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Ripping Truths: Part 6
Part 6 of my comic. Mostly fighting. Enjoy!
About this creation
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5




Last time, Nexus was betrayed by Raji, who is really a Makuta, Catok appeared.


At the Toa Fortress.


Nexus: ...C-Catok? Is that really y-you?
Catok: Yes Nexus, it's me.

Catok: Bloody traitor!

*Whop!*
Nexus: Ungh!

Catok: I hope that hurt you as much as it satisfied me.

Raji: Hehe, Catok, I know you want to enjoy this, but we have other things to tend to. Do with him whatever you want.
Catok: Yes, master.


Raji: Boys...
Butcher: Hehe!

Butcher: Hehe, I could do this for a living, oh wait, I do. Hehe!


*Whoosh!*
Butcher: ROOAAARRRR!!!

Kennos: Hmph! Let's fix that shall we?

Guard: Hey!
*BLAM!*
*TWANG!*

Brakix: Are you okay Chrisix?
Chrisix: What? Brakix! Look out!


Catok: Roaarr!!
Brakix: Ack!

Raji: Watch out behind you!
*Slice!*
Guard: Ouch!

Raji: Fools! Get him! No, there--


*Slash!*
Raji: Ha!

Butcher: Roaarr!!

Kennos: Aaaa!
*BLAM!*
Sitix: Agh!

Sitix: Ah! My eye!


*Clank!*

*Screeeechh!*

*Bang!*
Butcher: Raaa!!
Kennos: Whooff!

Cossy: Yaaa!!
*Slice!*
ROOOAAARRRR!!

Cossy: Whew! Nexus!

Cossy: Nexus! You okay?

Nexus: Wha? Oh- Catok!

To be continued...

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Comments

  June 21, 2011
meh, mine will be better... I hope. I'm just joking with you, this is great. I love the story, but it's strange. This chapter was only good for the action. (my opinion)
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  June 20, 2011
epic!!!!! again!
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  June 19, 2011
Very nice, lots of action going on here!
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  June 19, 2011
Nice bionicles but better backrounds please... perhaps outside?
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  June 19, 2011
Quoting Bob the almighty
Thanks! Who was this friend?
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  June 19, 2011
Very cool guys, but you probably could have used a better background though.
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  June 19, 2011
Wow, lots of fighting. My friend told me to check you out and so I did. Your bionicle building skills are great!
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  June 19, 2011
Wow awesome! I liked all the fighting in this part! ,Shadow
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  June 19, 2011
Quoting Raviel ,The Mocist
Yeah, I wish I had his mask for Catok. :D
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  June 19, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
Oh...so I won't be in chapter 8? Which chapter will I be in?
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  June 19, 2011
Quoting COMMANDER JAKE *
Probably today or tomorrow. ;)
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  June 19, 2011
Nice!Until now,I noticed that Catok looks like Witch Doctor.:P
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  June 19, 2011
whoa... this is going WOWZAly!
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  June 19, 2011
Nice! Great work on Catok's legs.
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  June 19, 2011
Wait ingore the last part about you being in Chapter 8, I got confused with which chapter I was doing :S Sorry about that :P
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 18, 2011
epic cant wait!
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Chaos Master
  June 18, 2011
NNNOOO!!! BUTCHER! oh well, he was evil :P
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S. :D
  June 18, 2011
Awesome, love all the action, very good keep them coming >:D
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COMMANDER JAKE *
  June 18, 2011
Claps hands! Woot! Excellent job!! The story is getting better and better!
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COMMANDER JAKE *
  June 18, 2011
When do you think the next episode will be out?
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Soap M.
  June 18, 2011
Nice one! Excelelnt work! :D
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  June 18, 2011
HEHE I killed Butcher :D Anyway great chapter :D I'm glad you've given me such a great roll in this :D Anyway, awesome work so far :D This is brilliant (Oh by the way, revamped 2444 will be in Chapter 8 which will be up today, but don't tell anyone!) Great work ;)
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  June 18, 2011
Nice! Never saw that coming!
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting NOBLE THREE
Thanks. Rest will be up tomorrow or Monday.
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  June 18, 2011
awesomesause! i can only dream that i could be in this.And keep em coming OK!
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
Huh. :P Okay.
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  June 18, 2011
Um.....both?
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
Is that uh, bragging or a recommendation? :P Can't wait to see the new Jordan! :D
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  June 18, 2011
1.I got a comment from Clockwork Tempest (but I asked XD):P 2.I am almost done with Jordan,I just need to finish up on Turbine.
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting Rahkshi Party
LOL! That's very...something. XP
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Thanks Callan. :D
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting Michael T.
I guess I can. :)
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting lone wolf
Yeah, he died. :(
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
Guessing...what?
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  June 18, 2011
Ooooh!!! Another great episode!! Can't wait for the finale!!!
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  June 18, 2011
This is really great! If you have time, could you check out my comic, The Untold Story?
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  June 18, 2011
Catok looks awesome and evil. I like all the action in this chapter.
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  June 18, 2011
awesome! did butcher die? i liked him, despite how evil he was....
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  June 18, 2011
Epic!And guess what?
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  June 18, 2011
Fantastic.
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting ware wolf
Thanks!
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  June 18, 2011
great chapter! i like all the fighting! ;) keep it up! :D
 
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