Chapter 2 of my first story.
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CHAPTER 2
The object slammed into Nartuk, knocking him to the ground.
The object, which was actually a toa, got up.
???: That did not hurt as bad as I thought it would.
Nartuk: That would be because you landed on me.
???: Oh. I'm very sorry about that. Are you okay?
Nartuk: I'm fine. My name is Nartuk. What's yours?
???: I am Hukon, Archon of Gringat, Lord of Air.
Nartuk: What's an Archon, and who is Gringat?
Hukon: Gringat is the Lord of Air, so he maintains balance of his element. I am his helper, and was just on my way back from a mission, when my jetpack malfunctioned and I had to make a quick landing here.
Nartuk: I'll take you to Turaga Gonui and the rest of the toa.
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Hukon: So, like I told Nartuk, I am Hukon the Archon of Gringat, and My jetpack malfunctioned.
Turaga Gonui: Hmm...Yes. I will get some of the matoran to fix your jetpack, but you need to lead a mission to rescue our leader, Derepor.
Jatoh: What!?! We don't even know him! Besides, Magia is going to lead the mission.
Turaga Gonui: Jatoh, meet Hukon. See, now you know him. Trust me, He needs to lead this mission. You need to leave for Makuta's lair now.
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The toa were on their way to Makuta's lair, but there was still complaining about Turaga Gonui's choice.
Jatoh: What does that crazy old turaga know? Sure, pick someone we just met. That'll work. Why don't we just make that rock the leader. No, that twig should be leader.
Jatoh: Oh, I know. We can make that cloud the leader. All hail the mighty cloud!
Magia: Shut up, Jatoh.
Nartuk: We are almost at the foot of the volcano. Makuta's lair is on top.
Hukon: Everyone get ready.
Bopaku: Please tell me we don't have to climb that...
Well, there's chapter 2. It was a bit short, but I tried to add some humor. I'm really bad at that. Yes, the side of the volcano is my stairs. :P
Comments, ratings, and constructive criticism are appreciated!
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July 19, 2011 |
yay falling strangers!!!! |
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June 25, 2011 |
Epic! :D |
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Fun fact: Jatoh means fall in indonesian |
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June 22, 2011 |
I like how the background is white, get to use some imagination LOL. Great moc, and this >:<D is either fishbones or a pineaple smily i just made LOL. cool chapter, want more! |
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June 20, 2011 |
Another great episode! Nice use of your stairs under a sheet to add some texture! |
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June 19, 2011 |
Another great chapter! |
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June 18, 2011 |
Yet another brilliant chapter! Great work on this one! I feel this is going to be very short though, still that's not a bad thing :D Can't wait for more :) |
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I made it |
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June 18, 2011 |
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant
To be completely canon I think Hukon would probably quote some sort of religious dogma after that cloud-comment. And knowing Gringat, he'd be watching via that cloud, having deliberately rigged Hukon's jetpack to make him fall here where he is needed.
Haha. Yeah. Thanks for the comment by the way. |
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June 18, 2011 |
To be completely canon I think Hukon would probably quote some sort of religious dogma after that cloud-comment. And knowing Gringat, he'd be watching via that cloud, having deliberately rigged Hukon's jetpack to make him fall here where he is needed. |
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June 18, 2011 |
Ooh!!! Good work, so now they have 5 again. :D |
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