Looking Good man! Great story soo far, gotta read the rest soon! I'm a little bit lost, but it's good as a beginning. 4 on 5

sweet looking good!

Great idea. Please check out these aswome mocs http://www.mocpages.com/home.php/38197

O_O what is going to happen?

Thanks, I sure will. ;)

Thanks.

Thank you.

cool designs and interesting plot

Nice! i like how you based it around your 2ndary self moc:D btw, would you mind checking out this?-if you would, tell me if it has potential. Im not tryin to get alot of likes, cause the pics are terrible. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/273279

Interesting mask useage.

Thanks.

EPICNESS!!!!!

Yeah, I know, but that's pretty much all you can do with Bionicle. Have you seen Ben Cossy's comic? I couldn't make a whole city like you, especially Bionicle scale. Plus I already have a LEGO system comic going on now. ;)

Thanks, this story is more featured around Nexus though and bringing...my other...self into here would just make it over complicated...maybe. I might bring him in later. ;)

Sorry I missed this, buddy! The past day was very busy! Anyway, looks great so far, funny how Jordan wasn't in this moc at all! :D

i like the mechs...but, the scene suffers! that s what i don t like about bios...the scene needs to be enormous! if you d build a small city at least, you d have a decent scene! it s hard for me to follow the story like it is! would you consider taking your bios to fig scale level? check my story work for reference! still...your mechs are plenty cool legofreak!!!

Sure thing. ;)

Yes, yes it will. :D

Thanks Noodles!

Oh and thanks for including me :D How the heck did I forget to say thanks for that before :P

Pretty sweet story! Nice cliffhanger too! Great work Legofreak! This is going to be epic :D

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

YEAH NEW STORY! it looks good, make more NOW!

And what can it be but.....THE EPIC NINJA TURTLE! XD LOL

XD!!!!! LOL

UGH.....COME ON COCONUT YOU CHEAPED OUT!!!! JK LOL XD

The cookie was LOL!

Very cool, sounds like a promising comic. Check out my new self moc if you have any spare time: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/273174

Awesome! Want more now!

Maybe... >:D

LOL! That'd be hilarious!...But this is supposed to be more serious. :P

Thanks.

I agree is there loose change in there?

Did he find some loose change in that cushion? ;) Nice story, it's rather well-written. Keep it up!

Cool comic, I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Thanks.

Awesome! great story!

LOL! Coconut isn't that bad, it's mint. O.O

...Who's the coconut?

:P Thanks.

Hehe...you'll see. Thanks. :)

OH my God it's an army of mutant corgies!!! No? Great story anyway ^^;

Nexus: Wha?...It can't be THE TV REMOTE just had to do that anyway great story intro thing

Congrats, here's an invisible cookie. XD

Dang! You guessed it! XD

Thanks. XD

You certainly did a great job on that - the colours and patterns are superb XD

Ha ha. Okay, I'll try to get one in this week. ;)

LOL! Glad you like it! :D I'll try to make more this week. ;) Thanks for commenting. :)

Okay, I guess I can. He already knows though. :/

Thanks.

LOL! Yeah, the furniture is supposed to be the main part of it. ;) Thanks. :P

Thanks!

Thanks! Should be up soon!

#1, Yes, I have most of everything ready for the next one, just got to come over the laziness. #2, Yes, I'll try to get the next one in this week or next week. #3, In this comic? Uh...I don't have you built right now. I'm sore on pieces so no, probably not. :( I can put him in the Galaxy comic though. ;) Sorry bout that.

Cool! Tell me when you start! ;)

Thanks.

Hmm...I need to see that. ;) Thanks!

Not bad! Story seems legit. Anywho. Rhaski Party deleted both our comments <.< Would you please tell him in the 4%, where he CAN'T delete the comment.

Cool!

I love your carpet and sofa :D Oh yeah, the models and story are great too! Good job.

whos, awesome!

Awesome! I can't wait for the next one! =D

Looking good! Three things, though; #1, are you doing your galaxy comics? #2, Are you doing another of these comics soon, and #3, provided I don't croak, could you put me in there?

i love whenua's mask like that! and cool name for the comic, mine is going to be called `war of shadows`

nexus somewhat reminds me of Blackbeard from POTC on stranger tides...

A Nikon Coolpix L18. It's my mom's. ;)

It wasn't a joke.BTW what kind of camera do you use?

I said it first and a joke is never funny a second time.

NO!In your dreams!

Thanks. :)

Ha ha! In your dreams!

Cool,when I first saw this I was like "Ripping truth.....about Destrin,beating Jordan....MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAH"

Nice.