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War on the Rogue Part 1: Gathering friends...
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Three OoMN members have come to Callan and Davix to tell them that they need help gathering a team of heroes to help stop an evil group of Dark Hunters called the Rogue. But will everybody be willing to help?!?
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Jordan, Cossy, and Kustolf have spent the last few hours telling Callan and Davix about how Helad was an associate of the OoMN and how he kept them up to date on their quest for Bara Magna. They've also told the brothers about their new brother Jojo and how he is from an alternate universe where Callan and Davix are both dead. Finally, Jordan has told them that they need their help against the Rogue, which is now a bigger threat than ever thanks to the evil Magmagear.

Davix: We would love to help, but do not you think we should search for those stones?!?

Jordan: Actually, I don't think that's a big problem. Helad sent us a few messages before he died and explained that each stone has a tracking device on it that is connected to Korr. Those stones are probably covered in grass after Mata Nui brought the plant life up and will be hard to find without Korr.

Jojo: Hi brudder....
Callan: I can't decide whether this kid is a curse or a blessing...

Jordan: We do need to get more help, though. Do you know Gringat well?
Davix: Very well! I'm sure he would not mind.....
Jordan: I am not quite as sure about that.....

Cossy: While you get him, I will get that "package" from Tahu in case anything goes wrong.
Jordan: Ah, good!!

Davix: Callan, see if Wasserin can take care of Jojo and maybe see if Kreezon can help us out.
Callan: Yes, master!
Kustolf: I'll just stay here.... haven't had a good rest in a while.

And so the new friends split up to get some help from their friends. Except Kustolf.

Davix: What did you mean when you said he wouldn't help back then?!?
Jordan: Uh.... let's just say we started off on the wrong foot when we met.
Davix: You knew him?!?

Davix: Hello Gringat!! How are you?

Gringat: Good to see you, Davix. I can't say the same for your company. What do you want now, Jordan?!? Going to transport me somewhere else, now? Eh?

Jordan: I'm sorry we can't take you back, but Olmaks are hard to create perfectly and ours still has flaws. Especially since we're trying to get this one to let you choose your destination! When we get it working, I promise I'll send you back to your dimension.

Gringat: Of course you will.....
Jordan: I SAVED your LIFE!!!

Gringat: And for WHAT?!? Living day to day wondering what has become of my friends and my children?!? Some life!!

Gringat: I am sorry, Davix, but I'm not letting this guy try and pull me into his "Order" again.

Davix: From what I heard, I understand your grief... But if you hadn't come here, I myself would not have the experience for true battle, and I certainly would not have the strength to lead a Toa team. We are dealing with a serious threat here, and I will not feel half as comfortable doing this if you are not with me.

Gringat *Sighs* Alright. I will help you this once. But you better not try roping me into the OoMN again, I am tired of fighting and I do not want this to become my life again...

An hour later.....

Davix: Hey guys!! Gringat was kind enough to join us!!!
Gringat: Humph...

Cossy: Well I ran into Commander Cheesy Q after I got the package, and he said he'd join us!!

Callan: It took some convincing to get Wasserin to take care of Jojo, but Kreezon was happy to join us!!!

Kustolf: And I got a good nap.

Jordan: Perfect!! There's only one person we need to get now.....

Davix: And who is that?!?

Jordan: Ardike, the 230th Baron.

TO BE CONTINUED.....

