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War on the Rogue Part 0: Prologue
Previously three OoMN members discussed their new mission to gather some friends on the surface of Spherus Magna to help them take down an evil organization called the Rogue. Enjoy the next part!
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The day after Korr's tale....
Jordan: The day has come. Agent Luja has already set up a teleportation device near Callan and Davix, so we are headed to speak to them first.
Kustolf: Then let's hurry it up. I want to finish this mission as soon as possible....

???:Wait!! WAIT!!!
Cossy: Huh?!? Who's that?!?

Jojo: Wait!!
Cossy: Oh, it's Jojo. Sorry, little one, but we aren't babysitting you today.

Jordan: Cossy speaks the truth, Jojo. So what do you need, youngster?!?

Jojo: I want to see brudders! Brudders!!
Cossy: Brothers?!? Hey, he's Callan and Davix's brother in that alternate universe Jordan saved him from! I guess he wants to come and see them!!

Kustolf: I don't think so. That kid isn't fit for this mission, and from what we've heard he'll be capable of, we don't want him to get himself killed.
Jordan: Yes, indeed...

Cossy: But he doesn't have to be a part of the mission! Maybe we could leave him to Callan and Davix after this mission is over! For the mean time, he could see all of the other Toa and Matoran who live here.
Jordan: Hey, that sounds good. I have been appointed over him, so I'll let him come.

Jordan: Alright, little Jojo, Uncle Jordan is letting you come!!
Jojo: YAY!!!
Kustolf: Did I ever tell you guys I HATE kids?!?

Jordan: Knock it off, Kustolf, we need to get a move on. I don't want to get another one of Luja's rants about how we're always late!

Now we come to Callan and Davix, both still awed from Korr's incredible story told to them the previous night. Or at least Davix is.....

Davix: So how'd you sleep last night?
Callan: Very well, thanks.
Davix: Well I didn't....

Davix: From Korr's description, I realized that Helad must have thrown the 3 remaining Toa stones in the dessert before the ship blew up!

Callan: Are you saying you think those stones are scattered around the valleys?!?

Davix: Exactly. I plan to tell the team we're going on a quest to find them. Today. We can't spare any time since the word of these stones might get out. Who knows what might try to get their hands on them...
???: Unfortunately, your "quest" will have to wait.

Davix: Huh!?! Who are you?

Jordan: My name is Jordan, high officer of the Order of Mata Nui...

Jordan: And we know about your forgotten adventure...

