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Star Wars The Clone Wars Episode 1 Part 2 - Evac on the Base
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Alright guys, I finally finshed the last part, Part 2, of Episode 1! So have fun reading it and hope you enjoy it like the last one :) Also, the paragraphs on the bottom go along with the top pictures so just a quick reminder. And one other thing, sorry for not having that great of pictures, was kinda in a rush this week. Anways, here we go:

Alright guys, I finally finshed the last part, Part 2, of Episode 1! So have fun reading it and hope you enjoy it like the last one :) Also, the paragraphs on the bottom go along witht he top pictures so just a quick reminder.

"Never use brutal force on others for that leads to the Dark side."


Separatist on the march! After the Jedi and Clones secured the abandoned Clone Outpost, the Mandalorian Sergeant and the Separatist are on their way back to secure a firm position in the Outpost for that the Separatist can rebuild their own Listening Post.

As time starts to run out, our entrapped heros must find a way to to defend themselves against the enemy until the Republic fleet arrives with reinforcements, or die in the hands of the Separatist..........





(A half an hour later....)




Kydan: Alright! Put that over there and that over there! We need to make sure that we have a strong defense against the enemy.



Commander Scare Crow: Sir, are you sure it was okay to destroy that Ammo building? We don't even know if we needed it or not.



Kydan: Sure I'm sure. Besides, if that was our only hope, then I'll give you the pleasure of saying "I told you we needed it" to me. But only at the right time.



Commander Scare Crow: Yes sir! And I'm sure that I'll be right!

Kydan: We'll see about that Crow....



(Meanwhile)

Tunic: So Charty, did ya get them working yet?

Charty: Just about...... (Tightens up the last bolt on the back of the Battle Droid)....There!



Charty: Alright, NOW I'm finished. Ready to see them change into our team?

Tunic: Ummm...... sure...... I guess......



Charty: Ok then, All droids! Activate!

(The Battle Droids start up and begin to deploy to "Active" Mode)



Republic Droid Commander 16-7832: Republic Commander 16-7832 and Republic Squad ready to recieve orders Commander Charty!



Tunic *In shock* HOLY KRAP Charty!! You did it! You really did it!

Charty: *Smirks and laughs* I'm a genius right? And the fun part is that I'm their new Commander AND they only follow MY orders only.



Tunic: Alright then, lets get on with it. Kydan said to send these droids to where CZ is and tell them that they were the only survivors in the Outpost and that the Republic Forces are here on Dantooine.



Charty: Got it! (Charty then repeats what Tunic just said to him to the Republic Battle Droids)



Republic Battle Droid Commander 16-7832: Roger roger! We know what to do.

Tunic:..........Well, why aren't they moving?

Charty: Thats the problem, it takes at least 30 seconds to start moving their circuits around. Just give them that until then. Now I'll go tell Kydan that we're all set and ready to go.

Tunic: Got it. I'll get Rigel to get into position. By the way, when did Lypel get back?

Charty: Oh yeah, he stayed at the shuttle until it took off. So he kinda just got back.

Tunic: Oh yeah, now I remember.



Kydan: So Charty, did you get the Droids working liked I asked?

Charty: Yep, They're all set and they're heading back to CZ liked you ordered them Master.



Kydan: Great! Then we're all set then. Go and get position yourself Charty and prepare for battle.

Charty: Got it!



Kydan: Peter! Get yourself into position as well.

Peter: Hold on one sec Kydan!



Kydan: We don't have time for this Peter!

Peter: Awww, but I need to wait until my upload is done. I'm trying to upload it on this new site called MOCpages!

Kydan: MOC-what now!?

Peter: *sighs* I'll tell ya later....



(The clock ticked and ticked and finally it became Midnight, but there was no Battle Droids nor Tanks or anything in sight)



Kydan: What the bloody h#!! is going on!? Those Droids should be here by now!



Kydan: Charty! You told me it was midnight that they were coming!

Charty: Well, they're suppose to come after the Droid Commander reports in. So maybe they didn't get there yet......or maybe they got themselves in trouble and never made it.



Kydan: *sighs heavily* I hope your right, or this would have been all for nothing.



(After midnight and several hours have past.....)



(.....Sparks finally spots something coming a click away)

Commander Sparks: General Tunic?

Tunic: Yes Commander Sparks?

Commander Sparks: Got something on scopes. Something is coming this way about 1 click away.

Tunic: Let me check then.



(Sparks hands Tunic the scopes to see what he saw)

Tunic:........ Oh krap!

Commander Sparks: What is it sir?



Tunic:........Run for it Sparks! And FAST!!!

Commander Sparks: Yes sir!



(About seconds way, a sound of tremor and shimmer goes out all around the base, saying that the enemy have finally arrived)



(As the Droid Carrier pulls up against the mountain wall.....)



(.....It deploys its batch of BD1s to the battlefield, showing that the battle has begun)



Battle Droid: Jedi scum! Surrender and we will not shoot you. If you don't apply, we WILL shoot you.



Charty: What do you think Kydan? Should we surrender?

Kydan: Thats an obvious answer Charty. I think we should them how we "surrender" by using this.



Kydan: Alright Peter! Bring it on out!



(Everybody moves to the side as Peter brings out an AT-RT to the front of the Outpost, taking its position)



Battle Droid: Ummm....... maybe we were too harsh, weren't we?



Kydan: Here's your "surrender" droids! Peter! FIRE!