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  September 7, 2011
cool! but are all these self mocs asosiated with the OoMN?
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  June 24, 2011
awesome story bro.
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  June 19, 2011
Awesome! You have some of the best self MOCS I know in there, Cossy, Jordan, snd Cheesy Q! If you have time, could you check out my comic, The Untold Story?
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  June 18, 2011
awesome! but were's morzorka?!? ha ha jokes great story so far =D
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  June 18, 2011
Ooooh! Ardike!
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  June 18, 2011
Yeah guys, listen to Kenaz, I relate to Callan, I currently have like 34 Self MOC request, it gets really annoying and makes you very mad! So don't be offended by him, just let him be for a bit! Even you couldn't make that many Self MOCs! Again great work Callan ;) This is just too amazing!
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  June 17, 2011
Haha that really made me laugh. Funny thing is i really could use a nap right about now. Can't wait for more.
Caleb Lang
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 16, 2011
man not me... OBLIVIOUS! XD but can i come if u need me?
Caleb Lang
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Chaos Master
  June 16, 2011
"Jojo: Hi brudder.... Callan: I can't decide whether this kid is a curse or a blessing..." LOL XD it took me a while to get to reading the rest of it, i was laughing so hard! greats story,i can't wait for the next one!
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  June 16, 2011
OH!Ok :)
  June 16, 2011
You said this little bit before but you said "Don't feel sad about Destrin,S.T.S,I am gonna take apart some MOCs,I will make Solonus,but after my series.And he might guest star in the next series",so I am a little confused.
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  June 16, 2011
Quoting S.T.S . You said this little bit before but you said " am gonna take apart some MOCs,I will make Solonus,but after my series.And he might guest star in the next series",so I am a little confused.
Hmm, I guess that was confusing. Anywhoo, I was saying some guys are going to die to you, then I shifted the conversation towards Cody and told him I'm making Solunus. I MAY bring back Destrin in the future, but for now, I can't yet. :/
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  June 16, 2011
Quoting Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night I agree with Callan wholeheartedly. He gets way too many self-MOC requests, so it's got to be annoying after a while. I think it's best just to leave him be for now.
Thanks pal. :D BTW, I still have little Kenaz around. :D And I'm sorry, S.T.S, I don't understand what you're saying.
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  June 16, 2011
Destrin will guest star or will Solunus?
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  June 16, 2011
I agree with Callan wholeheartedly. He gets way too many self-MOC requests, so it's got to be annoying after a while. I think it's best just to leave him be for now.
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  June 16, 2011
Quoting The PURE *___* @Callanlof:that sounded a bit rude... :( ("Yeah,i don't think so")
Sorry, but I get about a million requests each day, so I get a little annoyed by even little implications of it. Sorry if I offended you. And at Rahkshi Party, I get so many requests lately that I'm afraid I'm only sticking to making my closest pal's self mocs. Sorry.
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  June 16, 2011
Perhaps you need a great being? I would like it if you could perhaps build my self moc and stick him in the comic? I would build your second or first self moc if you did :-)
  June 16, 2011
@Callanlof:that sounded a bit rude... :( ("Yeah,i don't think so")
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  June 16, 2011
All right, I'm on Callan's to-build list! I may also include Callan in my Ghetta Nui comic, although he will more than likely be evil. >:]
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  June 16, 2011
Very funny! I can't wait until the next one.
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  June 16, 2011
Fanatastic!!! Great chapter I love how in the title picture jojo appears to be punching callan in the face :3
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  June 16, 2011
Quoting The PURE *___* and they need Pure (my self-moc) seriosly totally you should add Pure into this series.
Yeah, I don't think so. Thanks so much everybody, and don't feel bad about Destrin, S.T.S, I'm going to kill off a few guys in this series. I DO plan on making Solunus, Cody, but after this series. He MAY guest star in the one after that.
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  June 16, 2011
"Jojo: Hi brudder....Callan: I can't decide whether this kid is a curse or a blessing..." HAHA! XD Brilliant chapter Callan! I can't believe just how epic it's getting! Can't wait for more :D
  June 16, 2011
and they need Pure (my self-moc) seriosly totally you should add Pure into this series.
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  June 16, 2011
good story and there is a few things i have to tell you firstly they could call callan cal for short XD and lastly why Davix and Jordan didn't laugh about Gringat's odd socks?
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  June 16, 2011
Cool chapter. Can't wait for more!
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  June 16, 2011
I need to get more popular.... (Maybe then people will make Akara...)
Caleb Lang
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Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  June 15, 2011
Nice. My storyline is slightly similar to yours(remember, a coincidience, not copying) where there will be some self-MOCs. I really want to end Weapons of War so I can start my new one. Good thing I made it up to 15 episodes(spoiler!).
Caleb Lang
Cheesy Q
  June 15, 2011
It was a nice chapter. I'm glad I came in. Keep it up. :)
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  June 15, 2011
Nice work! This is going to be a pretty epic comic! Too bad you haven't made Solunus, he'd be a good addition to that team, you need some cold, hard muscle. :)
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  June 15, 2011
Sch-weet! :D :D I'm loving this (no, not McDonalds). :P Keep it coming bro. :D
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  June 15, 2011
Cool! This is a good chapter. Keep it up!
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  June 15, 2011
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  June 15, 2011
wow!!!!! epicness overload!!!!!
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  June 15, 2011
interesting...
  June 15, 2011
Cool chapter, so callan, i really wanna know when you are gonna put your entry up in the contest.
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  June 15, 2011
interesting. I like how this makes more sense than my story (recruiting others self mocs) And you captered the character's personalities perfectly. Loved the scene of gringat meditating. I dare you to make Jojo call him Grinny, or something like that lol:P Great chapter,i like this story more than my own! Off to go study, 3 more exams then it's SUMMER!
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  June 15, 2011
Interesting.....will Destrin be spoken of considering he was killed?And Cheesy was the eye witness of his crumpled body.
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  June 15, 2011
interesting :) would u mind making cyrax :)
 
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