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Comments

 I like it 
  September 7, 2011
cool!
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  June 24, 2011
very cool. ima gonna go read the other now. also, i may add another moc this morning.
  June 15, 2011
Pure is both a chick magnet AND a war-hero
  June 15, 2011
That lighting sword is actually so bad-ass :D
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  June 15, 2011
:D Brilliant! It's barely started and I know it's going to be amazing! Great work so far Callan! Gotta love Jojo :D Anway, great stuff, can't wait for chapter 1 :D
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  June 15, 2011
EPICsauce! New flavor! Also comes in BBQ.
  June 15, 2011
Very cool, hope you remembered that my contest ended today
Caleb Lang
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L. Nguyen
  June 14, 2011
cliffhangers! nice story! cant wait for more!
Caleb Lang
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 14, 2011
I wish some would say OBLIVIOUS!!! XD
Caleb Lang
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Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  June 14, 2011
Nice! Will you include Komart in these series? If he is, is he gonna do some stuff that will not only please Zoldac but also impress the ladies? XD
Caleb Lang
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Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  June 14, 2011
No, it's my job. >:D
Caleb Lang
Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  June 14, 2011
I guess there will be a rivalry between Komart and Cheesy Q. >:D
Caleb Lang
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Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  June 14, 2011
Actually, Komart does arrive at Spherus Magna one week after the reformation so it's good for the story. :D
Caleb Lang
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Chaos Master
  June 14, 2011
this comic is awesome, i'm telling ya! please make more soon.
Caleb Lang
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Cheesy Q
  June 14, 2011
Nice job, And, sorry Peter Crasher, but that's MY job. XD
Caleb Lang
Cheesy Q
  June 14, 2011
Actually, It's my job. >:)
Caleb Lang
Cheesy Q
  June 14, 2011
:(
Caleb Lang
Cheesy Q
  June 14, 2011
Guys, I'm just having fun. I think being a war hero in any universe would be great.
Caleb Lang
Cheesy Q
  June 14, 2011
My last comment on this. If Komart is officially in the series, a rivalry between me and him would be kind of funny, considering the thing I once said about us being opposites.
Caleb Lang
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S. :D
  June 14, 2011
Awesome, can't wait for the next one!
Caleb Lang
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Deltaghost55 formerly known as Matthew B.
  June 14, 2011
:O holy epic sauce I thought kustof was a bad guy I can't wait till part 1
 I made it 
  June 14, 2011
Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord Actually, Komart does arrive at Spherus Magna one week after the reformation so it's good for the story. :D
Hmm.....
  June 14, 2011
War hero is better than chick magnet in the Bionicle world, Cheesy. ;)
 I made it 
  June 14, 2011
Quoting Cody G Nice! I can't wait to see the rest! I'm guessing that Jojo is going to have a pretty big role in the rest of this.
Well, tell you the truth, Komart hasn't arrived on Spherus Magna with the others yet, so he can't be in the story. :/ Cheesy will play a role, but he's a war hero, not a chick magnet. Actually, Cody, Jojo won't be in this much, he's only a matoran and can't fight bad guys yet! :D
  June 14, 2011
Ha, everyone knows that Solunus is the real ladies man. Except that I REALLY don't like Bionicle romance. Haha
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  June 14, 2011
Awesome! Great chapter!
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  June 14, 2011
Nice! I can't wait to see the rest! I'm guessing that Jojo is going to have a pretty big role in the rest of this.
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  June 14, 2011
Wow awesome! I love it! ,Shadow
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  June 14, 2011
Pretty intresting can`t wait to see whats next.
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  June 14, 2011
wow. this story is really great so far i cant wait to see more.
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  June 14, 2011
wow, nice chapter. Looking forward to this. Agent Luja? Is that me, cuz if it is, YOU DIDN'T TELL ME AND FOR THAT I AM EXTREMELY happy! LOL Did you think i'd write angry?
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  June 14, 2011
Brilliant! I'm loving this! No, not McDonalds. :P Thanks for putting me in a...high position in your comic. More, more, more! :D :D :D
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  June 14, 2011
Really awesome, I can't wait for the next part! I like how you incorporated all those self-MOCs into your story too, really clever of you.
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  June 14, 2011
Great! This looks like it will be awsome!
  June 14, 2011
Man,you must really like Trade Marking XD LOL JK Great Chapter BTW
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  June 14, 2011
wow!!!!! great job!!!!! can't wait for part 1!!!!!
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  June 14, 2011
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant Sorry. I found this impossible to read through with all the apostrophe glitches.
My darn computer does that to every apostrophe. I apologize. If you read again, all has been fixed. :D
  June 14, 2011
Sorry. I found this impossible to read through with all the apostrophe glitches.
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  June 14, 2011
What!? why does everyone talk in copyrights and trademarks!?
 I made it 
  June 14, 2011
Quoting Deus Otiosus -Your world-in-danger quest will ahve to wait. -Why? -Babysitting. -- That's anti-climactic, hehe...
If I had my own Golden Comment award, this one would win it. Thanks guys! :D
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  June 14, 2011
But I want to find out what happens NOW! *sob sob sob* Nice story :P
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  June 14, 2011
-Your world-in-danger quest will ahve to wait. -Why? -Babysitting. -- That's anti-climactic, hehe...
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  June 14, 2011
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