(Peter opens fire at the droids with its massive firepower.....)



(.....Which destroyed all the Battle Droids and including the Droid Carrier)



(But suddenly, a fire from an unknown enemy.....)



(.....Shoots at the debris and speeder that was blocking its way through the Outpost)



(The enemy fires again, but only this time with an even more powerful blow.....)



(..... Right at the Jedi and Clonesm trying to take cover from the massive blow, but about failed)



(Kydan and Charty get up to see what shot at them and as for the rest, they are all knocked out unconciously after the walker was destroyed by that fire shot)



Mandalorian Sergeant: Heh heh heh heh..........Greetings Jedi. Its so good to finally meet you for the first..... and the last time. You already know what I'm gonna say, so I'll skip to the point. You are outnumbered 2 to 10 due to how much power this AAT has. I also hold the Comm Disk with me right now. So I'll say this once, surrender to us, the Separatist, and I will not kill you all with this. The choice is yours.



Charty: We will not surrender to you. We would rather die than give up.

Kydan: Charty!



Mandalorian Sergeant: Suit yourself. Pilot! Open fire with what leftover firepower we have left!



(Before they could lock on to them, Charty concetrates all his Force powers.....)



(.....Onto the AAT by picking it up, causing the Mandlaorian Sergeant to fall off.....)



(.....And slamming it right to the wall)



Mandalorian Sergeant: *Growls angry* (He pulls out his pistol) You'll pay for that Jedi scum!



(Charty suddenly drops to the ground after using all his Force power onto the AAT)

(Kydan walks up to Charty to see if he was still breathing after that. Luckily he was breathing still)



(Then all of a sudden, Kydan was pinned by the Mandalorian's Pistol, which was facing at his head)



Mandalorian Sergeant: *Breaths a little hard* You Jedi ruined EVERYTHING I worked on here for the Separatist! Now its gone! All of it! Now I'm gonna show you how it feels to loose something, by ending your life as a JEDI!!!



(Out of nowhere, before the Mandalorian Sergeant could shoot, a Stun Ray Bolt hits the Mandalorian in the back.....)



(.....And causing him collapse to the ground paralyzed)



Kydan: Man, you guys pick a time to be late, don't you?



Cloud Blaze: Heh, at least we're here now right? Alright boys! Get the others onto the Bacta table ASAP!



(A few minutes later after moving the debris...)

Kydan: So thats what happened huh?

Cloud Blaze: Yeah, those clankers put up a really good fight. I lost 5 of my troops after that. I also found some droids saying that they were Republic Droids, but I didn't believed them. Do you believe them Kydan?

Kydan: (Lie) No......not really......

Cloud Blaze: Yeah I figure you would probably say that. Ok boys! Take the wounded back to the Medical Cruiser and have them put into Bacta Tanks!



Cloud Blaze: Also, take that Mandalorian to the Venator Cruiser. I want him for questioning.



Kydan: Wait! Hold on one sec Trooper!

Clone Trooper: Yes sir.



Kydan: Hey Charty, nice job today.

Charty: Thanks Master.



Kydan: Oh, one more thing. After you get out of the Bacta Tank, we need to discuss about your.... "Force powers" and your..... "girlfriend" back on Coruscant, ok?

Charty: WHAT!? *whines*



Kydan: Ok Trooper, take them back to the Medic Cruiser.

Clone Trooper: Yes sir.



Cloud Blaze: Well, we should be heading back too. The Council wants us to report on our progress.



Kydan: Alright then. I should probably give the Council the Comm Disk while I'm at it.



Cloud Blaze: Yeah I think you should.

Kydan: Ok, lets going then......partner.



(They both smirk at each other and head back to the Cruisers to meet up with the others)


End of Episode 1! Next up: Episode 2!


PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT :D



Comments

  July 18, 2011
awsome story line :) 5/5 and thanks 4 commenting on my diorama.
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  June 20, 2011
This was great so was the first part, nice story but one thing could you make the pictures bigger please on your next one that would be great
Jedi/Dark Mercenary Kydan Witress
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Darth Lowe
  June 11, 2011
Really cool comic, i read the first one and it was great so i decided to read this and was not dissapointed!!!! Brilliant 5/5 :)
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  June 9, 2011
Quoting Jag . Good job, pics are a bit blurry though. :(
Yeah I know, my camera SUCKS! Trying to buy a new one though :)
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  June 9, 2011
love it!! can't wait for the next one!!!
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  June 9, 2011
Cool little comic!
  June 9, 2011
Good job, pics are a bit blurry though. :(
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  June 9, 2011
Very nice!
 I made it 
  June 9, 2011
Quoting Crazy Awesome Not bad, and i can see the plot thicken :) One piece of advice to give you is to try to put Lego pieces here and there, astray and messy, all around to give it a messy feel when in battle or just in an unkempt base. I think it gives more mood to the comic. Otherwise, I can't wait for the next edition!
Thanks for your advice Crazy Awesome! I was kinda thinking of doing that on my next comic. Make it look like a terrain-war zone. Almost giving it a WWII kinda feeling. Also, thanks for commenting :D
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  June 9, 2011
Not bad, and i can see the plot thicken :) One piece of advice to give you is to try to put Lego pieces here and there, astray and messy, all around to give it a messy feel when in battle or just in an unkempt base. I think it gives more mood to the comic. Otherwise, I can't wait for the next edition!
 
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