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The Tale of Mihka Nui: Chapter 2
Chapter 2 of my first story.
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CHAPTER 2

The object slammed into Nartuk, knocking him to the ground.


The object, which was actually a toa, got up.

???: That did not hurt as bad as I thought it would.


Nartuk: That would be because you landed on me.

???: Oh. I'm very sorry about that. Are you okay?


Nartuk: I'm fine. My name is Nartuk. What's yours?

???: I am Hukon, Archon of Gringat, Lord of Air.

Nartuk: What's an Archon, and who is Gringat?


Hukon: Gringat is the Lord of Air, so he maintains balance of his element. I am his helper, and was just on my way back from a mission, when my jetpack malfunctioned and I had to make a quick landing here.

Nartuk: I'll take you to Turaga Gonui and the rest of the toa.

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Hukon: So, like I told Nartuk, I am Hukon the Archon of Gringat, and My jetpack malfunctioned.


Turaga Gonui: Hmm...Yes. I will get some of the matoran to fix your jetpack, but you need to lead a mission to rescue our leader, Derepor.


Jatoh: What!?! We don't even know him! Besides, Magia is going to lead the mission.


Turaga Gonui: Jatoh, meet Hukon. See, now you know him. Trust me, He needs to lead this mission. You need to leave for Makuta's lair now.

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The toa were on their way to Makuta's lair, but there was still complaining about Turaga Gonui's choice.

Jatoh: What does that crazy old turaga know? Sure, pick someone we just met. That'll work. Why don't we just make that rock the leader. No, that twig should be leader.


Jatoh: Oh, I know. We can make that cloud the leader. All hail the mighty cloud!


Magia: Shut up, Jatoh.


Nartuk: We are almost at the foot of the volcano. Makuta's lair is on top.

Hukon: Everyone get ready.


Bopaku: Please tell me we don't have to climb that...


Well, there's chapter 2. It was a bit short, but I tried to add some humor. I'm really bad at that. Yes, the side of the volcano is my stairs. :P

Comments, ratings, and constructive criticism are appreciated!



Comments

 I like it 
  July 19, 2011
yay falling strangers!!!!
 I like it 
  June 25, 2011
Epic! :D
  June 22, 2011
Fun fact: Jatoh means fall in indonesian
 I like it 
  June 22, 2011
I like how the background is white, get to use some imagination LOL. Great moc, and this >:<D is either fishbones or a pineaple smily i just made LOL. cool chapter, want more!
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
Another great episode! Nice use of your stairs under a sheet to add some texture!
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
Another great chapter!
 I like it 
  June 18, 2011
Yet another brilliant chapter! Great work on this one! I feel this is going to be very short though, still that's not a bad thing :D Can't wait for more :)
 I made it 
  June 18, 2011
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant To be completely canon I think Hukon would probably quote some sort of religious dogma after that cloud-comment. And knowing Gringat, he'd be watching via that cloud, having deliberately rigged Hukon's jetpack to make him fall here where he is needed.
Haha. Yeah. Thanks for the comment by the way.
 I like it 
  June 18, 2011
To be completely canon I think Hukon would probably quote some sort of religious dogma after that cloud-comment. And knowing Gringat, he'd be watching via that cloud, having deliberately rigged Hukon's jetpack to make him fall here where he is needed.
 I like it 
  June 18, 2011
Ooh!!! Good work, so now they have 5 again. :D
 
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