MY FIRST TOA!!!
About this creation
NAME: Pick
GENDER: Male
SPECIES: Matoran
ALIGNMENT: Good
OCCUPATION: gaurdian of the unknown stone
TITLES: Gaurdian, Teacher
ELEMENT: Lightning
MASK: The Mask of conduction
WEAPONS: Protoform blade and his sheild
STORY: Toa Pick has an unclear past. During a storm, toa Valrokn was traveling through the forest of Mata Nui, he saw a large tree get struck by a lightining bolt. he flew to the tree, making sure there wasnt a fire, but to his surprise, there was a baby matoran. With the matoran, lay a sheild, and a silver toa stone. Toa Valrok took the matoran to a letoran village. He watched the matoran Grow, and noticed how the matoran was exceptionally fast, and was a skilled fighter. When the Matoran (who Valkorn had named Pick) was finally old enough, Valrok told Pickard of his begining, and gave him his toa stone and sheild.
Pick became a legendary toa, having taken out three makuta. After traveling with his "brother" Valrok and their fellow toa, Brovahk, Pick found a toa stone inside of a makuta Temple. The walls aroud the fortress told of a prophecy, of a toa stone which would bring forth a knew era of justice. Pickard took the stone, but only to find out more about it from the turaga. the turaga had no clue what it was, but advised Pick to take care of it.
When Brovahk was assigned two matoran to teach, the unknown stone began to glow. the two matoran were of equal skill and honor, and the stone could not tranform either of the matoran into toa. Now only time will show if the stone will choose a matoran to became a prophecized toa.
him and Valrok
thanks for checking me out!!
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Is it too late? Sorry, just got back from camp |
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Not bad, but I don't like the mask too much. Seems a bit over-used. Try something different. Otherwise, nice work. |
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June 24, 2011 |
Alright sounds good, ill make an account on there tomorrow |
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Cheesy Q June 8, 2011 |
these are your first bionicles? These are fantastic! Even though the mask is inverted, A lot of people use that mask. I would try a different mask. |
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June 8, 2011 |
Quoting Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
WOW! Great job! I like his story, and I didn't know you could put a minifig hand in a nuva torso that way! Only thing that would at all need work is a custom torso! I REALLY like this guy!
He does actually have a customized torso believe it or not. Though there are inika pieces in it, it's almost entirely customized ( I even used shoulder guards for his ribs!!) |
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June 8, 2011 |
Quoting Ben Cossy
Sweet Self MOC! Really like the system greebling! Great work! The only thing I don't like is the Inika torso, but other than that, great stuff!
Thanks man! Well the torso is actually very customized, the inika part are only te upper torso and the waist piece. There are a lot of parts in the toroso, which I would show you, but I'm afraid if I take the shoulder pieces off his rings that I won't be able to get them back on!! Haha thanks for the advise man! |
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June 8, 2011 |
Quoting xXHyp3RLun4tiCXx .
nice!The only thing that might need some work is the hands and weapons =D
just trying to help=)
Ya I'm planning on buying some hero factory guys for new hands. And the sword actually look pretty good in my opinion. I had some better pics of it to upload but I accidentally deleted them :p. Thanks for the advise though! |
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June 8, 2011 |
Quoting Nathan Davis
The yellow minifig hands are great. Awesome selfMOC!
I'm glad you like it :D |
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June 8, 2011 |
Quoting Cheesy Q
these are your first bionicles? These are fantastic! Even though the mask is inverted, A lot of people use that mask. I would try a different mask.
Thanks man!!! Ya I used to use theadk in te traditional way, but I thought It looked more original this way. And I'm uploading Valkorn and Brovahk today so u can see both of them. :D |
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June 8, 2011 |
Quoting Cheesy Q
these are your first bionicles? These are fantastic! Even though the mask is inverted, A lot of people use that mask. I would try a different mask.
Thanks man!!! Ya I used to use theadk in te traditional way, but I thought It looked more original this way. And I'm uploading Valkorn and Brovahk today so u can see both of them. :D |
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June 8, 2011 |
WOW! Great job! I like his story, and I didn't know you could put a minifig hand in a nuva torso that way! Only thing that would at all need work is a custom torso! I REALLY like this guy! |
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I like it |
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June 8, 2011 |
Sweet Self MOC! Really like the system greebling! Great work! The only thing I don't like is the Inika torso, but other than that, great stuff! |
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I like it |
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June 8, 2011 |
nice!The only thing that might need some work is the hands and weapons =D
just trying to help=) |
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I like it |
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June 8, 2011 |
nice!The only thing that might need some work is the hands and weapons =D
just tying to help=) |
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I like it |
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June 8, 2011 |
The yellow minifig hands are great. Awesome selfMOC! |
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