i might use the second rotor head for shoulder Armour lets face it there is no use for that helmet for a bionicle head
Thanks everyone! HAHA thanks Galaxus, it works well as a desert doesn't it :D Thanks Mos :D Can't wait for your new stuff :D Will do Greg :D Thanks Owl :D And it was A.D that stole Fortux, not a Rahi :P Still thanks for the comment Owl ;) Thanks Jake, good idea! But most of them died out when Makuta arrived on Bara Magna (Read REIGN OF TERROR, if you haven't, and that'll make more sense) But that's a great idea :D I might do that :D Thanks again guys ;)
I like it
COMMANDER JAKE *
June 22, 2011
This a one awesome story!! Just a suggestion: Wouldnt it be appropriate if you put a Zesk in the desert part? Just a thought. Nice job anyway!
sorry for being really idol but im now happy to say i have found some lego in china no 3.0's yet ): but i did get a hero factory dvd with every episode including ordeal of fire for free but i will post pics hopefully and sorry ben for leaving a comment like this but cant wait for some more stories
Cheers everyone :D Glad it did that to you Mr. Black's Market :D Thanks Popcorn ;) glad you liked it :D Oh and thanks for the luck on my exams ;) Thanks Cody :D Glad you liked that part :P Cheers Jan :D I'm glad you think that works well for the desert :D HAHA thanks Owen :P Yeah Cossy can be rather dull sometimes :P I'm not sure yet S.T.S, Just be patient please ;) Thanks Greg :D I'll check them all out :D Glad you liked it Legobob :D Not sure just yet Legofreak, but very soon :D Probably the next Self MOC to be in it :D Thanks Wertman :D I'm glad you like my photography skills :3 Nah I'd never do that Michel :P Thanks for the comment ;) You'll be seeing more real soon Wolf :D I'll check them out Zam :D Thanks A.D, You have an important role actually :D It's cool Red lego, Thanks ;) It's not Master N, It's just the Golden Armour :P Will do Biomanic :D And thanks again everyone else ;)
I like it
June 21, 2011
awesome new chapter. lol he forgot his mask power LOL
I like it
June 21, 2011
the chapter was great, and the main picture really got me interested.
I like it
June 21, 2011
I like it
June 21, 2011
Cossy, I have hardly any comments, on my Self-MOC, and you have like, 300 some... I don't know what to do about it. Please help me.
I like it
A.D Lord of Darkness
June 21, 2011
I love the comic oh.... yesh..... i have a cameo... XD
Yay, im glad your SECRET (*cough, 200 and 300 likes present *cough cough*) will be up soon and i should be uploading lariska,night crawler, conjurer, vezok revamp,cossy,callan and davix and my first ever bio-bike soon.
First, love the beginning, the desert is a perfect setting. Also, Cossy going crazy, gotta love that. Please don't tell me that tablet is the same in my storyline, and let's just hope it just looks like it. In your story, mata nui is awake and happening, in mine, he's tired in his mask, trying to sleep LOL. OK GOOD IT'S NOT my TABLET, YAY! A.D. OMG! THIS IS COOL!
Great work, bro!!!!! I really like how the whole story is coming. It's getting pretty intense. Sand Stalker ROCKS!!!!! I can't wait till you get around to making Zekon. He (Zekon) is like a wanna-be Sand Stalker. I hope you do good on your exams, buddy. Ok I'll stop being so random with this comment. Great work, old buddy old pal old friend (How It Should Have Ended (Spiderman) reference)!!!!!
pure epicness! I feel this is how Lego should have ended Bionicle, with a BANG! very nice style in presentation and great work on the figures, it brought back somany memories seeing all those ORIGINAL Bionicle parts, well done
Thanks everyone! Glad you liked that part Nathan ;) Thanks :D And Soap, I see you've added it to heaps of groups, so that's a good thing, the best thing to now is comment like crazy (Not spamming) on heaps of peoples MOC's that should get their attention and they'll look at your stuff :D Also be patient, you'll get more over time, just do those things I said and it'll all be all work out :D Cheers Ben :D Glad you liked it :D Um I'll have him return at the end and thank Mata Nu... Woops spoiling everything :P Thanks again guys :D